[Extremely True Great Critic]

[Rating: 4] [Slots: 7] Too many elements, like a joke National Time Travel + Novice Village + Skeleton Monster Treasure fragments + game panel + NPC favorability The good-for-nothing Pig's Knuckle was targeted at the beginning. After Pig's Knuckle was isolated, he had a big brother who never left him, like he was daydreaming. Pig's Feet's counterattack is to make a fool of himself and plan to get rid of the new boss in the novice village. His big brother fully supports it and the NPC cooperates unconditionally. In the ending, all your wishes come true, no suspense The plot is cool, pig's feet easily become the hero of the NPC novice village Summary: Except for the author's numbers, the plot is not very attractive.

[Evaluation: 6] [Trouble: 5] It is similar to the writing method of the game chapter of "Mysterious Tribulation". It has the advantage of being a latecomer. The game is well written. The content of the game is a very simple text adventure. However, the reality is very awkward, which shows that the author's basic skills are still not good. There is a high probability of going high and going low.

[Evaluation: 4] [Points: 7] It's a copycat novel, but it's not as good as what I learned, so it should feel good. It's good at torturing the main character, and the protagonist is even more of a scumbag. It's okay to just have a system in the fairy tale, but it's also about meleeing a mage... If there's some magic in the fairy tale, don't you think it's humorous?

[Evaluation: 5] [Disadvantages: 6] The reborn Indian killed white skin, but it only gave the protagonist an aiming device, which really wasn't of much use in that desperate situation at that time. Let's see how the protagonist turns the tables. It's despairing just thinking about it. An extremely divided slave-owning society is going up against an industrialized country, and it's very happy to kill itself internally. No matter how you look at it, it's going to end in genocide.

[Rating: 5] [Slots: 5] The writing is solid and the words are meaningful. The first story is eye-catching. However, things start to take a turn for the worse after that. The protagonist's character suddenly changes, and his actions change from being cautious and thoughtful at the beginning to being reckless and hasty. All in all, the author lacks the patience to tell a story well and is good at text control, but is weak at plot arrangement. As a result, the protagonist's behavior is just forced into the original plot by inserting every opportunity, without any further refinement or deduction.

[Rating: 5.5] [Slots: 6] This author's style is "the main character disappears after writing" If the main plot is a straight line, the protagonist's actions will be considered a golden circle. After persisting for a while, he will disappear crazily, and then occasionally appear once in a circle. Basically "the protagonist is strong" = "is about to disappear", which in a sense is very horror style.

[Evaluation: 6] [Disadvantages: 7] The medical content of this book is very interesting, satisfying the curiosity seeker, and also provides a refreshing introduction to modern medical knowledge. I really didn't understand the spy line, and it was abruptly added before the medical line was even started, which made people confused and confused about what the book was about. And being involved in a big trouble that has nothing to do with the main plot and cannot be solved for a long time without any cause and effect... This is the poisonous point.

[Rating: 4] [Slots: 8] Xuanjizi looked at Daoran's expression and was surprised to find that the little monk looked more beautiful than before when he had an indifferent expression. Xuanjizi quickly closed his eyes. Damn it, this kid is getting prettier and prettier. If he continues like this, he will become a demon sooner or later. After regaining his freedom, Yang Yanzhao looked at Daoran again. I didn't look at it carefully just now, but now that I've looked at it carefully, it's really shocking. Is there anyone so good-looking in this world? Yang Yanzhao considered himself a handsome man, but compared with Daoran, there was a real difference. This monk was like an immortal Buddha descending from heaven. Ma Han was also shocked by Daoran's appearance and couldn't help but said, "I'm so good-looking. It's a pity to become a monk." Author, aren't you embarrassed to read it yourself? Isn't it boring? The author seems to have to say something in every chapter, Ding Zhen (monk), why are you so innocent and handsome?

[Evaluation: 4] [Points: 8] The title of the book is a scam, just a dark flow. This typical example tells us how important it is to have a good name as it can trick people into it. Of course, if the level is not good enough, it will have the opposite effect. As for this book, apart from the title, there is nothing interesting about it.

[Evaluation: 5.5] [Points: 6] The emotional scenes are poorly written, and only the scenes about teaching students are still watchable. Moreover, the piano skills of the male protagonist in this book feel very mediocre. At the beginning, the male protagonist talked about piano knowledge and mentally recalled the past events of participating in competitions. I thought the male protagonist was a genius in his previous life. As a result, in a regional branch of a piano training school in a second-tier provincial capital, a bunch of people were inferior to the male protagonist in terms of their musical literacy... The cheats were also very boring. One cheat was the master's incomplete music score, and the part was particularly boring.

[Evaluation: 5] [Points: 8] The writing is good and the setting is good, but the protagonist is a bit weak in intelligence and has been absorbed by the country. Shouldn't the first thing he learns is wilderness survival skills? For example, how to deal with extreme environments and weather, how to survive, etc. After the integration, the country also arranged a set of exoskeleton armor for the male protagonist. But the male protagonist wore armor and acted like a fool after the prehistoric ice age. He prepared to head towards the equator in the ice and snow at minus 50 degrees. After walking for a long time and consuming a lot of physical energy, the male protagonist realized that he was about to freeze to death. Just the idea of ​​"walking" to the equator is weird, right? When faced with extreme cold after a normal journey, shouldn't you think about how to dig an igloo or find a shelter from the wind to keep warm? Only by protecting yourself can you have the energy to explore the world. As a result, the male protagonist almost froze to death, so he thought of digging water under the ice to keep warm. I really have nothing to say. This is not the way a normal person would think.

