The Peerless Tang Sect's Sun and Moon Glory

The writing is pretty good. The heroines include Ning Tian, Ye Guyi, Wang Qiu'er, Orange, Wei Na, Meng Hongchen and Zhang Lexuan, but in fact only the first four have more roles and are the most loved. The plot is not stupid, but some holes are still left unfinished, such as Ice Emperor. The Snow Emperor and the protagonist had an endless quarrel at that time. In the end, the Snow Emperor became the martial spirit of the protagonist's daughter. The Ice Emperor seemed not to be mentioned, and the Ice and Fire Eyes of Ice and Ice were also not mentioned. However, the flaws are not concealed, and it is not bad.

The quality is at the top level, and its second design is also very consistent with the original work. From the early stage to the later stage, the protagonist's personality changes greatly under the influence of each character. Among them, the emotional description of the female character is also remarkable, and will not be brainless. Moreover, it does not commit the common trend of driving high and going low in fan fiction. It's just that I felt that some parts of the plot were too wordy and the word count was too high.

I remember that a protagonist in Douluo abandoned his biological son and his mother in order to marry the daughter of the Emperor of Heaven, and threatened his mother not to attack the Sun and Moon Empire. At that time, his son's mother personally conquered an empire and developed it into the strongest empire at that time. Why doesn't anyone write a novel using the protagonist's son, and then go to heaven to seek justice for his mother?

You are not a villain who steals other people's opportunities and then bosses around, and you are really naughty. You don't even bother to steal other people's opportunities. What arrogant capital is there? You have the thoughts of a rat in the gutter. Personally, I think Huo Yuhao is very good, he is hardworking and dedicated, and he is not arrogant even when he is strong, but he was tricked by the mistress. At least make it up to me!

Yes, the writing is very good. Except for some minor flaws, there are no major problems. It is a very good Dou Er fanfic, and it is large and filling. It is very good.

I thought I could get out of a different place, or take Huo's chance. The author's little ingenuity made Huo's inferiority complex extremely extreme. In fact, Huo removed the plug-ins. You can't deny his hard work, right? And everyone knows that they can wear books and know that there is resurrection. My lover exists. Don't you join Huo? This protagonist makes my balls ache looking at him. He is so good at pretending.

