Game Descends: I Build a Territory and Become a Landlady

I think it's just so so. I saw that 85% of the book was written just over four months after arriving in another world. The subject matter is good and novel, but the writing was too detailed and it felt verbose. This infrastructure novel can also be regarded as a business war novel 😂 There is no male protagonist so far, so sisters who like no cp can try it.

This book is generally very good to read, but one thing that is not very good is that every time there are new residents, the territory has to be introduced again, so this part is quite repetitive. Other places are very beautiful, and there are many places that are exciting to watch, so there should be a second part, right☺

Yes, the heroine Zhou Bai thought that the mysterious Game Adventer had chosen to exchange all her houses for the territory of the game world, and became a lord. She hid her identity as a lord in the territory, secretly involved the residents of the territory, and later became the village head of her territory in an open way, thinking that she would be the official in charge of the territory for her when the lord was away. In short, it is a coming-of-age story. In it, not only the heroine grows up, but also the people who have traveled through the Blue Star are also growing up. They defend their homeland, expand their homeland, absorb the local residents, and the territory develops step by step, becoming one of the best territory stories.

Looks good! It would be better if you could write about how to save Blue Star when you come back. I want to read it!

The subject matter is very novel, but there are too many repetitive contents. Every time a group of people visit Hope Village, they have to write several chapters about how shocked they are by the development of Hope Village and how delicious the food is. When I saw 58%, I feel like I have read the food introduction dozens of times. Every time I introduce a few new characters, I have to write about how attractive they are. Every time I move to another territory, I have to write about how attractive the school is. I really feel exhausted. The main plot is extremely slow, all because I write it repeatedly.

Good looking, exciting plot

It is a really good and complete novel. The main plot is complete and rich in content. In addition to the protagonist, other people are also flesh and blood. It is about a community. I really want to see them return home. It would be great if there is a follow-up biography.

Good looking, strong woman without cp. I haven't found a meal replacement for the time being. Disadvantages: 1. There are typos + confusing word order, not too few 2. The timeline is a little messy. It is the war-free period after the territorial war. I wrote it many days ago, but ended up writing it back later. There is also the heroine's father who went out to find the limestone with the goblins. It took a long time to write about it, but then he wrote it for a short period of time (it seemed like a day or two? I forgot). 3. Data errors, including errors in rankings, equipment levels, number of territory promotions, etc. 4. The number of water words is too obvious. When you advance to a territory, you basically have to write everything once. If the system asks, you also write everything once. Many of them can be abbreviated + streamlined. 5. There were also errors in names and noble titles. The heroine hid the identity of the lord. As a result, there were several meetings where Bayer and the dwarf (I forgot what they were called) called Lord Lord in front of everyone 0.0? Although there are not many shortcomings, they can be ignored based on the good plot. There are too few novels about infrastructure construction. This is actually the second time I have read it, so I read it more carefully.

Is this a group portrait? Always describing passers-by. I don't understand that he is obviously a lord. But he keeps describing others. When developing a territory, shouldn't the protagonist also need to upgrade? She has been staying in the territory, and I haven't seen her go out for two days. She has been sending missions to the guards to kill her. I feel like I never get to the point! The writing is pretty bad!

This is a novel that I stayed up late to read. I really like this type of novel, but unfortunately there are too few that satisfy my appetite. This should be the second one.