Lanzhou Ancient Road, Thin Horse and West Wind. There Are Thousands of Scriptures, Looking for the Trace of the Fairy

It is a good book, but I feel that it should not be posted online, but should be classified into the new martial arts school of "Legendary Martial Arts Edition of Modern and Ancient Times". The setting of force is probably at the level of high martial arts and low immortality. The setting is also not a web novel routine, with indigenous protagonists + no golden fingers + no boundaries. It doesn't quite fit in with the current style of online writing, but the plot is too powerful. It's not the low-level "refreshment" and sensory stimulation, but the real ups and downs. Each volume has a starting point and a turning point, with bright and dark lines intertwined to form a relatively complete story. Each volume further advances the multiple main lines of the book. In this way, all events, big and small, have causes and consequences, just like dominoes. One move drives the next, constantly promoting the evolution of the big background, and finally forming a picture of the collapse of the prosperous age.

Compared with the previous two works, the plot is smoother, the characterization has improved, and various wonderful ideas and interesting jokes are readily available, making readers smile. But compared to the huge world view, what the article describes is just the tip of the iceberg. Upgrading and changing maps too quickly, whether it is the world of Kyushu Demon Realm Xiyi, failed to unfold, and it felt like a background board. The rapid increase in strength has also eclipsed the main supporting characters in the early stage, reducing them to little transparency, or even disappearing without a trace. It feels like a one-man show between master and apprentice, making it difficult for many outstanding characters to reflect their value.

The first hundred or so chapters are about torture, but you still have a firm heart and pursue the path, and it still has a lot of audience, which can be regarded as food and fodder. In the middle, I went to another world with a witch, and at the end, I fell in love with a witch and took a romance route. It was a bit skewed. Although it could be regarded as following the commercial works of Zhu Xian and other great masters, I quite grasped the true meaning of successful learning. After leaving the other world, I started to randomly write clues and word counts, turning it into a hodgepodge of articles. Taken together, it's worth a look to review the food.

Partially unlimited flow. The setting is more interesting, it's an urban fairy tale, but it's not nonsense, it's written in a way that readers can understand. Use the aura of fantasy as a randomly opened dungeon to obtain resources for cultivating immortals. The protagonist's golden finger can restart the dungeon infinitely, reduce the difficulty of entering the dungeon, and obtain resources... The author can very well combine some stories and rumors about immortals with things on the earth. It seems absurd, but it is also interesting after the author's explanation. What impressed me deeply was the depiction of the world of Infinity by Waste Paper Bridge. What is more difficult about Infinity is to make readers immerse themselves in and accept the world view in relatively short chapters. Personally, I feel that his writing skills are very good in this aspect. It's just that the supporting characters appearing in the middle are a little nervous about their IQ, forcing a zz rhythm, and sometimes the logic is mosaic, which is unbearable... Although the production is better, the quality level is uneven. Follow-up book review continues

The author's writing skills are very good, but his storytelling ability needs to be improved. The first few dozen chapters look good, but they are a bit weak later on. One of them is that some things will be told over and over again. I don't know if the word count is too high, and there are too many descriptive things. In short, keep working hard.

Machiavellian Fairy Green... Ah no, Yue Qianchou's work, open book Baimeng, you can take a look

The author's writing style is getting better and better, especially this opening chapter is amazing. I like this style of writing very much. Many readers don't like the protagonist being forced to reincarnate in the face of powerful forces, but for the current Internet articles, which are stereotyped and stereotyped: The rise of diaosi . Pretend to slap the face--->>The small universe explodes. Pretend to slap the face--->>Calculate everything is under control. Pretend to slap the face------->>Get to the top. The routine of pretending to slap the face, or the world revolves around the protagonist is very boring, and the author actually has some ideas for the changes in the plot, so I still like this book, especially for old book friends, the author's anti-vulgar Internet writing routine is worthy of appreciation.

It feels like a breath of fresh air in today's immortal novels. Many of the current works are filled with pig's feet that are extremely violent and utilitarian. They kill rabbits at every turn and will never see a rabbit. They call their brother in front of him and dig out the guy behind his back. Jing Ke stabs the King of Qin and carries it on his shoulders. Okay, I'm excited. The character of pig's feet in this book is very lovable. He doesn't talk much and is not deep. But it's so simple and transparent. It's a praise. The several female pigs who appear have their own characteristics, and the author's narration can be said to be unique. The story that seems to be simply told up to the latest chapter has a lot of foreshadowing. The big background and the big world are also vague. As the pig's feet continue to advance, the mentality continues to change. The author describes this well. The settings of the skills, background, and characters are also unconventional. I like it very much. Come on, author.

The writing is excellent, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are vivid. The description of the fight is also gripping. There are some short jokes that make you smile, and it is a good book. However, one point is deducted due to the update problem, Liangcao+

A novel about male protagonist's rebirth and cultivation, no cp. Advantages: The character setting is likable. The male protagonist and gay friends basically have to have IQ and personality. It is suitable for reading by people of all sexual orientations. It's a cool article, with no abuse or surprises. Excellent writing. Disadvantages (for me): I highly suspect that the author didn't have an outline or he changed the outline after writing. A lot of foreshadowings ended up in vain. Many pretense in the early stage was inexplicable. The most annoying thing is that the ending is very hasty. The male protagonist returns to his soul in the previous chapter and the story ends in the next chapter. The final BOSS battle is even more anticlimactic. In the end, there is no need to conclude the final melee.

