Horror Woman Village

I feel like the main character has a problem with his IQ. Now that I have seen it, he has no defensive IQ at all. Reading a cool article can make me happy. Reading such an article only makes me feel depressed, which is even more uncomfortable than reading the weak son-in-law who just comes to the door.

I just don't recommend reading this kind of classic novel. I am an old bookworm. I only started to like reading this kind of novel when I was about 15 years old. I haven't read it since I was 15 years old. I will give you an introduction in the early stage. I will definitely become an immortal in the later stage. I still watched this reading video on Bilibili. I ended up reading twenty or thirty chapters. It might have been okay in the past, but now it just treats readers as fools. What I hate the most when reading novels now is the kind that makes people dumb. I can say it, but I just won't say it, otherwise it's just to forcefully lead the plot down, which is a very silly way of writing. The advantage is that the atmosphere in the early stage is good, but there are too many disadvantages. Except for the atmosphere in the early stage, everything else is nonsense. Your novel is not even as good as other people's novels. At least it is enjoyable. Your novel is not enjoyable at all. You have to say it is weird. , Once the short paragraph in the early stage is over, the rest is pure nonsense, and weirdness has nothing to do with it. If you want to talk about cultivating immortals, he is not an orthodox cultivator, nor the kind of supernatural cultivator, or the kind of semi-cultivated immortal. This is the first time I see anyone else writing, but you. As a result, a series of novels about him being a weird, supernatural, ghost, demon, cultivating immortality, reincarnation, etc. Were thrown together. Well, your novel is destined to be a short story. You set the scene at the beginning to be unable to get out, or to be in a women's village? Then it is destined not to last long. I feel that you started cultivating immortality just to force the plot. You don't know how to get back to it, so you can only start with cultivating immortality. I have also communicated with many editors. As my former editor told me, writing supernatural novels is very weird in the early stage. Anyone with ideas can write almost the same thing. It is just a matter of the strength of the writing. Many people just come up with an idea and write it directly, but they can't come back later, or they just have to make up the word count. Then the best way in the later stage is to focus on cultivating immortals. Of course, I am not talking about the kind of Feng Shui cultivating immortals, which can be considered a major school. Your story is purely based on a small supernatural story. In the end, you couldn't compile it and wrote it directly as cultivating immortals. Some people may have thought about the beginning and the end, but it is just a small supernatural story and cannot be written too much. In order to make up the number of words, it has been turned around in various reincarnations and cited in the world. All in all, I personally don't recommend it.

It's mainly good to watch, and the ending is also very good, very warm and happy. I was relieved after watching it, hahaha! ! 😌❤️

The main character is a fool. He is also a love brain, who can stand this?

Very good novel

The ending is bullshit

Writing for the male protagonist is like a straw bag😌I feel like I'm dead

Very nice

It was quite interesting at the beginning, but the ending was a little hasty.

Great reversal