The One and Only Under Heaven

Good, very good. The author is very attentive and the quality of each chapter is very good. Although it is buried, it still has its own arrogance and does not follow the crowd. I have been following this book for a year and have now read it twice. The emotions are real and the characters in it are very real. I hope the author will not be affected by other people's words and not update too fast. Just ensure the quality. I will keep reading it! Come on, the author is great

First of all, I gave this book a reasonable rating. Because I personally prefer books in this area The main story of the book is that the protagonist Lin Yun was reincarnated in a small place. Due to his poor talent in his previous life, he was demoted as a sword slave. Then Lin Yun was reincarnated and was unwilling to be a sword slave. He worked hard to improve his strength through various channels. Of course, Lin Yun in the book is a bit scumbag, but he is not really scumbag. The main thing is that the plot is very realistic and beautiful. I don't want to judge it from my personal point of view. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I think it's pretty good. The further back you go, the better it looks! It's understandable that it's just slow. After all, the details are handled very well, otherwise I wouldn't read it if I just wrote a book. I hope you won't feel uncomfortable after reading my review. Thank you!

This book is well written and extraordinary. First let me talk about a few points that I think are good 1. This realm is clear and the name is quite nice. 2. The fighting is also described in detail, unlike other authors who cram in words. 3. The plot is very well written, especially every time Lin Yun goes to the secret realm to grab treasures, it makes my blood boil. 4. The characters are clearly described, especially the little ice phoenix, which adds a bit of vitality to the book. 5. Lin Yun's character is tenacious, able to endure hardships, and will do whatever he doesn't accept. He will beat you up if you don't like it, no matter who you are. As the saying goes, he wants to break the sky and break through the nine heavens! 6. There is also that ghost-spirit guy in the Xuanhuang Realm who wants to kill Lin Yun on the Road to Heaven. I think Lin Yun killed him at that time and I think this book is extraordinary. I originally thought he was Lin Yun's lifelong enemy. If that was the case, I would definitely give up. But the author gave me a surprise, and it was in place. . . I would like to give some suggestions to the author here 1. I think Su Ziyao can play more roles. This heroine has so few roles. She can't really wait until the next generation to meet. Let's give them an opportunity to meet. 2. I think it's good that you have more heroines, which may offend others, but I think I like their characters very much. For example, An Liuyan paid a lot for Lin Yun, and she didn't even ask him to give her a title when she slept with him. I was so upset. Although I'm a man, I still find it a bit hard to accept. Also, the author Yue Weiwei's writing in Sanshengshu was not very good, mainly because there is a saint elder Mu Ningxue (that's what she seems to be named). 3. This plot is a bit too fast. There are still four realms behind you. You are just in the Nirvana realm and you are already saying that the great world is coming. How can you beat the odds? It is impossible to go directly to a secret realm to achieve enlightenment and reach the holy realm. You can still delay it for a while. 4. What's more, although Lin Yun is number one on the third list and has great luck, it's too smooth. Lin Yun must be in danger. 5. As for the three fruits, is the author confused? Where did so many come from? Lin Yun has used it several times in Tiandao Sect. In fact, I suggest that it can be said that after I take a bite of a fruit, I enter the secret realm of three lives. Well, this explanation is more reasonable. 6. Isn't it a bit exaggerated that Tian Xuanzi weighed Donghuang in that year? There are so many holy places and so many great saints, but he can't defeat just one Tian Xuanzi. This is a bit exaggerated! 7. In fact, I think Yao Guang can be kept alive. This result is okay. One can resist Tian Xuanzi. Two, if he dies, then Lin Yun will definitely have inner demon obstacles on his way to the Sword God. But if Yao Guang died, Lin Yun would go crazy and destroy Tian Xuanzi no matter what. Even if Tian Xuanzi died, Lin Yun would have a deeper scar on his body. Xin Juesi from the Xuanhuang Realm gave him an indelible scar, so what if his master had a huge inner demon on his way to the Sword God? Okay, okay, this is just my opinion. The author would like to thank you for updating! Always support you! ! !

I have only read a few chapters, not much. The protagonist is a lawyer who has traveled to a different world. Logically speaking, lawyers should be extremely rational, objective and rational when thinking about problems. However, when thinking about some things, they are too idealistic, as if everyone should be nice to you. What is your identity? A little sword slave, what is Su Ziyao's identity? The most beautiful woman in the sect, she is good-looking, and the higher her realm, you feel that she has no friendship with you, so why do you think that she can smile happily to a slave? Why do you think that she can talk to you, a slave, and smile happily? Besides, every time you do things for others, they give you a lot of reward, right? How many people are envious of her, but you are still not satisfied, as if you feel that she owes you, and you are very confident that you already knew what kind of person she was when you first met her. Well, even if you follow your way of thinking, your so-called good person should ignore status, behave very kindly to everyone, and have a pure nature. Then how do you know if she is a girl with a cold face and a warm heart? How do you know the habits that she has developed since childhood? You just don't like to talk, you're very cold, you don't know, and you don't analyze. As a lawyer, you think about problems and only consider one side. How did you pass the law license exam? It's because you don't think comprehensively. No matter how good this book is, there will be stains, because his character is already like this.

