My Narration Isn't Quite Right
About This Novel
After finally reliving his life, Ning Yan originally wanted to be a model of righteousness respected by thousands of people, but unknowingly, he seemed to be getting further and further away from his original intention... [Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully young people into poverty! You try hard to hide the sinister look in your eyes, but one day you will definitely make this superior woman pay the price! [Treasures of heaven, materials and earth, the virtuous will live there! That old Taoist Qingyang is just a few years older than you, so why should he possess such a spiritual creature! Just when you heard the news that he was about to go into seclusion, a bold plan took shape in your mind...] "What a mess! Master Qingyang is a highly respected senior in the Taoist sect!"
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Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
It's a good novel, you can read it.
I wasted a few bucks on the rubbish novel I read.
Bad review of female pig's trotters Bad review of male pig's trotters
If a woman doesn't know what's good or bad, if a man licks one, he's destined to hit the street.
Just have a beep. Another weapon spirit
I'm not worried about the notification sound of Qi Ling. There's another mount coming from behind. It gives me a headache.
Thank you very much for your support! Usually I just immerse myself in typing and don't look at the backstage very much, so there may be less interaction, but I will read everyone's book reviews, no matter whether they are good or bad, I will correct them or encourage them. I hope this book will make everyone happy to read it. I see that some book friends are more concerned about whether there is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. I am a layman and I don't trade in stocks. I try my best to write a story that everyone is happy with. If you are a book friend who likes single female protagonists, you may feel embarrassed. Of course, the male protagonist will not be a bulldozer with no need for affection. I can only say that everything that should be there will be there, and it will fall into place. This is my first time trying system fantasy, and the standards are still being explored. If I don't get a 404, it will be considered a success. Don't worry about whether there will be a tj or thunder, etc. I know the rules. Don't worry, just add a bookshelf and that's it. Finally, I beg you to read and collect. It seems a bit late to beg me after the test push is almost over...
This routine was done many years ago. I don't like it.
The subject matter is good. But the characters are too confusing. The frame is a mess, but the subject matter is really good.
The subject matter is good. Does the author really not optimize the framework? Just like a lump. The family is unclear and the characters are unclear. The world is unclear. Just one subject can make people look at it. Anyone else who calls it ** is disgusted
Update quickly, update quickly, I'll be distracted if I don't look at it for a day
This book is okay, at least I can read it clearly.
Open a suite building
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Official(11)Scraped 6d ago
It's a good novel, you can read it.
I wasted a few bucks on the rubbish novel I read.
Bad review of female pig's trotters Bad review of male pig's trotters
If a woman doesn't know what's good or bad, if a man licks one, he's destined to hit the street.
Just have a beep. Another weapon spirit
I'm not worried about the notification sound of Qi Ling. There's another mount coming from behind. It gives me a headache.
Thank you very much for your support! Usually I just immerse myself in typing and don't look at the backstage very much, so there may be less interaction, but I will read everyone's book reviews, no matter whether they are good or bad, I will correct them or encourage them. I hope this book will make everyone happy to read it. I see that some book friends are more concerned about whether there is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. I am a layman and I don't trade in stocks. I try my best to write a story that everyone is happy with. If you are a book friend who likes single female protagonists, you may feel embarrassed. Of course, the male protagonist will not be a bulldozer with no need for affection. I can only say that everything that should be there will be there, and it will fall into place. This is my first time trying system fantasy, and the standards are still being explored. If I don't get a 404, it will be considered a success. Don't worry about whether there will be a tj or thunder, etc. I know the rules. Don't worry, just add a bookshelf and that's it. Finally, I beg you to read and collect. It seems a bit late to beg me after the test push is almost over...
This routine was done many years ago. I don't like it.
The subject matter is good. But the characters are too confusing. The frame is a mess, but the subject matter is really good.
The subject matter is good. Does the author really not optimize the framework? Just like a lump. The family is unclear and the characters are unclear. The world is unclear. Just one subject can make people look at it. Anyone else who calls it ** is disgusted
Update quickly, update quickly, I'll be distracted if I don't look at it for a day
This book is okay, at least I can read it clearly.
Open a suite building
The name is open. Interested book friends can leave a name and crowdfund to write a book!
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[Evaluation: 4] [Points: 7] A common problem of most novice writers is that they never know how much they weigh. Chapter thirty-nine has a very abrupt and meaningless time travel. Everyone is reading this book because of your golden finger ideas, not anything else, so you only need to write around the golden finger ideas, and don't make things confusing. Based on my many years of reading experience, few books that incorporate time travel can be written well. The last ones are either unfinished or have a lot of bugs, which simply torture the readers.
Updates are very slow, not recommended. But it's fun
The writing is a bit white, the plot is blunt, and some supporting characters seem to have been shoehorned in. But the secondary system is really funny It is worth a look, the heroine is in the character card (the heroine Shen Qiuning is not very well written, she is obviously a beautiful woman, her character is portrayed like a girl, Chai Ruru is also a yandere, and there is also a white-haired girl)
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