Lord's Survival: Conquering from a Ruined Courtyard

Water, the ultimate water, if nothing else, the final challenge at the end of a month only took 24 hours in total. I wrote from more than 600 chapters to almost 1,000 chapters. Can you believe it? It turns out that the 1,000 chapter is not even a month old in the real world. There is a lot of popular science nonsense, which is of no use to put it bluntly, and there are a lot of people who can repeat the same thing more than a dozen times.

I've been reading for a long time. There are more than a thousand chapters. All of them are introductions to equipment and skills. There are so many introductions to preparing energy-saving summoning characters. I only write about this aspect of farming infrastructure. I always feel that it is not interesting.

Why should I give a negative review? In fact, I can't bear it. Really, I have read more than 1,200 chapters and have been able to keep up with the book. It has been very difficult to keep up with the book until it ends. I am the author, and now I am more and more immersed in my own world. For example, a prosthetic leg is a fake arm, and I choose to press it on my body. Don't all the supporting characters and most readers look at the protagonist without thinking? But I have to say that the author's depiction of some scenes and time is very accurate, the writing is very detailed, the plot has ups and downs, and the world view is also laid out, very, very big. It will be very helpful for the protagonist to upgrade and expand in the future. Unlike some books, where the data becomes top-notch in one place and immediately opens a new world view, this book is gradual, but if the world view is too big, it will be released again. A situation arises, that is, the places he writes are often confused, such as west-east of such-and-such place. Things that seem unreasonable to us also appear from time to time in his books. But I would like to emphasize that his writing is very good. He worked hard to keep the values ​​and attributes within a stable range. He wrote the attributes and skills of most items in great detail, and he had his own ideas and opinions on many things. Many of the things he said, if I change the title of the book, it would be famous quotes. I was very surprised to see such a novel, but it cannot stand up to his worldview. Although the yearning is greater, the geographical location is not perfect, and some satisfactory pits cannot be filled. There are even situations where you write out the reasonable and unreasonable situations in your imagination, and then let the supporting characters in the book and readers like you and me forcefully ignore the protagonist. Yes, there is another thing that the protagonist obtains, which increases his power by 0.01 For every enemy killed. The amount, but it will lose ten times the wisdom of 0.1. If you think about it, there are four major attributes in total. I don't know why the protagonist keeps stacking the strength attribute, and the author said that this equipment will be used frequently in the future. Does the author want to write the protagonist as a protagonist whose strength has no upper limit and reaches positive infinity, and then has no IQ and wisdom attributes, and all the behaviors far from zero are completely controlled by the author? So I rated this book as not good-looking. It's really because I can't say that some of it is plot, and I really can't stand the author's thoughts. However, this book is indeed very well written. If you can read it without thinking, without thinking, it will indeed be very enjoyable. However, if you think about it for a moment and regain your own brain, you will feel that the writing is unreasonable and even a bit anti-human. I don't think you feel bad about it. Look, some people say that since you think it's not good-looking or unreasonable, just don't read it. This is actually not true. I appreciate most of it, and I criticize a small part. The readability of this book is still very high, so I chose to continue reading, otherwise I have never reviewed any book. For such a long book review, I hope that everyone will have their own thoughts when reading it, and not let the author fall into a self-centered whirlpool. We all think the book is good, so we are willing to review it. If the book we are willing to read is not good-looking, it means that the author wants to attract attention, not just a bad review. This is not the original intention and intention of everyone. I believe that many readers will have the same idea as me. I can understand the different opinions and disagreements, so let's not persuade anyone. The last sentence I say to the author is that I support you. I hope you can continue to write this book and prevent it from ending. At the same time, you can also confirm to the author some minor flaws and problems I raised, including geographical location, ideological concepts, and streamline some introductions and processes. I sincerely hope that the author can make post-event remedies and changes to some of the unreasonable places. After all, I have written more than 2,000 chapters, and corrections in the main school will definitely affect subsequent writing. I also hope that by the time I read more than 2,000 chapters, the author can make the protagonist and supporting characters become what readers expect. I hope that this stage of more than 1,000 chapters is just a setback. Come on, author, we all believe in you (๑⃙⃘´༥`๑⃙⃘) 𐂐

I watched the post-production a few years ago and it was a bit watery. I didn't expect it to be free here. Just give me a good review.

It was written in ink, and half of one chapter was just water. It was almost 400 chapters and the plot was only a little over ten days old. . . . . .

It was quite good. I watched it a few years ago, but it was too little. I stopped reading it after reaching more than 700. I hope it can be completed with a word count like Lord of Ashes and Knight's Journey without leaving any regrets.

When I first started developing, it was more innovative and nice to look at, but it was still watery. A bunch of data was written out, but there wasn't much actual effective content. I just skipped the skills and the like later. It was too long-winded, and the later it felt, the more watery it became. Originally, it was difficult to fight demigods, but with the power of chaos in the back, I almost said that I could fight gods casually. The writing of the fighting in the back was not good, so I gave up.

How can I put it, the plot is still good, but it is too watery, and the number of data words is too much. A small roadside copy has at least seven or eight chapters, and the big plot has at least dozens of chapters. The plot of the challenge for a few days at the end of the month is just a few hundred chapters, God...

Flooding Jinshan

So watery