Gui Zang Sword Immortal

I read the author's book a few years ago when I was in college. I read it (Western) and it can be said that I fell in love at first sight. To be honest, I really like the author's writing style. The plot and imagination of the novel are also very good. Although the ending feels a bit unsatisfactory in the end, I still like this work very much. In the current situation where commercial novels are so routine, I have indeed written a lot of different things.

It's too long-winded, just like an old lady's foot wrap, smelly and long. A lot of space is needed to explain the causes and consequences of the protagonist's words, changes in thoughts, and actions. Brother, we are reading a novel, not a game plot guide. There is no need to repeat detailed explanations. Many things can be understood just by looking at it. There is no need to repeat it all the time. And the number of water characters is too obvious. For example: there are eighteen sects, including ten sects of the righteous way, six sects of the evil way, and two sects of the Qi sect. They are called the ten sects of the righteous way, the six sects of the evil way, and the two extraordinary sects. Brother! I'm afraid there's no need to be so watery about something that can be explained clearly in one sentence! In fact, the setting of this novel is very good. For example, the natal sword energy of Gui Zang Sword Sect is quite innovative, but it is too wordy and will wear away your patience bit by bit while reading, making you more and more annoyed as you read.

Describing the appearance of a sect elder is worth one page, describing four sword boys is worth five pages, and describing a Buddhist Scripture Pavilion is worth three pages. To casually describe a supporting character who has a grudge against the protagonist, the first thing to know is what the supporting character looks like, who his master is, what skills he has, and what his personality is. A guy wets 2 pages

The writing is quite good, but you, the author, have stopped updating. It takes too long! ! ! !

I have been chasing it since my sophomore year in high school, and I once stayed up all night for it. However, now that I am a freshman and about to be my sophomore year, it still has not ended. . . . . . ,,,,, It's really hard to find such a book that appeals to your appetite. Especially for this kind of movie, there is no strong emotional drama, no messy picking up of girls, no scolding like market gangsters, and no fancy rhetoric. I don't know what is called dragging. It makes me feel the flavor of literature. Although the writing style is not as outstanding as those of well-known big names, and the slowness in the early stage has attracted many people's dissatisfaction, but I feel that such a thing should be close to literature, rather than the so-called waste paper that makes money. Great author, come on!

There are too many redundant words, and I can write a lot about something that is insignificant. Alas, I just can't stand it.

More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more... Although the previous writing is indeed a bit procrastinating, and this book is not a purely brainless harem novel, but a novel carefully and seriously written by the author. The plot is very tight, there are no messy emotional dramas, and there are no superfluous golden fingers. Although the writing style is not very good, it is better than many others. The book does not have the air of ethereal celestiality in the excellent novels about cultivating immortals, nor the tackiness in the ordinary novels about cultivating immortals. It is quite satisfactory, very upright, and very stable. Compared with a bad ending or a broken head, it will not make those who read it feel deeply resentful. A bad ending is what kills a book and makes people unable to resist scolding it. If writing a novel is to create a world, then the author is successful. The world he created is wonderful, vibrant, grand, and unique. He allowed me to see the love, hate, excitement, stories, and people in the world he created. Although there are a thousand Hamlets for every thousand readers, isn't the purpose of the novel to leave a Hamlet and his story in the readers' hearts? Please update more! If you don't update, I will write book reviews every day to remind you to update!

The beginning is unattractive and the words are long-winded. Could you please keep it simple and direct in the early stage and make it more complicated in the middle stage?

It's so annoying! If I write about something upside down, is it because my writing style is not good or because I am just being irritated? Abandoned

Read a few chapters. It's all describing, describing. Write thousands of words about a piece of clothing. Write several chapters on one realm. The description is as if it were a transcript if you look at it.