How should I put it? The introduction of your novel has little connection with the main text. Since you said it is about eight evils locked up with one sword, you should follow this plot anyway. The word "eight evils" only appears after almost 200 chapters. If you just want to write a time-travel movie, you should not write the introduction to be fierce and exciting. This novel of yours is the first novel I have given a negative review. Other novels are bad. But it's not such a serious digression. Other novels at least have a lot to do with the introduction. Yours has basically nothing to do with the introduction.

I like this book so much. The author writes so well. I originally thought that Lin Yun would become stronger all the way in order to pursue Su Ziyao, and then the two would sleep together and fly together. But later, women appeared, and there were many twists and turns. Lin Yun also changed from being infatuated to a scumbag. Think about Su Ziyao. It's always hard for a woman of that status to share a man with another woman. I wonder if the author's mood has changed in some way. Xinyan didn't accept it at first, but happily accepted Liuyan. Maybe it's the author's scumbag nature! Let Lin Yun show mercy to a woman. But I still like this novel very much, it is passionate and not tiring to read.

The author's writing level is more than a little better than those on the ranking list. I feel like they are just trying to get a good rating. It's a good fantasy novel. Write it as a harem, write it as a pretentious essay, and work hard to climb up a little bit, only then can you have passion and arouse the interest of readers.

The writing is okay, but the updates are too slow, often interrupted, the promises made are not taken seriously at all, and there is no professional ethics. It has been almost five years since the author wrote about being the only one in his life. What is the meaning of five years? I don't know how many more five years it will take to finish writing "One Life to Be Sovereign"

Since the beginning of Chasing Immortals, I have felt that the author's book is good, and it ranks among the top three I have read (because it is not as good as Fenghuo and Mao Ni's books, and the same is true for the following comparisons, so don't criticize if you don't like it). The book is a good book for three reasons: 1. The protagonist has the most upright views and the best personality among the books I have read. I have a personal opinion on this (it may be that the character is relatively reserved and I don't see many faults), so that when I was chasing Xianwu, I became curious about the author himself. 2. It can be seen that the author wants to write well, and does not want to stick to one pattern like other books (see the next article). Therefore, it is varied in many aspects, and some aspects are eye-catching and innovative. 3. The reason why I say eclectic is because the author uses diverse words when describing the worldview and the strength of his warriors. For example, each warrior's rank is not like other books, which are one to ten levels. Instead, each rank has a different division, which is relatively novel and even eye-catching. But the shortcomings are equally obvious, for three reasons: 1. It can be seen that the author's writing level is above average compared to other online articles of the same type, but his writing style is occasionally beautiful and his performance is unstable. 2. Although the author wanted to write a good book, the popularity was still not good (but it was higher than other online books of the same type). When I was following Xianwu, I felt that the author's world view was too huge. He wrote about three planes in total, but he failed to grasp the protagonist's absolute status in each plane. Note that in the third plane, the protagonist has a slightly lower sense of existence compared to the huge world. In fact, it is not necessary. It is important to write each plane well, and there is no need to open up multiple planes. 3. Too much foreshadowing is not a good thing. If you don't grasp it well, it will be unfinished. Compared with Xianwu, it can only make people disappointed. But whether I am a fellow Xianwu cultivator or the one who dominates my life, I like them all. No matter what, I will keep pursuing them for the rest of my life. If you think the updates are too slow, you can check out the upper part of Xianwu Fellowship~

It's so long-winded and full of loopholes that it just teases the reader's life and makes people increasingly grumpy. Why do people who discover some private secret realms always spread the word? I wish that everyone in the world would know it. In a world where the strong are respected, even if you can't get it, don't let others know about it. But nm has countless people participating every time. It's been a fucking genius competition for several years. The idiot's realm is still rising slowly, and it is still called the "extreme realm". He can't spend more time acquiring divine patterns to perfect the secret realm of the sword box, and then hide in it and train for years to become a great sage. Then he comes out. As mentioned earlier, the Phoenix Emperor knows all the techniques, and he still wastes his time fighting for this and that with others. He can't hold back a fart for several days, and he digs holes and fills them...