All Beasts Become a Phoenix: the Miracle Doctor and the Crazy Concubine Fall Off the Horse Again!

A personal opinion has been made. Leveling up is slow, Chapter 600 is still a great mystic master. Too much narration and explanation. The progress is very slow. Some things can be written in fifty chapters, but I have written a hundred chapters. It's understandable that the female protagonist treats the male protagonist as a child when she first meets him as a mini-child with a dull emotional state. After all, she hasn't developed feelings yet, and the male protagonist is still young and can't handle the fact that the male protagonist has grown in size. It's a bit incomprehensible that she still calls the male protagonist a son (son) when she acts like a normal man and does some ambiguous behaviors. The heroine is low on vigilance, a bit silly at times, and feels like she's trying to catch a duck. Sometimes fighting without the tension feels like playing house. The writing is too detailed at the beginning, and it feels like there is a sudden brake at the end. But I still like it when the heroine deceives people and curses them, and I also like Ji San's character.

In fact, the writing was okay at the beginning, but the more it went on, the worse it became. The relationship between the male and female protagonists was too far-fetched in the later stages, and the character of the male protagonist was not very good later on. He was too lenient towards the female supervisor, was so possessive, and did not regard the female protagonist as an independent individual at all. Moreover, the writing at the end was too slow. There were many battle scenes to be written for one thing, and the writing was not that passionate. Anyway, I just couldn't stand it, so I gave up.