The Underworld Pawnshop

The first part is really good, but the second part is just a boring pretentious plot. I really can't stand it anymore. It doesn't feel like a horror novel, but a plot where every woman will fall in love with me. In that chapter, I look down on it in various ways, and then I just pretend to be cool.

The first two chapters are okay, but what happens after that is a dozen or so. It's seriously off topic. The girl fell in love with the protagonist without anything happening in the laoc article. It's really a laoc article, and it's so pretentious and low-key at the same time. It's really embarrassing.

Well enough

You've gone to the Himalayas, and you've made something so simple so complicated. And although the protagonist is busy day by day, does he want to live or not? It's really just baffling

It's not good at all. It's nothing if you don't have a clear idea.

Seriously off topic, there is a problem with the structure

A plot takes more than ten chapters to write. It's ink-stained, boring, and has no new ideas.

The connection and plot are average and make you feel childish.

You can watch it for ten minutes and change the book.

See what the comments are about! All commented: It doesn't look good! I'm speechless.