The Primordial Five Elements Immortal

There are just too many typos.

The protagonist is arrogant, unrealistic, hypocritical, greedy, and overly optimistic. Under the Heavenly Dao, the inherited cultivation technique can actually shield itself from the Heavenly Dao—it's laughable! The Dragon-Phoenix Tribulation remained in its birthplace, not even taking human form, neither participating in nor instigating the great calamity, doing absolutely nothing, yet it's…

It's a hodgepodge, mostly about what others did, as if the protagonist has nothing to do with the story. The author also constantly criticizes other works, without even looking at the garbage they've written.

The plot is chaotic, lacks a theme, and is just a jumbled mess.

Shui has such beautiful handwriting!

The plot was alright, though some parts were a bit bland and boring.

He already has several clones, and he's still thinking about dismembering his own body? He's crazy.