Carefree War Venerable of Another World

Although the ending is a bit outrageous, the anger and beauty in the later part is still quite interesting to watch. Since I destroyed my meridians and practiced martial arts, there should be a chapter about nirvana and rebirth. It was confusing to see them regain their strength at once. Moreover, there is no small scene between them and the protagonist in the Earth chapter. Do we have to think about it for ourselves🤣

This book was originally called Phantom of the Otherworld, why did it change its name here?

This book is quite good, but not many people have read it. However, it still has some unsatisfactory shortcomings. Here are some suggestions: ① Pay attention to some names of people, realm names, etc.; ② In the second half, compared to the previous part, the plot develops too quickly, especially when you become a god at the end, there is not enough foreshadowing and no detailed explanation; ③There can be more extras in the Chinese chapter; ④ There can be more scenes of developing relationships with the heroines in the emotional line. If there are too few, it will not be able to reflect the fullness of the characters and lack some sense of reality; ⑤Yaoyu could have more scenes, especially after he turns into a human form. To sum up, this book is good, but there is still room for improvement.

The only thing I feel bad about is typos. The plot is okay, I quite like it. Come on author! ! !

Phantom of another world, you know

As a bookworm for ten years, there are very few books that I can read from cover to cover.

The book is very good. I have read it for the sixth time.

I've read a few chapters! The summary is just a joke, a lot of nonsense...

It's not good-looking, it's all pornographic.

Be eclectic and live spontaneously,