I especially like to read Douzi's books. I think the pig's feet in Douzi's books have a kind of innocent heart, and a pure atmosphere. Therefore, the innocent heart and unconscious expression emanating from the pig's feet have always made me love it very much. Although the book was very poor in the later stage, which made me feel that I have exhausted my talents, I still slowly finished it.

This book is a bit of a pity, I think the setting and writing style are pretty good. However, there is a problem with the character setting of the protagonist. I think the author may want to write that the protagonist is arrogant, but it seems that the protagonist is inexplicably arrogant and impulsive and irritable. The character creation of most of the gods in it is very problematic and does not conform to the settings of Journey to the West and mythology.

It is a difficult book to describe. The advantages are: first of all, the author's character is quite good, and he insisted on finishing his last book even though it was a flop; secondly, the author seems to be writing as a profession and has a lot of experience; secondly, the author has good writing style, seems to have an outline, and can develop the story around the outline; finally, the author concentrates on telling stories. But if the book is not extremely depleted, I would not recommend reading this book because it is too confusing. The author doesn't plan for fun at all. The whole story is in a depressing environment, where people are constantly encountering and solving problems, but there is never a climax that gives people a refreshing feeling. If the author can turn this corner, I personally think it is possible to become a god. His future can be looked forward to, but it is definitely not now.

This is a fairy tale novel that I have recently updated. Personally, I think it is okay. Apart from the slow pace, there are actually no major drawbacks. There are two things that attracted me to this book. First, the writing is clean and upright. Although the overall style is not fairy-like, it is fresh and refined, and there are not so many clichéd plots that are pretentious. Second, the protagonist has a calm personality and an industrial party mentality, which is quite attractive to me. I must admit that the overall pacing of the novel is on the slow side, but that wasn't a big problem for me. What's more painful is the fragment where the author is in a state of ecstasy, which is almost like getting out of here. Friends who like fast-paced upgrade novels are better off entering with caution. As a fairy tale novel that is more life-oriented, I'd like to give it a try.

Shinto Cultivation, with grand layout, rich imagination and smooth writing, is worth a read. However, the description of the heroine is awkward and gives me a headache, and the forced show of affection is of no use and is quite unnatural. In addition, the characters are vivid, the strategy is appropriate, and the writing is beautiful. However, it would be better to change the wife to a wife, which is quite dramatic and destroys the overall classical atmosphere of immortality.

The writing is a bit stiff, but the layout is rigorous and the plot is brilliant. In recent years, there have been few articles about Xianxia with an epic feel. The shortcoming is probably that it is not exciting enough. The author is very good at telling stories. The tone of the story itself is relatively low-key, but the witty and witty protagonist is still very likable. Everyone takes what they need, I recommend a visit

Just trying to gain popularity, that's all. Everyone knows what Tomato's level is.

The Xian Xia I have watched recently is still good enough. The chance that the protagonist got in the early stage was too coincidental, so I thought it was a novice novel. But after reading it later, I found out, eh, this is all the conspiracy of the big boss. The explanation immediately made sense, and it became smooth after reading it again. The level settings of "Fengshen Yanyi" have been changed, and three branches, Qingzhuo and Qi Lianshi, have been set up to structure the world of immortality; people with emotional talents often jump out of the window of inheritance, which is very suitable for my taste. The bosses here are the real bosses, and the bosses who look like mortals seem to be unhappy when they get upgraded to the final fight. There are some places in this book that are not detailed enough. I often flip through it in a hurry and find a plot that I cannot understand and have to go back a little to read it. This is very embarrassing. Then there is no big problem, you can read it in Shuhuang.

The commercial work created by His Majesty the King with great concentration followed "Once Upon a Time There Was a Spirit Sword Mountain". When he started writing full-time, he realized the importance of outline and details, and gained a new understanding of the arrangement of cool points. Since "The Collapse of the Galaxy", Your Majesty has tried to break away from the old academic path, but unfortunately failed. As far as this book is concerned, it can be said to be a tentative departure from the academic school, but there is no more vulgar emotional drama. The familiarity and utilization rate of the jokes are astonishingly high. For those who came from the Rosen era, this book has a good reading experience.

Science is a very broad concept. Our modern scientific knowledge system is science, and our current learning methods of observation, hypothesis, demonstration, summary and induction are also science. In the world imagined by the author, modern practitioners "observe their world with the scientific method of summary, induction and verification" to deduce the practice, while ancient practitioners are still following the 49 avenues that do not understand the roots, "blindly follow authority" and follow the Nascent Soul Method without knowing its true effect. This is the biggest difference between the modern and ancient methods in the article. The author imagines this other world with the existence of the abnormal variable of aura, and truly thinks about the ordinary people and immortal cultivators in such a world in detail, and thinks about the various imaginations used in the fantasy of "scientific cultivation of immortality" under the aura variable, which is the biggest highlight of this book.