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This person is one of the reasons why I have a stereotype about Shan Wu.
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I watched it from the Hongguo short drama Three Thousand Shelters. When I saw the 10th season of 3000 Asylum, I recommended this original novel in the comment section and I read it in one go. It was the first time I spent money to read a novel on this platform. The content of the novel was pretty good and exciting.

Except for the heroine and the second heroine, they are all just seeing people. It is better not to watch the ancient crematorium for chasing wives. Besides being powerless or powerless, the heroine cannot resist at all. It is talking about the crematorium for chasing wives. In fact, the heroine has no ability to resist and lives a miserable life. She is frightened every day. The male protagonist is still a seeing person. Forget all this, the author is still a lover of men. It makes me have breast hyperplasia😐

The heroine is really hard to describe in words.
The heroine is really sad about her misfortune and angry about her, but has she ever exploded? Have you ever lost your temper and taken revenge? I have seen more than 500 chapters since Chapter 1. The heroine has never lost her temper, never taken revenge, never defended her own interests, and has always been a fucking person. A soft bun is even softer than a soft bun, like plasticine, and never says a word when someone insults, tramples on, and infringes on interests. You will never dare to confront the male protagonist, and you cannot even take revenge against the male protagonist. You can even stand up to expose him or retaliate secretly. It's a routine from beginning to end, with the heroine being insulted and trampled. After being laughed at, the hostess Dan Ruju endured it, and she always followed this routine, repeated countless times.

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After more than 700 photos, there is a strong smell of swallowing the stars.

Writing too slowly
... It's okay that I didn't read it before, but the experience of following it now is really bad... It's too little every day

Thoughts after reading
I can't help it. This book is so beautiful that I became addicted to it as soon as I read it. The plot is very compact and a great read😘😘😘

Watching Zhu Xian help Zhang Xiaofan set up Lu Xueqi felt awkward. And why did you drag Xiaobai into the cave? You said how impatient it was at first, but then said nothing happened at the end.

The creativity of this book is good, especially the beginning of the story, which reminds me of the emotions I felt when I was watching dance and writing a book more than ten years ago. The story scenes are very fresh, come on!

The idea of the crystallized forest came to me immediately. This tree reminded me of the Adventures of the Little Carp.

The natives have the advantage of being natives, and there is a time traveler who can accept having a knife hanging over his head every day. If you really were a time traveler, you would basically start a revolution. After all, how can anyone be allowed to snore on the side of the bed?

It can be five stars!
I don't really like Wang Dong'er's emotional line. I can accept Wang Dong's inclusion in other books, but this one makes me feel a little disgusted with her. I don't want the protagonist to accept her, so I deducted one star.

This book has a flavor of mysticism and immortality. I don't know if I can write any new ideas in the future.

The world view of the story is quite large, but I am afraid of spreading it out too much. The author's writing style cannot cover everything. It still needs some emphasis, but it still looks good so far.

I feel like this heroine is so stupid, I wrote it on the first page. If you keep hiding, can't you think of something to do?

It's still the first book with a modern arms dealer feel. I'm not very interested in World War II equipment.

I feel that the first-person perspective still needs to be considered. I have read one or two first-person perspective books in the past, but I didn't stick to it. This is a problem.

There are reasons for poor grades
I can't see a single thing, I'm just a martial artist, I've been stuck at least 10 times, there's a reason for my poor results

In the introduction: Ye Xuanneng takes himself as the starting point,

Can't the male protagonist leave the county town a little bit? Will he be beaten back to his original shape if he takes one step?

Overall it's okay
Although there are some nannies, the setting of Goldfinger is here. The closer to the characters in the plot, the richer the rewards. In terms of recruiting girls, there is actually no need to grab Gu Xun'er. The protagonist is a teenager when he first appears and only has seven levels of fighting spirit. However, Xiao Yan was originally a 10-year-old fighter, which means that the talent is not a bit lacking. Logically speaking, cutting off Hu Gu Xun'er was a disaster rather than a blessing. Xiao Yan was very talented and arrogant before he was ten years old. Cutting off Hu would turn into enemies. Who knows if Golden Finger will be able to help him in the later stage? After all, the Nine-Star Fighting Saint of Soul Heaven Emperor is there, and you have to have someone who can attract attention.

Passive soul skills have consumption, so it is a passive soul skill of the hammer, which is a buff soul skill.

Can't we prefer Wuhun Palace? I'm really convinced. What did Wuhundian do wrong?

By the way, is this a book opened because the fallen angel rewards from the previous book were not used?

The author can cut off Hu Rui Beast Just grab it and instantly refine and absorb the luck of the soul beast clan😋😋 There is also a Destiny Skull. When Wang Qiu'er offered sacrifice to Huo Yuhao, he jumped out and grabbed Wang Qiu'er and immediately refined it.

The story of the rise of a scholar is super exciting, and you can't wait for the follow-up plot!

There is a Dao Sect inheritance and a real dragon palace. I was ready to watch it, but finally this came out.

If practicing cultivation at the age of 3 or 4 is really effective, has no one in such a big world tried it? You are smart if you put poison at the beginning. It only works if you practice Xuantian Gong.

Is the author a newbie? Well, when was this article published? It feels a bit ancient and I don't feel comfortable with it. It feels a bit exaggerated, and it's not that I can't accept geniuses. I quite like it, but a genius is a genius to the end. You can pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, but if you have a companion, it's weird that you can't tell, and it feels a bit empty. It's just so unrealistic (it's too realistic to write). I can only say that I can read it, but I have to be patient.

I can only say that it's a bit messy, but I can read it, but I can't stand it recently because I just followed another book of the same type. Because the early plots of this kind of book are too similar, so I can't stand it.

Keep writing, this is very good, please write that in more detail. Some people really don't understand what the original text of the secretary in "Zhe Tian" said? I remember that Ji Zi Mi is all-around enhanced 10 times. And it doesn't necessarily trigger it. Do you know what 10 times the all-round enhancement is? You think about the attack power yourself. I tell you that the Nine Secrets of the Dao Sect have this opinion. Look carefully. If you want to open it up a little, it is very strong, okay. Your strength. How many times what? That's just attack power, and he only got it through practice. What you do is equivalent to taking a fingerprint. Understand the truth, cut a fingerprint, and then it will be triggered, and it will be triggered randomly. So do you want to learn this? You must be so awesome if you want to learn this. What is the concept of 10 times all-round enhancement? Then there is the original work of Xing Zi Mi which says it is possible. Travel in the long river of time and space. Ignore the formations. Isn't this strong? Nothing can withstand time. He can blend in with time and go back and forth in time. This is already awesome.

I feel that the writing is very good, and it is not watery at all. Because some of the chapters in time travel are about other worlds. It seems that time has passed for a long time, but Zhetian's time has not passed that long. If you look at the original work of Zhetian, you will know that this is no longer watery, and it is not written about Zhetian alone.
















