🎇🍃bad Breath & Aftertaste🔔🎶

♀Poor tone ◎Suspense reasoning The first chapter at the beginning is completely like a modern special forces force, in ancient costume. It still feels a bit fresh and urgent. My favorite is the plot of the attack on Jing'an Division. Previously, Jing'an Division had been unilaterally chasing the other side, but it was not until here that the two sides truly formed a confrontation. Moreover, Xiao Fei struck hard as soon as he made a move, hitting the opponent's center. That kind of precision and courage made him feel relaxed and happy, hahaha. There are also touching memories of the time when the veterans defended the city. What I don't like is the arrangement of the ending. I liked it very much when it first appeared. Tsk! This is interesting, challenging the strongest with the weakest, not to mention the intention, the difficulty alone is enough for a big D's imagination. Later, it was written that there was a tendency to blame the prince, and I thought to myself: Come on, this is vulgar. As a result... It didn't fall on the crown prince's head, but it might as well fall on the crown prince's head! This direction is not only cliché, old-fashioned, and far-fetched, it also completely wipes out the original intention of writing the film. The chapters of the story are titled Twelve Hours, and coupled with the very rhythmic beginning, there is indeed a sense of tension. Just a little, not a lot. It can be seen that the author's original intention is to keep the entire book under a tense rhythm. The most important thing is to divide the chapters into twelve hours. But he made no next move after the split. Logically speaking, his cutting method divides the story into chapters, so the camera independence between chapters should be strengthened and the linear story should be presented in a point-and-face manner. But no, the basic shape of the story is still the traditional long shot. The long lens will connect all links smoothly during the narrative. It cannot interrupt the reader's linear thinking again and again like the storyboard, forcing the brain to reset the story again and again to create a sense of urgency and impact. Therefore, the author only divided the chapter titles and did not cut the content. These twelve hours can only be superficial. The other one is the opening sentence of the Twelve Hours. These twelve paragraphs of key words specially brought out from the text can be said to be the outline of the content of the twelve hours. Just by reading them again, you can see the outline of the story. If the chapters of this story were chopped into very small pieces, I think these outlines would still be useful as an aid to reading, but that is not the case now. Or if the story is basically a long shot based on the current situation, then I think it might be better to turn these twelve paragraphs of quotation more towards the chapter title, that is to say, they are all used to focus on the urgency of time. Now, the story originally developed in a linear way. To be honest, I don't see the need for this kind of pure content summary.

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying In fact, the essence of all rebirth articles is repentance. You can still remember a certain piece of clothing from your childhood, down to the details. You are dissatisfied with your current life, but you are unable to change the status quo. You are anxious about the future and full of uneasiness. However, just a joke on Weibo can make you jump and throw all your enthusiasm into a virtual online game. No matter how much time passes by, I will not be aware of it. It is always impossible to understand future desires at the best age, and time is often wasted in squandering. Might as well be.

♀Poor tone ◎Reality Another author who knows how to tell stories. The whole plot is arranged in an orderly manner and has a certain degree of relaxation. The most commendable thing is that the homework is well done. I once thought that the author was a police officer, and may have worked in several different departments and police types. The shortcoming is the emotional drama. No matter how many women I write about, it's always the same trick: flirting and being teased. The lengthy description of An Jialu's inner drama is simply a failure. Apart from making the emotional drama between men and women seem obscene, I don't see any other effect. I am sure that more than 90% of male readers and more than 90% of female readers do not like the emotional drama of the character An Jialu. Only the author is immersed in the ambiguous plot of low IQ level and enjoys it endlessly. ╮( •́Ω•̀ )╭So when watching, think of the emotional drama as an intermediary between cases. The kind that uses 007 as a template. ................................................................................................ The previous event was the one that gave away 888,666. I started reading this book the day before the event ended. Then I thought I could read this book for free. As a result, I hadn't finished reading the free chapter when there were only a few hours left in the three free days. Not only that, when I clicked on the chapter "There is a law outside the law" and saw the tiny 1/43 in the lower left corner... Oops! That sour feeling! I feel so tired...(⋟⋞)

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying I just want to try to see if it's still there after deleting it for a long time and adding likes (｡>∀<｡) I'll write the book review when I get home

