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1福报绵延,从遇见西游仙子开始
Jellyfish
Xu Ang, who traveled through time and became a young bodyguard in the capital city of Da Qi, has the Five Blessings to cultivate his body. He does not need to practice, his cultivation level will improve by himself. If he encounters "the most blessed thing", he will also receive the unparalleled ultimate reward "the most blessed reward". It's just that the "blessing thing" is the ultimate blessing. It is rare in the world and is rare in a thousand years. Can a person really see it in his lifetime? Until this day, the daughter of the Four Continents of Heaven and Earth, the righteous daughter of the Jade Emperor, the enlightened disciple of the Tathagata, the only random eater in the Queen Mother's Peach Garden, the only unlimited user of Laojun's golden elixir, the only personal transmission of the Monkey King... The girl who was regarded as the apple of her eye by countless immortals, Buddhas, monsters, and others traveled across the world to avoid the three disasters and came to Xu Ang-- [When you meet the perfect person, this is a blessing]
Xu Ang, who traveled through time and became a young bodyguard in the capital city of Da Qi, has the Five Blessings to cultivate his body. He does not need to practice, his cultivation level will improve by himself. If he encounters "the most blessed thing", he will also receive the unparalleled ultimate reward "the most blessed reward". It's just that the "blessing thing" is the ultimate blessing. It is rare in the world and is rare in a thousand years. Can a person really see it in his lifetime? Until this day, the daughter of the Four Continents of Heaven and Earth, the righteous daughter of the Jade Emperor, the enlightened disciple of the Tathagata, the only random eater in the Queen Mother's Peach Garden, the only unlimited user of Laojun's golden elixir, the only personal transmission of the Monkey King... The girl who was regarded as the apple of her eye by countless immortals, Buddhas, monsters, and others traveled across the world to avoid the three disasters and came to Xu Ang-- [When you meet the perfect person, this is a blessing]
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2Become a God from Water Monkey
Xuanhuan从水猴子开始成神
Crustacean Ant
[Seven thousand of them have been completed, and they are all high-quality works. The quality is guaranteed, so you can read with confidence. Choice is greater than effort! The martial arts masters beat the land treasure tree to a bloody head, but no one cared about the deep water sacred grass. Liang Qu, who traveled through time and became a fisherman, obtained the Cauldron of Water, refined the talent of [Water Monkey], controlled water beasts, harvested all the way, and reached the top! Water Monkey→Sze Tamarin→Water King Monkey→Huaiwo Suijun! From now on, I will be in charge of Wanli Zetao! ............ The floods surged. People knelt down to pray and offer sacrifices. "Please bless me, Lord Water God..." Damn it, can you please stop sacrificing girls to me? I am really not a water god!
[Seven thousand of them have been completed, and they are all high-quality works. The quality is guaranteed, so you can read with confidence. Choice is greater than effort! The martial arts masters beat the land treasure tree to a bloody head, but no one cared about the deep water sacred grass. Liang Qu, who traveled through time and became a fisherman, obtained the Cauldron of Water, refined the talent of [Water Monkey], controlled water beasts, harvested all the way, and reached the top! Water Monkey→Sze Tamarin→Water King Monkey→Huaiwo Suijun! From now on, I will be in charge of Wanli Zetao! ............ The floods surged. People knelt down to pray and offer sacrifices. "Please bless me, Lord Water God..." Damn it, can you please stop sacrificing girls to me? I am really not a water god!
Classic elements: [Abuse of Food]--1146 troops are divided into three groups, where are you going? [Know the role in advance]--1147 wins three times in three ways, and good news comes in succession [Harvest]--1159 chance of winning thirteen. Great fight scenes: ◆Liang Qu vs. Beiman Haruhan. (673-674) ◇Liang Qu vs. The three heroes of Xihefu. (840-841) ◆The demon's iron cannon vomited blood and meteors, and bombarded Liang Qu, Long Binglin, and Long Eying. (878) ◆Zhenxiang Liangqu transformed into a white ape to snatch the dream white fire, and crippled the ghost mother with three sticks to teach Yishi Zhenxiang. (915-916) ◆The protagonist of the Second Realm of Zhenxiang VS the Eight Beasts and Eagles of Beiting, the Celestial Master Balstai. One of the characteristics of exciting battles is that both sides of the battle are "moving" instead of being turn-based. (1032-1034) ◆Liang Qu transformed into a white ape and shot back the iron cannon pellets (1098). ◆Liang Qu attacked the king of Qian Chu, and then fed the dragon to reveal its seeds (1108-1111). An exciting explosion! ◆White ape versus dragon, battle for Suicune (1164-1172). ------------ ✖The scene where the protagonist performs a series of tricks on Yuequan Temple and the Bai family has too many perspectives and does not focus on the protagonist. In order to maintain a high-level style, the narrative is very vague and confusing. It is a very bad writing method. ✖The part where the protagonist receives Shunzi for admission is not well written. The protagonist is already a Marquis and is close to being a master of heaven. If his former companions are not compatible, try to put as little detail as possible. There will be a sense of unevenness. (I write this because I feel like I have lost my life) ✖There is too much nonsense preaching. Preaching is not bad, but always using narration to preach is annoying. ✖Expository dialogues are difficult to avoid making people jump. ✖Building territory, King of Glory, etc. Are all invalid descriptions. It is not what you, a martial saint, should do. Even if you want to write, it is best to write in secret, otherwise it will be just water. ✖Now that I have become a martial saint, my target level must be able to keep up. I also write a lot of things about reaching the peak. What is the difference between reaching the peak and falling into the realm?
