Tales of the Northeast Spirit Mediums

I look forward to the author updating it soon. If I don't read it for a day, I feel like something is missing. I have read some other books but I am not interested in them. I only have a soft spot for this article.

Our Lady

This is a fairy family in the Northeast, or it is so superb that it is just written in a blind way.

1. There are so many typos that it looks like I can't type. 2. It doesn't work where it should be done, and it works hard where it shouldn't be done. Likeable characters are directly written to death and the protagonist has no reaction. An important turning point, such as establishing a fairy family contract with Mei Shuang, is only one sentence. This thing can be done at least for 10 chapters. If you don't, there are a lot of useless psychological descriptions. 3. The protagonist seems to have no psychological defense, and is always shocked by any big thing. 4. The protagonist acts as if he has never seen a woman before, and the author also acts as if he has never seen a woman before. Moreover, his vocabulary is pitiful. As long as the female character's role is played, the description is beautiful, and as long as the female character's personality is like Little Pepper. 5. Digressing from the topic. He digresses from the topic in every book. He doesn't know how to write a book at all. 6. There are many riddlers per capita, and there is still no level. Riddles for the sake of riddles are simply because the author did not think about how to write, but just wanted to write riddles like this. 7. The setting is inconsistent. The most outrageous thing is that the setting is even forgotten every other chapter. 8. The protagonist is useless. The protagonist plays no role at all in the plot of the whole book. The main plot is vague, and even the protagonist in the finale has no role. 9. I keep saying that the protagonist is talented, but in the end, the protagonist has to rely on others to solve every problem. Is this called talented?

I feel like the male protagonist is like trash. He talks a lot of nonsense. He feels good about himself, but he is actually trash.

The plot is complete, the ideas are clear, and the content is rich

The sentences are not fluent, there is no beginning or end, and the changes are too fast.