No Trace in the Sky

I wonder what kind of person the author wants to write the protagonist into? If you want to write about Cultivation, there is too little space about Cultivation, the protagonist's Cultivation ability has not been improved, and his strength is too weak. If you want to write about war, the protagonist has sacrificed so much, but in the end he has no power of his own. Then he ran so far to Xiqiang. When the young master of Xiqiang died, Dong Ning became the princess of the young master of Xiqiang. He just traveled thousands of miles to send the woman he liked away. What do you ask for? The key is that the protagonist's face is bloated and covered with scars

It would be better to change the title of the book, the content is well written.

The first few chapters were okay, but by the eighth chapter it was too watery and filled with explanations. Do you want people to read it?

The best thing about this novel is that the protagonist Chen Hai knows that Long Ding and Zuo Er brought him to this world and gave him the opportunity to be reborn and cultivate. That is to say, to let him complete the task, he has the responsibility to help Long Ding and Zuo Er complete the task. Unlike the protagonists in other novels who are not grateful when they get a cheap deal, opportunities can be given to you or to others. Since the opportunity is given to you, you should be grateful, get opportunities from others, eliminate disasters for others, and only after completing the tasks entrusted to you can you strive for your own happiness. You should not put the cart before the horse.

Seen it before, see it again.

Reading this book requires you to remember it well and read it carefully, otherwise you will have a hard time reading the relationship between the characters and the like.

The writing is good, but the article is not on topic and after 500 chapters, it will be thousands of miles away from the topic.