Peerless Dual Cultivation

Duan Yu has many beauties, and Duan Yu is quite close to them in daily life. In the era when polygamy was allowed, Duan Yu would have avoided provoking them in the first place. But now, Duan Yu still has a good relationship with them. In this case, he can't let them down and pat his butt to be a "gentleman".

I thought it looked good at first, but after all, there were typos and few other words, and the rest was a complete mess. I couldn't write the characters' names clearly.

Too many typos

It's not good-looking at all. The male protagonist dies for a woman and he dies together. Several comments said that if there is something wrong, it should not be sent out. Can you say that there is something wrong with that word?

I just wanted to ask, are you tired from writing a book? The person's name is always written in other books, because I didn't see this person from the beginning and left it blank. Readers are a little bit 😇😇😇

The writing is messy, even the name of the protagonist is wrongly written, there are many typos, and there is no hint of male or female.

The plot is exciting and interesting, and I give the author a big thumbs up!

The author asked, are you dictating and the secretary is typing? Then your vision is too bad. What is the protagonist's name? Duan Yu for a while, Yang Xiaodao for a while, and that name for a while! What did you do!

Not bad

It's a mess. One moment Duan Yu is written as Li Xiaodao, and the next moment it's another name. The other names are also messy, and the preface doesn't match the postscript.