Legend of Peach Blossom on the Immortal Road

I can't stand it anymore, especially when he and the sex concubine couldn't sense the magic, they comforted each other, and the two of them were holding hands together. What's even more disgusting is that the protagonist is going to the Qishan Sword Sect, and the sex concubine even gave the protagonist several sets of clothes overnight, saying that I'll wait for you to come back, but the sex concubine is just an eight-year-old child. If you are an adult, you won't feel disgusted. It's normal to fall in love during adolescence. Often, but that woman is just a child, not to mention that the protagonist has been a human being for two lives. In his previous life, he was an earthling and received higher education. I don't know what the author was feeling when he wrote it. I was particularly disgusted when I read it, especially when I thought of an eight-year-old girl saying to you, these are the clothes I made for you overnight. I will wait here for you to come back😭😭😭It made me want to vomit🤮🤮🤮🤮.

Waste Stream, haha, I dislike it the most. Waste Stream is outdated. It used to be good, but now it becomes more and more annoying and uncomfortable. I have been following it for so long, hey.

I won't go into details about the ink stains, but after reading more than 100 chapters, the protagonist still can't fix it. It's the only one, so why should you fix it? You haven't counted 13 in your mind. It's so embarrassing. You believe you can do it, but it's useless. Who gave you the confidence?

I'm not saying that. I've been grinding away until the paid chapters. I've read so many Xianxia novels. A few sentences of popular science will do. There's no plot in the main plot. You want readers to be interested in reading the paid chapters later. The previous content must be interesting, otherwise no one would be willing to spend money. In short, it is just boring.

I think the author should first concentrate on finishing Lost in 1929

The writing style is so cute, like coaxing a child. At best it sounds like a dream, at worst it sounds childish.

Do you update weekly or monthly? It makes my balls ache! Don't be like 1629 and not update for half a month!

Feeling good? Why is it useless? Maybe it's because I'm used to fairy tales with high settings! ? First of all, let's make it clear that this book does not introduce anything beyond the Nascent Soul stage. Could it be that after cultivating immortality and building the foundation, you will be in the middle stage of Qi training in chapter 10, and you will be in the late stage in chapter 20? Is that the completion of 200 chapters?

So much nonsense +1

The novels written by Mr. Lu are all good. But should Mr. Lu increase Lost's writing speed first? I hope Lost can maintain its current quality until it is finished.