Swordbone

This is the novel that I have been following for the longest time. The content is interlocking and there are foreshadowings in every place, just like the first The Second Master, which is really amazing. Panda's writing style is really great, every word is written after careful consideration, and even slow updates can be understood. Come on, always support Jiangu

The writing is really good. In this era when we have mobile phones and have read several novels, we have to write a book. We all use a template and change the name to create a new book. This kind of writing is really good. It is not like other novels that are mainly post-war and invincible. Each incident can make people think about it carefully. This is a book that requires time and effort to ponder. Mo's novels may be more depressing, but I think they are more in line with society. Not everything can be solved naturally. Although it is updated one chapter a day, the author does have more chapters than other authors, and he does not use a template and just relies on his own ideas. One chapter a day is enough. It is a good book and highly recommended.

In fact, the writing style of "Jiangu" ranks second among the more than a hundred novels I have read. Of course, the first is "The Manager". There should not be many books in the snow that can surpass it. The article is very clever in depicting the battle plot and strategic game. I am also a novelist, and I think it is difficult to compare with others in this aspect. However, the shortcomings in this novel are very obvious. 1. The combat level plot is very unreasonable. The protagonist is always invincible, and it is easy to meet a stronger one. Then you can write four or five chapters when two people fight. People who watch the four or five chapters are tired of watching the fight. They talk a little big at the beginning, and then they are beaten without the ability to fight back. They just wait for their own rescue. They never have the power to truly stand alone. Two thousand chapters have passed and they are still watching other gods fight. 2 The plot trend of each volume is too depressing. There is nothing wrong with writing about the feeling of rising and then suppressing. But for me, each volume has a very depressing beginning. There will always be a character that presses on the reader like a big stone, and then the final release is really not fun. It is actually a kind of torture for readers. Let's compare it side by side with the scene in Xue Zhong, in which Xuanyuan Jingcheng invites his ancestors to die. He wants to be strong but suppresses it first, but he can write a heart-stirring and refreshing heroism, and naturally lead to the sword sentence that is highly praised by many readers! Such suppression is effective and does not torture the reader. 3. Qing Yan's emotional line. I think Qing Yan's sister is the best character in the whole book. She moved me from the bottom of my heart. In the article, the prince said that a caged bird will naturally fall in love with the first person who rescues her from the birdcage. In fact, this was not the case. Ning Yi's motive for saving her was very simple, and he was honest and gentle in dealing with him. Such qualities moved her. Although she would be extremely grateful to the person who rescued her from the birdcage, if this person was a villain like Doctor Yan in the article, she would probably only be grateful. She is not only grateful and dependent on Ning Yi, but also appreciates and loves him. Her status as a rescued person puts her in a very low position in the relationship with Ning Yi, which makes it impossible for the two people in the article to get together. But I think this is unreasonable from the perspective of Ning Yi's character. He is obviously a very gentle and kind person. It can be felt in Fu Qingfeng and Hongying that he tried his best to save them, but after their deaths, the sadness he showed was insignificant. Because of this, when he met Qing Yan again, he had no reason to say that she didn't have a place in his heart. I can understand the first rejection. After all, Taizong was like a huge stone holding down the two of them. Ning Yi didn't even have the ability to protect herself. How could she respond to her feelings at this time and expose her to danger? But the second time, after he killed Taizong, when he was running around in the ice field, how much effort was put into saving him and how much divinity was conveyed. As the article said, Pei Lingsu's contribution was a sacrifice, couldn't it be that Xu Qingyan's contribution was not? Looking back at Ning Yi's attitude, the second time he entered the palace, he actually asked for divinity from Xu Qingyan in order to obtain the inheritance of the sword holder??? What is the difference between such a person and those who treat her as a commodity? The second time he went to cross the sea of ​​suffering, he actually didn't even see her face. Even a cold-blooded person like Xu Fengnian would let Ziyi look at him when passing by Huishan, at least to let others know that he still remembered her, but Ning Yi was not even willing to do such a thing and would escape forever. When he refused for the second time, he actually said that he had Pei Lingsu in his heart and there was no room for another person. Isn't this just nonsense? He and Xu Qingyan experienced Hongshan together, the fierce tide killed Taizong, and many lives and deaths. The two of them depended on each other and knew each other no less than he and Pei Lingsu. Why should he? He could actually say that in Changling, blaming others for having their hands full of blood. Ning Yi didn't say how many people she had killed. She told Xu Qingyan to understand the ways of the world, and he was the boss of the intelligence department. In the end, it became Qingyan's fault. He asked Qing Yan to treat him as a stranger. He didn't understand how harmful this was to a person who would be ecstatic even if his loved one walked around with him for two laps. He is indeed Xu Qingyan's light, but when a person discovers that the light he grasps in the darkness does not shine on him, just like a believer discovers that the god he devoutly believes in does not care for him, the world collapses like destruction. The only thing that supports her survival is the mission brought by her divinity. Ning Yi has always said that she and he are not from the same world. This was true before he had no power. But after that, he became the strongest Star Lord, with a sect he remembered, good friends and a very powerful teacher and senior brother. He had the ability to protect himself, but he still used these words to escape from a girl who spent her life to like him. The Sword Holder and the Light, if they are not from the same world, then each of them might as well become their own world. They have a common mission and a common goal, and they obviously like each other. The author just doesn't let the two people be together, and it also highlights Ning Yi's countless character flaws. Isn't this torturing the readers? Finally, I am not a very powerful person. The above remarks are purely personal opinions. It's not that I don't like Pei Lingsu, but I just feel that it's difficult to deal with Qing Yan. The author's writing is indeed good, but it's just good. Finally, I ask: Why don't you accept Xu Qingyan?