3Xuanjian Immortal Clan
Xianxia玄鉴仙族
Jiyue People
Lu Jiangxian died suddenly after staying up late, but his remaining soul was attached to a cracked blue-gray bronze mirror and fell into the vast world of immortality. In the dangerous and unpredictable Dali Mountains, in a small village beside the Meichi River, a small family picked up this mirror, and then spread the immortal way and taught the immortal method, ushering in a magnificent new era. (Family cultivating immortality, not having a holy mother, farming, no system, group portrait)
Lu Jiangxian died suddenly after staying up late, but his remaining soul was attached to a cracked blue-gray bronze mirror and fell into the vast world of immortality. In the dangerous and unpredictable Dali Mountains, in a small village beside the Meichi River, a small family picked up this mirror, and then spread the immortal way and taught the immortal method, ushering in a magnificent new era. (Family cultivating immortality, not having a holy mother, farming, no system, group portrait)
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4This Game is Too Real
Science Fiction这游戏也太真实了
Morningstar Ll
This game is too real! Moving bricks, running errands, picking up garbage, delivering express delivery... The company can let you experience the hardships of 996 at most. Here you can experience the super double 007. Okay, no more nonsense, the great manager asked me to move bricks. The adult said that as long as we work hard to donate our livers, he can get a brand new set of power armor next month. Then he will take us to a new map and go to the vast wasteland to pick up more garbage! ... Chu Guang, who traveled to the wasteland world, discovered that he had unlocked the shelter system and could summon creatures named "players" from the parallel world. From that day on, the entire wasteland became unruly.
This game is too real! Moving bricks, running errands, picking up garbage, delivering express delivery... The company can let you experience the hardships of 996 at most. Here you can experience the super double 007. Okay, no more nonsense, the great manager asked me to move bricks. The adult said that as long as we work hard to donate our livers, he can get a brand new set of power armor next month. Then he will take us to a new map and go to the vast wasteland to pick up more garbage! ... Chu Guang, who traveled to the wasteland world, discovered that he had unlocked the shelter system and could summon creatures named "players" from the parallel world. From that day on, the entire wasteland became unruly.
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5没钱修什么仙?
Bear Wolfdog
Old man: "You want revenge?" Young man: "I have been repeatedly insulted by strong men and treated as trash by my master. How could I not want to take revenge?" The old man touched the young man's head and sighed: "Good boy, let me teach you the skills." The young man was shocked: "Senior! How can this be done?" The old man stretched out his hand: "Give me your phone." The young man looked at the changes on his phone and said in shock: "Senior! Where does this century-old skill come from?" The old man smiled slightly: "Good boy, this is your backup skill in heaven. You can use it whenever you need it urgently in the future. Don't be insulted again." The young man frowned: "Isn't this a magic loan? I'm afraid..." The old man: "Heaven is a big platform. New users can borrow a century-old skill without interest for 30 days. The daily interest rate is as low as half a day's skill, which is more than a week for you." ... Zhang Yu snorted coldly and turned off the advertisement above.
Old man: "You want revenge?" Young man: "I have been repeatedly insulted by strong men and treated as trash by my master. How could I not want to take revenge?" The old man touched the young man's head and sighed: "Good boy, let me teach you the skills." The young man was shocked: "Senior! How can this be done?" The old man stretched out his hand: "Give me your phone." The young man looked at the changes on his phone and said in shock: "Senior! Where does this century-old skill come from?" The old man smiled slightly: "Good boy, this is your backup skill in heaven. You can use it whenever you need it urgently in the future. Don't be insulted again." The young man frowned: "Isn't this a magic loan? I'm afraid..." The old man: "Heaven is a big platform. New users can borrow a century-old skill without interest for 30 days. The daily interest rate is as low as half a day's skill, which is more than a week for you." ... Zhang Yu snorted coldly and turned off the advertisement above.
●The part where the protagonist participates in a sports competition (the main opponent is Jindan disciple Yu Xinghan, and the events are dodge, race, and weightlifting) is really well written and very exciting. ○The chapter where Zhang Yu participated in the cross-school civil engineering competition and faced off against Zen Rong of King Kong University (Chapter 460 Zhang Yu vs. Chan Rong) made me sleepy. It was a negative example of combat descriptions. The positive example is the rhythm of writing of Water Monkey.