The Big Brother Bit His Little Darling Until She Cried, and the Yandere Tycoons Outside Went Mad

I don't understand why the author made the female lead suffer so much. Didn't you love her the most? Why make her suffer so much? 😥 I've really had enough. The female lead is basically always crying; it's so despairing from her perspective… How could her so-called "brothers" be so cruel? This seems even more vicious than bullying; even her enemies would forgive her. 🌚 I'm begging you, please be kinder to the female lead! She suffered so much in her past life, and I feel so much suffering in this one too… Is this really love for her?

It's so beautiful! ᗜ֊ᗜ (A series of seemingly random characters)

The writing is a bit messy. For example, in chapter 47, weren't they eating together in a private room at the hotel? Why did the second brother tell Yun Chaosui to take a bath and say he would take her to find the eldest brother? 🧐🧐🤔🤔 And what about the real heiress seeing her prepared gift being casually used by her second brother to wipe his hands, and there's no follow-up? 🤔🤔

Nice!!! The characters, all of them crazy and eccentric, are vividly portrayed. Their crazy personas are well-developed. Want to see some dark room play? Hehehe, they all go crazy! What bothered me was that a small solo character was bouncing around for so long, it was annoying. And what happened to Yun Qian, who was supposed to go abroad? It just fizzled out. You could have at least changed the villain, why let that thing linger for so long? Were the three brothers just for show? Aside from that, everything else was great, highly recommended! :!!!

Chapter 42: Lin Shuyue's arm is pierced by a steel bar and she is waiting for surgery. It was already difficult to stay calm when the villain suddenly appeared and grabbed the stretcher, but then he tried to pull the steel bar out of her hand to threaten the female lead. Were all the medical staff around just going to watch? And the female lead survived 18 years in an orphanage, right? It's been mentioned before that she suffered a lot of bullying; it wouldn't make sense for her to not have any cunning. She just borrowed 200,000 yuan to save her life, and after being so easily frightened, she's about to give it to the villain? Couldn't she at least use a little bit of wit? And then there's the third brother who, when angry, attacks the police, punching them twice. Isn't that a bit too rational? Later, the eldest brother arrives to save the day and just shoots them twice. Is there no law here? (Horrified) Shen Du's feelings are also ambiguous and lack any foreshadowing. The female lead relies on him, trusts him, and then falls in love. The author's ability in this area is really weak. If they didn't know how to write emotional development, they could have written it so that the love started before the story even began. The way it's written now just makes me think that Shen Du is very casual, even a bit like a white knight. It makes me feel that this emotion has no foundation and is just a protective instinct that could dissipate at any time. The villains also made me wonder if this was a 26-year-old book. Did they really need to resort to some vulgar plot points to drive the story forward? Both the female lead and the villains loved to use the word "dirty" to describe girls' bodies, and the older brother did the same. What exactly was dirty? Does being violated automatically make someone dirty? Shouldn't the perpetrator be the one who's dirty? This constant promotion of these values ​​made me very uncomfortable. All the male protagonists here seem to have superhuman abilities, especially the third brother. I've lost count of how many punches he's given in the meager forty or so chapters I've read. The author's writing style fails to capture expressions and movements, making it a nightmare to read. When he's excited, it's described as "all the blood in my body is pumping up," and when he's scared, it's described as "all the blood is flowing backward, and my vision is going black." It makes me feel like every emotion is expressed in the same way, without any nuance. I strongly suggest she take some further studies, find some good input to hone her writing skills, and tighten up the plot. The character development is too slow and even a bit off-track. Right now, the female lead gives me the impression that she relies on others for everything. Even if she has a desire for freedom, she completely lacks the ability to achieve it. At one point, I felt that her future growth would only be a Truman Show story supported by these people. I've read plenty of stories where the most popular character forces the female lead to suffer, but I haven't read one with this pure, old-school feel in a long time. Sigh, the only two things keeping me reading are Lin Shuyue and the second brother. If the second brother is also this kind of ridiculous character, I'll seriously consider quitting. (Hopefully these words will offer the author some advice, and hopefully allow them to adjust their writing direction later.)

Fire Orchid, Fire Orchid, Fire Orchid! Third Brother hit a policeman and gets arrested, while Eldest Brother shoots a policeman in the hand and the policeman has to respectfully ask for permission. This kind of absurd plot is rare; it made my stomach hurt from laughing so much. I definitely need to try it!

It's so beautiful!

It's so incredibly good! (I'm urging you to watch!)

It's so incredibly good! Please, author, update soon!

It's absolutely awful. I'm speechless. How can the male lead be so depraved? He never treats the female lead like a human being. I want to see forced love, not female abuse. Is this even a male-oriented novel? How can someone like this be the male lead? It makes me incredibly angry. I'm truly speechless. How bizarre.