Very good. How can I put it? It's rare to see such a conscientious book. It doesn't play tricks. The plot is also very good and touching. The plot ideas are very clear and very exciting. Of course, this book is not recommended to people who read books without thinking and only read mindless and cool articles.

If there is no woman in my heart, I will naturally be handsome when I draw my sword. On the first page of the sword manual, forget about love. On the second page of the sword manual, except for the rich woman.

This book is one of my favorites. His writing, plot, and characters are all unparalleled and wonderful. I sighed, I admired it, and I cried for this book, all because I was moved and excited. However, this book must have a negative review, must, must, do you know, the author? Why don't you accept it? Xu Qingyan! Do you know? How uncomfortable you make me feel. My youth has grown up in your articles, and also in your articles... You don't know what it feels like to make me uncomfortable all day long? Since seeing Xu Qingyan, I think that if there is really a death penalty in the world, the author must die. You can say that it has cast a large shadow on my originally colorful heart, which has deeply affected my soul. I like this book However, I feel sorry for Xu Qingyan even more It's heartbreaking pain, Although she has nothing to do with me and reality...

I have read tens of thousands of novels and some classics of various genres. I prefer the rhythm and plot of martial arts, and this one made my eyes light up after reading the first three chapters. Although there are many in this genre, it still made me want to continue reading. The most surprising thing is that there is no unfinished ending, unlike other novels that are more straightforward for fun.

What can I say? At the beginning, this book felt amazing. It was clean and neat without being sloppy. Although there were many incomprehensible things in the length, I could read the "Gulong" flavor. Unfortunately, in the middle and later stages, the author may have become more "feeling" as he wrote, so the length of the book became longer and longer, and the plot became more and more delayed, leaving people with only one feeling after reading it - very tired. You are neither Mao Ni nor Yue Guan. The distance between you and them is like the distance between the first realm and immortality, so stop imitating them. To sum up, it is tasteless to eat and a pity to discard. Fortunately, the book is complete and you can jump to chapters as you like.

You thought you were writing about the sword of the Dragon Clan, and the meaning of the sword was hard to calm down. You thought you were writing about the thirty years of fighting against the sky, Hedong, and the thirty years of Hexi. Do you think you are writing about the chivalry of the princes in the beacon fire drama? You are nothing like you. Your senior brother Xu Zang paid the price for your growth, and your husband Mr. Donghaiye paid a huge price for your divinity. Miss Qingfeng liked your familiar feeling and liked you dying to save you, and foolishly thought you were a weak scholar like Ning Chen. Although Hongying escaped, he might not have met you and might have been captured not long after, and sent to the furnace to die in pain, but you saved her and gave her a light in the darkness, but a weak fire Light, extinguished without being able to cause anything, falls like her name, witnessing the beauty of the world but fading quickly. Miss Xu has done a lot for you, and you have done a lot for her, but you are the first light she has ever seen in the darkness, and you have also become her support. Although you have Pei Lingsu, you can politely refuse and no longer bring up this emotional line, but what you wrote is based on the premise of immortality and you need this person. Can't you have two heroines? You also write that two such good girls died because of you. You don't know what Qingfeng said. I am not Qingfengzi Feichen. How sad it is to write. You don't know what Yingluo said about me. I don't have a home. The place where Mr. Ning is is my home. I would rather you not write these two storylines. You can't write that kind of euphemistic storyline. Using a knife to make the protagonist remember deeply. What you wrote is a bit unflattering and uncomfortable, so The reason why your book is not popular is not because the plot of your book is too vulgar and bad, but because what you write is too realistic and realistic. Although what you write is chivalrous, it is more like a tragic emotional drama. The emotional line you write is simply confusing. You can write less but not bad. This book is difficult to understand, but the writing is okay. This negative review is the first negative review in the history of reading novels in my life.

The combat power collapsed again and again, and the demon world was so bullied. A Fei Ming can enter the demon world and kill at will and still come back intact. When Xu Zang was in his thirties, he would be able to hit the ceiling of combat power if he suffered injustice and suffered hatred and died twice. A Shen Yuanjun who had just entered nirvana could hurt the White Emperor who had the ceiling of combat power. After the death of the White Emperor, his two heirs and two volumes of life and death were taken away, but he obediently listened to Shen Yuanjun's instructions, and then he didn't want to kill Shen Yuanjun, saying that it was unnecessary. It is a miracle that the prince only mastered the law and the throne but could not control the Sui Dynasty with his own strength. Unless there is a shadow behind him to support him, how can he stay in the world? And if Xu Qingyan likes it, he likes it, so why do you do so much chirping? Author, there is a reason why you are not popular. Must score low