Light Industry of a Great Nation

The author has rich professional knowledge in shoemaking and business and trade, and has a deep understanding of human nature. Although the work is long, it does not feel cumbersome. Unlike most works that are written for the sake of being long. On the contrary, many places are full of fun and interesting, which makes people unable to stop watching. The theme of patriotism is clear, most of the characters in the book have distinct personalities, and the narrative also has a sense of the times. Although we know that this kind of time travel is just a carrier, there is strong logic in the development and presentation of the entire story, and it makes people feel that it should be like this. Of course, there are also some laxities, such as the fact that the male protagonist's academic qualifications are still difficult to explain after several changes. Overall, it can be called a masterpiece among similar novels! Hats off to the author!

The subject matter of light industry is very good, but if you don't have common sense, you just write cool articles honestly. The college entrance examination was only resumed in 1977. I graduated from technical secondary school in 1979. Identity cards were implemented in 1986 and were introduced in 1979. The chapters of the book keep repeating. It's very annoying to read.

The writing is not bad, but it is anachronistic. The descriptions of the protagonist and other characters and the background of the article are basically the thoughts and opinions of the early 1990s. The pre-shift meetings and loudspeaker broadcasts that were the two major features of factories in the early 1980s were not mentioned in the article at all. It was still the old society of waiters and shopkeepers. There is no trace of the legacy of the Cultural Revolution.

The poison was tested and he died from the poison. Price chaos: The protagonist's leather shoes from 1979 cost 60 yuan a pair. When the store manager besieged the car stall, the civil servants went to buy a pair for 100 yuan every three months? The era is slightly different: it doesn't feel like 1979, but more like 1985 The writing style is average: the sentences are fluent, but there are many typos. I don't know why. Sister: This kind of trap is really annoying. In those days, just one beating would be enough. If it doesn't work, just two. I feel that the author does not have rich social experience. Many details seem to have been told by others and guessed by himself. I really want to write well but have not experienced it, so it is a bit weird to read. For general reading, there are many books to read.

A good novel worth reading.

There are too many typos. Words with the same sound but different meanings have different meanings. I hope the author can correct them. I have some suggestions.

The article is not rigorous. (1) There are too many typos. (2) The preface of the price does not match the postscript. A pair of shoes is said to be 60 yuan at the beginning, but it becomes 70 yuan for a pair at the end. (3) In 1979, the title "guanguantonggu" should not have existed.

The writing is good, but there are too many typos and it makes me a little tired to read.

Very nice and refreshing article.

Before Chapter 60, the writing was simple and down-to-earth. Around Chapter 60, when I went to the city to sell shoes, I think there was a high probability that the author had changed, or that the writing had been streamlined. Suddenly the style of writing became chaotic and turned into a martial arts style, the hotel became an inn, and the titles also changed into weird titles such as waiter, shopkeeper, guest officer, etc. Then he forcibly changed the style of realistic writing. For example, the driver is Comrade Xiao Zhang, the driver, the name, the position, and the combination of gay titles. Reading a series of them really makes people lose interest in reading. The style of cool writing comes out, and other readers also expressed doubts in the chapter comments.