The Ultimate Little Immortal Doctor of Peach Spring

Nice

It looks great, but the update is too slow. Can it be faster?

Good to watch, exciting plot, wonderful writing

It's too wordy, too repetitive, doesn't focus on the key points, and only counts the number of words.

The supporting character's IQ is not enough, and the supporting character is forced to show off. In short, if you don't write a silly supporting character, you can't highlight the characteristics of the protagonist.

Let me just say it straight. Even though I have only read the first 100 chapters, I don't understand why the male protagonist has such a strong inheritance and has to be a licking dog. Although he likes the Tang girl, others always treat him as a poor boy.

Very well written!

Too verbose, the more I read it, the more annoying it becomes.

Wonderful writing and smooth sentences

All in one day! Momojijiji