Evil Insect God

The protagonist seems to have the mentality of a weakling, compromising so easily. Even when someone tries to kill him repeatedly, he'd be long dead by now if it weren't for the protagonist's halo. He knows exactly who it is, yet he still tolerates it. I hope the author improves this, and doesn't drag everyone down with their intelligence and emotional intelligence.

The plot is alright, but there are too many typos. I hope you can improve it!

Did this author never sleep with a woman in his past life? And he's a bottom, he goes limp at the sight of a woman.

It looks nice, but there are just too many typos. I hope the author can seriously correct them.

The two female leads are Ji and Bi. The first one seems to owe the male lead something, giving her everything is her due. The second one is arrogant and causes trouble, hindering the male lead's cultivation—a form of slow murder. Since they can't deal with her directly, they have to poison her to make her wish she were dead.

Can you please stop digging holes? You even misspelled my name! Unbelievable!

What kind of nonsense is this? So many typos, and the girl is instantly smitten? Is it just his personal charm? Indecisive?

It's alright.

The story started off well, but the rest became rambling, childish, and lacked substance.

It's well written, except for being too naive about women.