[Evaluation: 4] [Points: 7] A common problem of most novice writers is that they never know how much they weigh. Chapter thirty-nine has a very abrupt and meaningless time travel. Everyone is reading this book because of your golden finger ideas, not anything else, so you only need to write around the golden finger ideas, and don't make things confusing. Based on my many years of reading experience, few books that incorporate time travel can be written well. The last ones are either unfinished or have a lot of bugs, which simply torture the readers.

[Rating: 5] [Slots: 7] Haha, there are too many eunuchs. The book is very interesting, but as the title suggests, there are too many group scenes, and they are all original characters. It makes your mind buzzing after reading it. Moreover, the author always writes books wherever he wants without an outline. The most obvious feature is that there is no main line, and the protagonist has no clear purpose. He just messes around day by day, and then becomes a eunuch. The new book will probably repeat this process, and I am still messing around with 2,000 words a day.

[Rating: 6] [Slots: 5] It's slow-burning, has no main plot, and is not toxic at all, but the American police is written in a decent way, so it's not ugly. Although it is an American TV series, it has reached its latest fifty chapters, but there is not a single copy of the plot. The author said that it is a slow-burning drama and should be watched as an American TV series. But the problem is that American TV series have handsome men and beautiful women, star attractions, and visual impact, so that the audience can have the patience to wait for the long and trivial foreshadowing at the beginning.

[Evaluation]: 6 [Disadvantages]: 7 Formerly known as "The World's No. 1 Scumbag". The male protagonist Wang Hai → Aquaman. The beginning of the chapter is about filming a video and acting, and later it is about the favorability system task of being good to a girl. To gain favorability, the system will give you money and things. It is a relatively bad street setting, and the book may be full of scumbag tricks.

[Evaluation]: 6.5 [Disadvantages]: 5 Others have three golden chapters. The first three chapters of this book are really bad, but the later chapters get better and better. The aspect of cultivating immortals lacks a bit of fairy spirit, and the power system is not very clear. I feel that the protagonist's strength and weakness are all based on the needs of the plot without a clear concept.

[Evaluation]: 4 [Disadvantages]: 8 The protagonist is not very good at it yet. He doesn't want to go out and upgrade the Nine Yang Magic and other secret books before leaving the mountain. Instead, he keeps going shopping, being bullied wherever he goes, and being tortured by Yang Xiao in front of him. No wonder he can only rely on QJ to win Ji Xiaofu. She is really a loser, so low.

[Evaluation]: 5 [Disadvantages]: 7 The plot of the story is not rigorous, and it gives me a strange taste. It is a story about medieval lords. After the death of the viscount's father, it was the head maid who took the power instead of the knight captain or steward who was loyal to the lord. Then, all the male brothers and sisters of the protagonist died, and only the older sister and younger sister were alive. Not to mention the protagonist's luck. Fortunately, he survived, so why did he leave two heirs? Isn't it easier to control an heiress, including the female slave who led the serf uprising? I don't mean to look down on women. Many men cannot succeed without the support of women behind them, but it is strange that women are involved in these plots. It feels like the protagonist lives in a matriarchal society.

[Rating]: 4 [Slots]: 8 I didn't understand this at the beginning. Someone with malicious intentions targeted the original owner and plotted against him while he was participating in training sessions with the original owner. After pulling the person into the water, he controlled the water with his object-controlling skills and drowned the original owner. Then I want to use the evil scroll to obtain the soul of the original owner, and gain the ability to change density to become a dual-talent mage. After the murderer successfully seizes the soul of the original owner, the protagonist, who has been idle for more than ten years, comes online and kills the murderer in three moves, five by five, and two. Fulfill the original owner's last wish and receive gifts from the original owner - When the mage's last wish in this world is fulfilled, gifts will be given to those who fulfill the last wish. Then it didn't end, and then Goldfinger launched, directly plundering the murderer's energy. Then Goldfinger also automatically used the scroll to plunder the murderer's talent. Of course, you have to follow the usage of the scroll: "Destroy the deceased's closest relatives and loved objects or people to scare the soul. If the soul is frightened", you can obtain the talent. (Speaking of which, if you kill someone and then go out to kill the whole family, are you sure that you can make the soul surrender instead of creating a resentful spirit?) .... However, forcibly robbing souls will cause marks to appear in the sea of consciousness. Once discovered, it will overturn. You may be wondering, don't I understand it very well? But I'm really not kidding. I was confused after reading it.

[Rating]: 6 [Slots]: 5 It borrows some worldviews and backgrounds from American films and TV shows, and blurs them to give readers a sense of freshness, which is great. The rhythm is still too tight, similar to a movie. The picture is full of visuals and makes people breathless. Revenge never takes place overnight, which is good. However, we should still strengthen the slack space and describe more daily plots, such as mission items necessary for upgrading. They do not have to be obtained through fighting for life. They can be obtained through wits or trades, or through side plots, temporary plug-ins can be obtained to enhance the protagonist. They cannot die on their own.