The Game Is Coming: Qingmei's Account Was Cleared at the Beginning, and She Burst into Tears

Although the villain is still a bit witty and often screams, after all, it is to advance the plot, but the protagonist takes revenge on the spot when he has a grudge. It is still good. I hope there will not be so many minions in the future who keep making fun of the protagonist, and write some villains with depth and charm. Another problem is the mutation evolution, such as the big stomach bag and sword shield. I personally feel that you can just look at it in the comment area. What you see in the article feels a bit weird, but the one like that skirt is good. All in all, this book is okay, there is nothing too bad about it. Finally, I hope the author can do more, but it's not enough. (Personal views, you can put forward your own opinions, don't comment if you don't like it)

The skill design is a failure, the cooldown is ridiculous and it burns blue. Which good game has a 10-point attack initial skill, Fireball, with a half-minute cooldown? It takes a full ten days and ten nights for the Summon Protector to cool down when opening a shield. Isn't this the cooldown for a nation-destroying ultimate move? ? He was bragging about such broken values ​​[Qin Yao was silent. This attribute, this skill, is simply the best of the best. It is quite silent. It is indeed "top quality". "Top quality" is dead.

Yes, there are very few good books that can be found in Seven Cats. I hope the author can keep going.

There are too many bad jokes that make people physically uncomfortable watching them. There is no need to copy bad jokes, just write them normally. Fei has to play bad jokes, it's not interesting at all...

The writing is good. As a novice author, it's already great to be able to write like this! The protagonist is not a holy mother, nor superior. I will not offend others unless others attack me. I must attack hostile forces with heavy blows! I think Sword, Shield and Milk Dragon are very well written, and it's nice to be a little light-hearted and enjoyable in a different world environment! Come on, author! … One more thing I would like to add, the author, you have written too little! Finished reading it in a moment! 😥

I hope the plot structure can be optimized🥳

It's very interesting, with new twists on the same old routines. It's worth a read. The author will update soon.

The characterization of the protagonist is quite unsuccessful. As the protagonist of the rebirth stream, he was killed and tortured to death in his previous life. After his rebirth, he didn't feel angry at all. Apart from destroying his account, he didn't do any other things when he saw the woman. He even stayed there for more than 200 chapters before she was offline. Exposing precognitive abilities to the country is said to be an attempt to obtain resources without hiding one's strength. But I don't see what resources the country has given me. Even the role of the country is extremely low. If I beat someone after my strength is assessed, why should he be a minister if he can't arrange such a small thing? ? ? While talking about protecting the protagonist, it turned out that he didn't even know that he had gone to another province? Sending a gold coin and slowly saying "Send it over in two days" is not a big brother. The country must give things the highest priority, and even saying "in two days" is said. This kind of thing must be at a specific time and place. And at the same time, he said that the protagonist's information should be classified as top secret and should be kept secret. As a result, everyone in the world knew it. What's even more outrageous is that the whole world knew it, but Mu Qianyuan didn't know it. Just force it to show off and slap you in the face. And having so much information and so many advantages at the beginning, in the end, it didn't have much effect. In terms of strength, he is only a little stronger than others, and in terms of level, I can't understand it. The protagonist is only at this level, and the others are over level 40. How can I forcefully write an opponent? He also said that he went to learn ancient martial arts for the sake of the heroine, but when he fought, he couldn't beat that crazy girl from Sakura Country. There is no description of martial arts in the whole process. To hit someone is to raise your finger to create a life mark. When fighting a national war, it must be written about how tragic and complete the defeat was in the previous life to reflect the role of the protagonist after rebirth. What's going on? Everyone in China uses up their points, and only people from other countries keep them? Do you want to be a high-level official? Doesn't anyone else think there's something wrong with exchanging points for gold coins? Is it still up to everyone to redeem? ? ? The same happened during the National War. The points gap didn't seem to have much effect, and the protagonist didn't make much difference between the others.

Before rebirth, I was a dog licker. After rebirth, I changed to someone else to lick the dog.

How should I put it? The front part is quite boring, but the back plot is pretty good. It's pretty good in this category.