The Ruthlessly Beautiful Legitimate Daughter

I originally just watched it for fun, but I didn't expect that I would be fascinated by it. It's so good. I thought Su Wei was the male protagonist at first, but I didn't expect that Yan Xiyin is the male protagonist. Xi Xiaoyin is so coquettish, so cute! 😍, The heroine is sassy, ​​and she is a rare beauty, unparalleled in intelligence, flirtatious, charming and desirable. Ah, what a great book this is. The child is also super cute, handsome, beautiful and attackable! It's amazing. It's so beautiful. I have been willing to read it since the beginning. It's so comfortable. It's so good. I'm not here to cheat. I sincerely comment on this book. It's really amazing. Maybe everyone has different ideas from Wo, and that's understandable! Anyway, in my opinion, this book is really good! I hope you can come and take a look. I'm looking for some completed books to read in the recent book shortage! I recommend everyone to come and see the duck~😘 o(*≧▽≦)ツ ~ ┴┴

I didn't leave the negative review maliciously, I actually read it and it was a serious and responsible review. The author really needs to work harder. 1. The writing style really needs to be strengthened. For example, the scenes described in the book after being struck by lightning during the tribulation are all "scorched on the outside but tender on the inside, with hair like a chicken coop, and tattered clothes like a beggar." The description of the embarrassment of the characters or the dilapidation of the scene is also like a beggar or a beggar's den. 2. This is a pure romance novel that just borrows the fantasy background of cultivating immortals. It can be discarded if it depends on the traditional cultivating immortals genre. The descriptions of the fighting scenes and training scenes are very simple, and the plots and plots are also very childish. 3. There are inconsistencies in some storylines, and the rationality of some plots needs to be scrutinized. 4. The ancient ferocious beast of the male protagonist and Bai Ze of the female protagonist should know a lot of things according to the author's setting, but they cannot say it because the male and female protagonists are not strong. However, during the development of the story, these two are described as knowing nothing like the male and female protagonists. Many things have been inferred or guessed, but the result is that "if there is no evidence, I won't think about it" and "if I can't understand, I won't think about it." It's very speechless. If there is evidence, then it is not speculation and precaution... 5. The structural framework of the story is very large, but the author's current ability is not enough to support it.

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The content and style of the story are particularly rich, but the ending feels a bit open, that is, you can think about their descendants later. And the content of the protagonist is particularly rich.

It's quite good-looking, the female protagonist is quite sassy, ​​smart and decisive in doing things without procrastination, the male protagonist is also very good, the content is very rich, and the children of the male and female protagonists each have their own characteristics.

The male protagonist can't catch up with the female protagonist, and the female protagonist also hates the male protagonist, so I think this is average. It's a little bit interesting. Just change the male protagonist's identity to that of the human world. Can the author change it? Thank you 😊

In fact, this book does not write about the essence of this novel about fantasy and immortality. I feel like he wrote it as a romance novel. The plotting and plotting are not very well written. As for the description of the scene, I feel like the author doesn't even want to describe it. I can't say anything. What happened to Bai Ze? I felt like there was something wrong with my brain afterwards. I'm confused myself. The various frameworks of this article are very large, but the author's writing style is not enough to support this framework. The author is finished and is still very immature. Don't follow other people's writing methods. Otherwise, if you don't write very long, you won't be able to finish writing this kind of article. You need to work harder! Neutral rating.

The heroine has been clamoring to establish her own power, but when she went to the Sphinx Tomb, she only took medicinal herbs and elixirs, instead of putting away all the magic weapons. Even if she didn't use them, she could keep them for auction to make money or for future subordinates. The author made the heroine's vision too narrow, and the framework was too big, but could not be expanded. Many of the structural plots were contradictory.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh? The content is a bit dirty, I really like it hahahahahahaha

There are some very touching plots in it