Cautiously Cultivating Immortality in a Strange World

It looks pretty good from the beginning, and the imagination is pretty good... The back part feels like the same as the matryoshka dolls, with new scenes and new women. I've seen about a dozen of them halfway through, and the writing is average, and I'm not very good at writing about battles.

I have been a bookworm for many years and read more than a thousand chapters in one go. I thought I should write a few words. The layout of the whole book is grand yet delicate, each link is intertwined, the scenes are changeable yet surprising, there are many characters but no facial expressions, it has a sense of detective work and is fascinating. I am very grateful to the author.

In fact, the writing is okay, but it is really too slow. Chapter 70 has been put on the shelves next door, and I have only practiced Qi for the fourth level. It is not that exciting. Caution is prudent, but I always get seen through, which makes me feel lonely.

It's too long. The logic is not clear. The plot is not obvious. I forget what I have gained. I have lost my cultivation and become a mortal several times. It is better to just write it to death. If you are in danger, come here. The author is simply a masochist.

Become an ox and build an immortal, make talismans, refine qi, and make elixirs. The same old template for cultivating immortality. People are also very holy. I was born to have a hard life, and it's boring as hell.

This book is no less than Immortal Ni, a rare masterpiece that I have seen so far!

There are Taoist monks and they are recruiting flowers and weeds everywhere. It's boring, this is it, or else it starts with a harem and ends with a harem. You have a wrong outlook on things.

The protagonist is so cowardly that nothing goes smoothly. There must be an accident on the way to another place. He must have to explore the ruins for various reasons. Then there is an accident in the ruins. He knows that the strong luck spell has severe backlash, and he is not worried about improving his cultivation. He still commits suicide by using the strong luck spell everywhere, asking others to wipe his ass and save him. Xiaocao has overdrafted several times because of saving him. Moreover, the author wants to show that the protagonist is cautious, but the writing is too slow in some places, which greatly affects the reading experience.

Where to be cautious? The scene where Kuku was seen through, like the part where he killed the disciple of the sect leader, was not purely the author forcing the plot. It happened to be the first time when Hong Ying was possessed by Qi and he was in the late stage of Qi training, and there was no weird atmosphere.

The early preparation, expansion and closing are all very average. Long stretches of the plot are like a wheel rolling over and over again. The characterization of the characters is not natural enough and leaves no trace. There is always a feeling of stiffness and vividness. After a certain stage, the author seems to have enlightened and no longer sticks to the clichés. The plot scenes he sets out to lay out begin to have a profound foundation. Hiding the characters in the events will actually It shows more unique qualities. Generally speaking, it is getting more and more exciting. It is a pity that the rating has not increased. The protagonist's unlikable personality may account for a large part. It is both necessary and impossible. This is also a trait in itself, but I always find excuses for myself to complete this task. If you want it, you must be proactive, subjective, and recognize and admit it to avoid being awkward. The original plot is frustrating enough, and people are not satisfied.