Immortal Is in Trouble

Really good-looking, recommended! The narrative rhythm is great, the setting really pokes me, Fu Chi and Shi Ying have a great sense of fate, and the characters are all very distinctive. Keep up the good work (PS: Did Shi Ying's name on the profile of Da Da be typed wrong? 👉🏻👈🏻)

What Shi Ying loved was Xie Fuchi's sobriety, and he had also complained about the heroine's sobriety. He always believed that he was not her only choice, and believed that the morality of the world in her heart was always more important than herself.

The writing style is great, especially the description of some details. It was really amazing when I read it, and it really touched me. It's a very original world view, and the reading experience is very different. I was shocked at first by the many ups and downs of the plot (sometimes it was a bit difficult to read, but of course this was my problem, not a big problem), but as I continued reading, I found that it was normal. Each character has his own selfishness and desires, and has entanglements and trade-offs. I really like the character of Fu Chi. She is confident and flamboyant, unobtrusive but does not hinder her ability. She is always open-minded, always brave and strong. In fact, when I first read the ending, I felt a little disappointed, but everyone has their destiny, and the rest is a relief. It's a pity that I'm so cold. Don't be discouraged. Keep working hard.

It took me two days to read this novel. Overall, it's pretty good. The story has a clear logic. However, I think this novel could be renamed "The Growth of the Heroine"? 😢😢The male protagonist really loves the female protagonist. As for the female protagonist, she has some reservations. At least in her heart, the male protagonist will not be the first one. She is really sober and not love-minded. However, although I am the female protagonist, I still feel that this is too cruel to the male protagonist. In the early stage, I didn't say anything. It's not that there is any misunderstanding. It's just that the two of them always take it seriously and make their own decisions. They are so similar at this point, I cried to death 😂😂😂 I didn't feel that the love between the male and female protagonists was that earth-shattering. The interaction between the two was neither too much nor too little. It was just that the words and sentences were too precise. I almost couldn't understand what was being written without reading every word. It's true that my skills are limited. It would be perfect if it was easier to understand. The novel is still good, good luck to the author!

It's particularly beautiful, and some of the details of Shi Ying's confrontation with Fu Chi really touched my heart. The writing style is really great. It's very sad when it's sad and sweet when it's sad. It's beautiful! ! After reading it, I still feel a sense of loss, not enough 😭️😭️ There are a lot of misunderstandings between the two parties in the second half, but it doesn't affect the whole thing very much😊️😊️It's a pity that not many people read such a good book, please give it a try! ! 😘️😊️

The content of the article is relatively rich, and the male and female protagonists are also good. The overall feeling is relatively good-looking.

It's beautiful. I like Fu Chi and Shi Ying very much.

It would be great if a TV series could be made

I feel that the plot setting is OK, but the author's description is too convoluted and covered with layers of gauze. The wording is gorgeous but not concise, and a bit awkward, making it tiring to read.

The author's writing style is very good, and the characters are vividly described. I don't think the heroine Fuchi's thoughts are wrong. If everyone is so selfish, who will save the common people? It is obviously great love that some people interpret as selfishness, but it is also invincible. Then there is the male protagonist Shi Ying, who is far-sighted and strategizing, and can play the whole game well. The male and female protagonists both show their teeth and must retaliate😏, but one is on the surface and the other is hidden in the heart. In the early stage, the male and female protagonists were very lonely, but fortunately they have each other behind the scenes, as well as relatives, friends and babies. , But the author did not write it, but it must have been foreshadowed. Then there is Ranxue. He really loved his sister and was a super good baby, but it is a pity that he died. Friends who read this novel should not hesitate, I highly recommend it. Finally, I would like to say when the author's next novel will be released. I saw your comment and I am looking forward to it🌝