The Unconquered God of War

I am Shennong, I have tried hundreds of poisons without dying, and I despise the poisons in the world. Now, Nong Guan has returned from this book. Every time I think about the medicinal properties of this book, I feel very tight in my chest. I know that Nong Xiao underestimated the world. This book can harm Nong's life. Fortunately, Nong can resist this poison for a while, so I wrote this book to tell all Taoist friends: Leave it alone. It is enough to burn incense, comfort farmers, and encourage farmers.

The sentences are fluent

How can I put it this way? I couldn't stand it at the beginning. It felt like the author had created a world by himself, and then all the members were weak. Even the cool articles couldn't be counted, and no one had any brains (I don't know if this was the effect of the author's show or if he was eaten while playing Plants vs. Zombies). The plot is very suitable for my eight-year-old cousin to watch. He said he liked it immediately after watching it and said that he also wants to become Yuanlong Zhanzun in the future.

Very good

The front is okay, but the back is not good.

The front part is very vicious. The male protagonist was framed to serve as a soldier in the most dangerous battlefield. When he came back, his wife slapped him and called him a white-eyed wolf. His sister slapped him and called him a white-eyed wolf. Anyone who treated the female protagonist badly would be killed, and anyone who stopped him would be beaten. Super intelligent, except for the Zhou family and the heroine, everyone can see that the hero is respected by Yuanlong Station, but they don't know.

The donkey's lips are not the horse's mouth

What the hell is this? It's written like a science fiction film, and there's no real talent at all. If you don't know how to write, just find a place to end it! Stop writing!

The first part was pretty good, but later on the city turned into a myth again, and I started to feel like I was driving randomly. Moreover, the second part was too complicated and became boring and unappealing, so I gave up decisively!

It was exciting to write.