Martial Arts, Alchemy, and the Dao

Super pretty

I can only give you a negative review, it's true, whatever you wrote, everyone is trash in the eyes of Pig's Feet. You know in your heart that that Xiaoling made you do that in your previous life. If you look back and you don't solve it, forget it. If you delay it again and again, you will end up with such a big enemy. Every time he said he would deal with her, and then left it alone, it was easy to think of water as the word. But you have never told this woman what level she is. Later, he said that he disappeared for no reason, and then found the master's sword again. Please ask her how she found someone who was nothing for that Shaotian. Any explanation? I won't complain later, there are too many loopholes. And pig's feet are arrogant. Treat others like fools. That altar water, why should other city lords not want it even with just a word from you? There is only one in the entire dynasty in the capital, and it is almost drying up. How much is that worth? Don't have any idea?

Lu Xiaoling, look how much you have written about him? Where is your decisiveness in killing? Just to increase the word count? Leaving holes again and again. If it's a big enemy or a powerful person, that's all. If it's such an inconspicuous enemy, look at what you wrote.

Even if your father doesn't teach the exercises to outsiders, you, the author, are really unfilial to your parents.

The book is very exciting, but my girlfriend in my previous life did not renew the relationship.

Wonderful plot

If you are not decisive in killing, you will feel like a country bumpkin when the strong man is reborn.

This book is so poorly written that it's not satisfying to read. It's a cultivation novel that's too complicated.

Very good, continue@

It looks good, but some of the writing is wrong.