Xinguan Road Business Road

The plot is bland, with few exciting highlights; the language is bland, with mostly abstract and professional speaking skills, not vivid, and lacks the flavor of life; the characterization is not in place, the characters are scattered, and the characters appear abruptly. The personality and image of the main characters are not clear, and most of their faces are vague... In short, so far, I feel that this book is average.

Bigger, worthy of being the first generation of platinum writers

Before the male protagonist was reborn, he was a small businessman who was neither good nor inferior. After his rebirth, he immediately became a saint and had a saintly mentality. He did not seek revenge. No matter how frustrated he was, he still wanted to give in to profits and drive local economic development. Forget it about the heroine, if the environment doesn't allow for ghs, she will simply die. There is no plot and the characterization is not outstanding. The whole article is an introduction to the background of the times and instructions for various industries, with Che Luolun talking back and forth. This book is only free for the first picture, but I can't read it even if it's free. . Slipping away. .

The official road and the business road are the real worldly affairs, the officialdom and the shopping mall. It is still about rejuvenating the country through industry

Zhang Ke started with DVD players, Xiao Liang started with health care products, and Xiao Liang started from a lower and more difficult level! I look forward to Xiao Liang's different development!

The protagonist of the bigger book has the same heart as the Holy Mother. If you want to see the decisive killing, you can escape in advance.

Why do I think the plot is very confusing and there is too much nonsense?

After many years, the author finally released a new urban work. Xu Si's old fans come to support

Whether it's Rebirth of the Official Business Road or Steel Tycoon, I enjoyed reading both of them. The writing is powerful, the language is rich, the characters are exquisitely drawn, and the storyline is fascinating. I have read the last two books more than once or twice. Basically, I will go back to read them whenever I am short of books. I support Gengsu Da.

I've read more than a hundred chapters and it's so tiring! The overall feeling is that there are too many characters and it's too confusing. I want to write about everything but can't understand anything! The character traits are vague and the plot is protracted and lengthy! All in all, it's a mess! The author may want to write a novel as long as the Three Kingdoms, but he obviously does not have the ability to control it! Since you write online articles for a living, you have to adapt to the market and the needs of readers, and don't write a bunch of obscure and incomprehensible words. You lose face as a writer!