Period: From the Start, I Return Home After Leaving the Army

It started out very well, with a good plot. I originally wanted to give it a positive review, but I was afraid that something would go wrong later on. Sure enough, after reading Chapter 115, I felt that the author himself was a loser. The protagonist is a time traveler. It is not said that time travelers must have three wives and four concubines, but there is definitely no shortage of women. If you want a dedicated relationship, you can find one you like. Just looking at women who are beautiful in appearance and have violent tendencies, to be honest, the protagonist has lost the face of the time traveler, or the protagonist is not worthy of time travel, and is a waste wherever he is. Being dominated by a woman makes me really low. It's a pity that the heroine is a failure in a very good period story.

The writing is excellent, the subject matter is accurately selected, the beginning of the plot is eye-catching, and it is full of freshness. It is like a gust of cool wind blowing on your face on a hot summer day, and the pleasure of drinking ice-cold soda🥤🥤🥤🍉🍉🍉Qimao has only read 3 books of this type and writing style😎

The front is really not bad. Later, she became a virgin again, and was disgusted by all kinds of people and treated as a wronged son. It doesn't matter if the emotional line is slow, and then I write about various beauties. The protagonist can't move when he looks at the beauties, but he doesn't stop. He gets a job when he sees a beautiful woman, and various descriptions describe the protagonist's yearning for women, but he sticks to the bottom line. His girlfriend is a female tyrannosaurus, and he is engaged but not engaged. The protagonist lives with YY beautiful women every day and looks forward to getting married. I don't understand what you want to express by writing this?

What a mess.

It takes too much to explain, and it's so long-winded~

Around 1980, did you have a mobile phone and could you play with your hands?

It's a bit bland, and it's also more wordy.

Too bad

I don't want to write a comment anymore

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