Qi Men Xiangshi

The negative reviewers probably only read a dozen or so chapters. The protagonist is still a child, so of course it needs to be written in a childish way, but there are a lot of typos.

The final ending is not perfect. The little fox dies and the fate of those around him is not explained clearly, but the plot is okay.

What goes around comes around. Encourage people to do good and follow the right path. Great book!

The first point about this book: its writing style is very childish, and it also tells the protagonist's experience from childhood to adulthood. I advise fellow Taoists that such a book is either a masterpiece or a piece of cake.

The writing is good, but there are too many typos

The ending is not perfect, the little fox dies, the endings of the others are not unclear, and I don't see Zhao Ying regretting it in the future, but overall it's good, thank you for your hard work!

Such childish writing style, boring to read, abandon the article

Probably a newbie I believe you can write better

The beginning looks a bit like a composition

Very pretty