Versatile Mage: The Void-Stealing Gloves

The protagonist's mind is like a maze, with his left brain attacking his right and his cerebellum striking his cerebrum.

Everything needs explaining; it's like taking a dump and then having to explain why there are corn kernels in it.

It doesn't feel like a novel; it's written down whatever comes to mind, the content is bland and uninteresting, and it inserts a lot of explanations. It feels more like an interpretation of Full-Time Magister than fan fiction.

The content lacks excitement and immersion; furthermore, it lacks the originality of fan fiction.

A lump

It's basically an unfinished project.