Second-Hand God of War in Online Games

Feeling very burning

This is a game, a game with hundreds of millions of people online, but the protagonist is always being hunted by several gangs. Is he a fool? You can have a group of people, so why don't you also recruit a group of people? Doesn't it mean that you don't have the financial support behind you? But don't forget this is a game.

Too bad, disappointed

It's well written and you can see the author's intentions, but there are a lot of typos.

In fact, it can be seen that the author is a novice. However, the plot is a bit incoherent, the data is not rigorous, there are many loopholes, and the ending is too hasty. It can be seen that the author wanted to write some plots that readers would not expect, but in fact, too much forcing also dragged down the coherence of the plot. If this is the beginning stage of writing a novel, the author still has a lot of room for improvement.

After reading about a hundred chapters, the author actually writes well, but...,, The main character's IQ is worrying. Not to mention the background of being deceived in the first chapter, he probably borrowed several times five million, and then sold the house and everything, and left with a debt of five million,,, and then, he thought that the new game would start over with a new name and develop silently, but in the end, the market was completely blown up, and then he was hunted down by the game and killed in an infinite loop. The key is still one person, his friend. I also tried to hide it, and my gaming friends were afraid that it would hurt others. (To put it another way, I don't know if I can cooperate with other big guilds to make money and sell equipment to help each other, and some people are not afraid of anything. It's just a game. If you don't like it, just do it.)

It can be seen that the author's writing style is good, the character description and emotional expression are also quite good, but I don't understand the positioning of the protagonist a bit. 1. Second-hand God of War. Does this second-hand mean killing people and selling equipment for money? But, you are always fighting against hundreds of people alone, which makes me feel like I am playing Zhengtu. . . 2. Regarding the protagonist's talent, the Holy Blacksmith, and the NPC favorability of 90, these are really helpful in the early stage. However, after the conflicts with the Mad Dragon, Handsome Guy Gang and Hongtu Hegemony later, it feels a bit useless, and the NPC favorability is used a lot. I don't know if the author has played a game called Black Desert. Your settings have some similarities with this game, such as Refreshing NPC favorability will trigger hidden tasks, and there are some sub-professions. There is no blacksmith in Black Sand, but players can also make their own equipment. There is also an equipment enhancement system. The protagonist can also build his own equipment in the front. I still remember a silver gun. After there are gold weapons in the back, maybe I didn't read the book carefully, so I basically can't see the description of the blacksmith's talent, as well as enhancements. . . 3. Regarding the emotional scene, Lin Ying should not be considered a cuckold. After all, he came here to plot against the protagonist from the beginning. I feel that Kuang Long is the one who has the cuckold plot. . . Lin Ying was arranged by him. . I didn't understand the peach-filled plot. I played the same routine again. From the current point of view, it shouldn't be arranged by Kuang Long, right?

Very good

In a word, long-winded Two sentences, so long-winded Three sentences, really long-winded Four sentences, I've never seen anything more verbose than this😃😃😃

It's just an online game, darker than officialdom! What fun does the protagonist have while living? It would be better to die.