The Live-In Son-in-Law

I gave up after reading more than two hundred chapters. The heroine cheated on her in marriage (the condom was ready but the last step was useless), the heroine didn't even apologize and the hero actually took it back (read the ending). Haha, when I saw the male protagonist scolding the female protagonist, she might as well sit on the stage cleanly, I thought it was a sign of righteousness, but I didn't expect that hundreds of people started licking wine... This kind of author can write whatever he wants.

The plot is attractive, the character descriptions are delicate, and it makes people feel immersed in it. The most important thing is that it is logical. It is much better than other short-term novels. It is beautiful.

Lots of nonsense, no clue

The male protagonist is a super invincible scumbag. He sleeps with one another and says he loves the female protagonist. In fact, sleeping with other women is not ambiguous at all. Then he throws it away after sleeping. He is also a soldier. It makes me sick to death.

This novel feels like the author is very tangled in writing, and many chapters are a bit inexplicable and convoluted.

This book is very well written, I hope the author will continue to write more works

I feel uncomfortable watching the main character licking a dog

A rare good article with high literary attainments

There are too many pitfalls at the beginning, and many people lose interest after reading it. The writing gets better and better afterward, surpassing 90% of the works. I hope the author's next work will be more exciting.