The Male Villain Who Is Quick to Wear Is a Bit Skinny

No way, just listen while playing games I finally couldn't stand hearing 89 This male protagonist is so scumbag Everything was fine before Later, let the heroine drink poison Just to test whether the heroine loves him or not Will you drink it? What kind of serious illness is this? ! You haven't even confessed your identity, so you just want to strike first. Feed the poison first and then see if the heroine drinks it. If I don't drink, I don't love you It disgusts me. This kind of love Normal people can't understand it, if it weren't for the heroine's mission Who would be stupid enough to drink it knowing it is poison with no solution? I left. I thought it would look good if I could write more than a thousand. It's ugly.

1. The selection of characters is very novel, with strong women and weak men. The female protagonist has her own opinions, and the author's writing style is pretty good. 2. In some chapters, the character relationships and the story background are a bit complicated, which may not make people want to read it (note that these are some chapters) 3. The ending does not clearly explain the true identities of the heroine and the male villain. It can be said that there is no real ending, only the ending of the last plane, so it is unfinished (if you are confused about the last plane, you can read "The Three-Body Problem" by Liu Cixin)

Love this novel so much! °˖✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧˖°Wonderful

The writing is good, but the painting style is touching. The male protagonist is as seductive as a fox, and the female protagonist is domineering and coquettish. The system is very prodigal. She kisses, hugs and holds hands too frequently. The words are almost the same. The relationship progress is written very crudely, without much transition. They only write plot progress or love words. It seems that if I dote on you, it means you know I love you. If I say something to coax you and indulge your extreme intimacy, it means you love me more. If there are too many words, it will seem a bit absurd.

The novel is very interesting, but the ending is a bit too hasty. Where did the villain brother and sister come from? Have you met me? ? . ?

The first part is very exciting, the heroine's character is cold and strong, but in the later part when Xiaoqiang can't get in touch, I feel that the heroine's character is a bit weird and a bit weak. Wouldn't it be better if the final chapter could be returned to the heroine's original world?

Okay, but the ending is a bit messy

It's just okay. I didn't say how bad it was, nor how good it was. I hope the author will continue to work hard ^ω^

The logic of the story is too poor!

Is this the end?