2026.07.22 23:53. No details. Create your own plot. When I saw Chapter 157, it was not very attractive, so I read it quickly. Not against Shrek. Not happy to watch. 316 Orange is not a virgin, 317 Orange needs to retain her virginity. 321 Has awakened its memory, do you still need to use it? I forgot that Douluo Continent is also known as Love Douluo. 16 The source of Zihuang Tianshuanglong martial spirit: Huanglong, the ancestor of Yalong, Huanglong Claw. 18 The silver-scaled white whale is favored, possessing great luck, auspicious ocean beasts, and pure silver dragon bloodline. Silver-scaled white whale sacrifice. 26 Save the orange. 42 After awakening the memory, there is a sense of superiority. 43 Purify the Soul-Eating Carving Knife. 47 Tianmeng Iceworm took the initiative to fuse, but Electrolux did not come. 49 The subtle change is that destruction and ultimate thunder merge into: annihilation. 119 The second martial spirit has two extremely domineering attributes at the same time, which will put a huge load on the body. Otherwise, it can also be given an ice attribute martial spirit to become the third life martial spirit. 123 Was plotted by the soul beast with eyes of ice and fire. 217 Ma Xiaotao's decision to face the evil fire. 223 And the three-eyed golden yeo attribute are connected. 239 Tang Ya awakens the bloodline of the Blue Silver Emperor. After 266 reincarnations, he obtained the divine imprint of two unknown gods (413 time and space). 271 Golden-eyed Black Dragon King, suitable for the second martial spirit Purple Thunder Prison Dragon (no follow-up). 278 Electrolux is at Ye Guyi's place. Ye Guyi is the Jade Lingyi who accompanied her throughout her childhood. 281 Met Electrolux for the first time. 286 The Snow Emperor transformed into the Sun and Moon Empire Academy. The premise of 290 Immovable Shrek is Shrek Academy in the Sun and Moon Empire. 298 I hope it is the first time with Ye Guyi to take that step (result 315 In order to take advantage of Orange, he went with Orange first). 305, 308 Ma Xiaotao resolves the evil fire. 309, 555 Two unknown gods destroyed Tang San's plan, dialogue: The God of Thunder and the God of Love, the God of Angels and the God of Rakshasa fell on the Douluo Continent. In the future, the number of first-level gods in the God Realm will not be reduced because of the fusion of you and me. 310 The first soul: Silver-scaled White Whale. 317 The feeling of pleasure from taking revenge on Xu Tianran is more morbid than an orange. 333 Take away the ten thousand years of black ice marrow. 336 The second soul: Thunder Hell Vine. 339 The soul beast with two eyes of ice and fire used Dugu Bo's corpse to cultivate the seven unique flowers of green phosphorus and the nine unique flowers of green phosphorus. 345 Three-Eyed Golden Tiger and Nine-Treasure Glazed Pagoda. 355 Wang Qiuer's martial spirit: golden dragon and lion. 356 Dai Luoli's Sidong Fist. 362 Golden Dragon Spear resists Wang Qiuer. 372 Thunder Hell Vine human form. 380 Tang Wutong represented Haotian Sect in the competition. The seventh soul ring in 396 million years. 412 Broke Xu Tianran's right arm. 413 Wakes up and remembers the trick of Qiankun Wenqing Valley. Gain the divinity of the God of Time and the God of Space. 415 Ruined Tang San's plan and helped the Deep Sea Demonic Whale to destroy the entire Demonic Great White Shark clan. 430 Entering Dragon Valley. 436 Tianmeng Ice Silkworm absorbed forty-three of the forty-five ten thousand-year-old black ice marrow. 446 Snow Emperor and Ice Emperor kill each other. 448 Ning Tian absorbed the ice jade scorpion soul ring and soul bone. 450 Ningtian is pregnant. 453 Is too utilitarian for a long time. 462 Ye Guyi requested that no measures be taken last night. 471 Wang Qiuer took off the lovesickness. 472 Wang Qiuer took the initiative to let Xu Zihuang read his memory. 491 Counter-planned Tang San. 499, 547 And Ning Tian's daughter: Yu Ningqing (Xu Ningqing). 500 Ningtian Qiluo Tulip Soul. 504 And Orange's son: Xu Xiyan. 511 Dai Huabin ordered Huo Yuhao to be abolished. 513 The Evil Eye Tyrant dominates the ninth soul ring, Minghuang Douluo. 522 Takes revenge on Xu Tianran. 524 Jiang Nannan's ending. 525 Enthronement ceremony, identity revealed. 527 Declared war on the three countries that originally belonged to Douluo Continent. 529Build the Angel Temple. 535 Wang Qiuer became pregnant and was robbed. 539 Zhang Lexuan promised to succeed the president of Shrek Academy in the future. 542 Destroy the Haotian Sect and regain Wang Qiuer's soul and blood. The eternal spear of time penetrated Tang Wutong's chest. 543-544 Reversal of time and takes action against Tang Wutong from the past. The gods appear. 545 Absorbs the Azure Bull Python and Titan Giant Ape soul rings. 548 Where did you get the battle armor? 549 Single-handedly suppressed hundreds of titled Douluo. 552 The fusion of time and space gods: the God King of Time and Space, the Eternal Time Spear and the Void Chain merge into a super artifact, the Eternal Time and Space Chain. 554 Erased the traces of Tang Hao's existence in the long river of time, and Tang San was implicated by his bloodline. 558 The difference between the races of Sun Moon Continent and Douluo Continent. 559 Shrek Academy was renamed Sun and Moon Royal Soul Master Academy. There is an invisible barrier between Beibei, He Caitou and others. 560 The Sun and Moon Temple is responsible for the promotion and integration of souls. The soul can be passed on forever. Huo Yuhao's ending. 561 Second God: Annihilation Thunder God. 563 Snow Emperor became Xu Ningqing's second martial spirit, sealing the original power for nearly 700,000 years (inexplicable). 564 Reverses the long river of time and takes action against Tang San from ten thousand years ago. Female protagonist: Ning Tian 353, 205, 230, 248, 250, 291-293, 295-297, 344, 365, 372, 389, 407, 437, 443, 444, 449, 462, 54 7. Leaf bone clothing 330, 283, 285, 319, 324, 325, 328, 334 stimulation, 341, 342, 347, 375, 376, 382, 396, 401, 434, 435, 457, 4 61, 462, 464, 465, 529, 547, Orange 493-494, 315-317, 320 stripping, 321, 408, 409, 495 conception, 529, Wang Qiuer 482-483, 422, 432, 433, 471, 472 kisses, 473, 474 not bad, 492, 505, 506, 510, 544, 547, Wei Na 555, 503 kisses, Zhang Lexuan 561, 562, Meng Hongchen 526, 563. Imagine: 5, 76, 117, 139, 142, 143, 148, 165, 219, 225, 228, 233, 254, 256, 261, 267 see the light , 268 stripping off, 273, 278, 279, 281, 285, 302, 305, 308, 372, 378, 421, 547 three women, 555, 561.

I don't like the character of the protagonist. Over exaggerating your opponent's weaknesses

The pacing of the entire book is very restrained except for the end, and the reading is still very smooth and smooth, unlike other Douluo fandoms where the pacing is so wild that all kinds of crashes end up being sloppy and unfinished. Although there are many flaws in the portrayal of the protagonist in the second half, it is within the acceptable range and is worth reading. There should not be so few people.

Viewed 11% To sum up, the male protagonist is very good-looking. When I go to a place, there are female supporting characters who look at the male protagonist with their eyes shining brightly, and then disappear. From time to time, I emphasize that I am of noble birth and how favored I was in the past. I should be aloof and arrogant, but I should show myself to be approachable. Every few chapters, I have to mention the days when I was imprisoned, and now I have to work hard to cultivate and restore my country.