I Picked Up an Immortal to Be My Husband

I would like to call the male and female protagonists the first ones to be moved by themselves. The advancement of the plot basically relies on the male and female protagonists to use their imaginations, and the sentences are not fluent, which makes me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder.

It was good at the beginning, but the heroine started acting like a virgin again, and the hero was still so stupid and incomplete after his rebirth. The villain keeps doing things, but he's still not dead. Tired.

Not interesting

It doesn't look good. Although I can't bear to give it a low score, it really doesn't look good. After reading a few chapters and flipping through the back, there is nothing to read. Like most of the comments said, it is long-winded and inexplicable. You should write emotional novels. This fairy tale is not suitable for you. What the hell? It's all narration, and there are no human beings in the whole sect. Everyone is vicious, selfish and shameless. I hate this setting the most. With such a former sect leader and his wife, how could there be such a hateful and evil bastard of a sect.

The heroine acts like an idiot

The heroine Mary Sue