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying Listening to Luohua's low-quality work, my golden fingers are widening. Logic, which was one of its strengths in the past, is occasionally let out in this article. There is laxity everywhere. Especially the male protagonist's "Qing Qing" when he was being robbed in the valley made my heart tremble. Nani? ! Just stepped into a brainless Mary Sue? ? ! ! Fortunately, okay, after that the author came back to his senses, slowly wrote the plot bit by bit, and slipped back into love. Rather than heading forward on the "unreasonable road of just opening up the golden finger and having a good time", in the "brainless Mary Sue quagmire of love hormones", it is just a dip in the toes. But Xian Dazhen is an author who tells stories very charmingly. Even if it is a work with the most casual attitude, its readability is far above the standard line. What Uda said, "Although you like me less, I love you... Everything!" And his hands stretched out as if holding something, moved me so much that I felt that Uda was too lonely, which made me sad. I was also very impressed by the "click" sound when describing the heroine's eyes when I first met Sima Liu. I was deeply impressed! ! Every time I think about it, I can't help but laugh. This adjective is used so well~The picture... Is so vivid, hahaha~😂

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying For online articles that can teach you about world affairs and human feelings, I think of Xiao P's articles, "Blooming Flowers and Spring Warmth" by Xian Ting Luo Hua, and "Strategy of the Concubine" by Zhi Zhi. All of Xiao P's writings are based on human relationships and sophistication. Even her author's remarks are full of shortcomings. But she was too caught up in it, too much. Many times, boredom seeps out from the screen, full of a sense of powerlessness. Listening to the flowers fall is another extreme. She is transparent, but just look at it. Among the one, two or three methods, the heroines in her novels will try to choose the one that allows them to leave themselves out and stay out of the matter. Such people are arrogant in their bones and lazy in temperament. In addition to arrogance, Li Xiaonuan also has wisdom, emotional intelligence, and ambition, as well as an optimistic and positive attitude. But to be honest, in real life these things are easier said than done. Li Xiaonuan has very hard bones and a soft body. Eleven Niang is just the opposite. She seems to have a very upright attitude, but in fact she is organically changed inside and has perseverance and perseverance. Everything in this world is divided into smart and unsmart, but for most things in this world, the gap between smart and unsmart can be narrowed or even eliminated by mastering skills and practicing repeatedly. The same goes for interpersonal skills. This is the so-called emotional intelligence. Usually around us, people who do well are people like Shi Yiniang.

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying I like childhood sweethearts and childhood sweethearts. Little P really likes to write about how he trains a good man after being reborn. ~(˘▾˘~)

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying Love is a game, a game played to catch the person you like. The end point of "love" is "love", but love is not about conquering the other person. "Love" is falling into the other person's hands. Although "love" is happy, "love" is painful. But true love won't hurt. This is the story of King Ping and Li Qing. Logic, writing style. These two points are the biggest advantages of Xian. This is Xian's first online novel. It is young and has flaws. The plot is not rigorous enough, the plot is thin, and it is obviously unsophisticated. It cannot be ranked in the first echelon. But, I like it very much (smiles and spreads hands). I just like how she writes about the male protagonist being infatuated with the female protagonist, but keeping it firmly within a reasonable range and not going beyond logic and turning the infatuation into a brainstorm. Childish and full of Mary Sue charm, but calm and without any Mary Sue essence. Gee, this precision between immaturity and sophistication fascinates me. (*ฅ́˘ฅ̀*)♡ I really like the extra chapter Lian Qing and I feel sorry for Lian Qing

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying I like the male lead and my sweet pet

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying It's a short story. Two criteria: 1. Since it is a romance novel, the romance part must be able to capture my attention. As a somewhat pretentious female reader, I like to see the male protagonist being passionately devoted to the female protagonist, marrying her only, living or dying... And so on... The male protagonist and female protagonist must be drawn attractively, at least one, and there must be some touching details and subplots. °ʚ(*´꒳`*)ɞ°. 2. Since it is "Aftermath", it must have an aftertaste. I forget many novels after reading them. There are several books that I have read one day and cannot remember the content the next day, and I have no desire to read them again. But some novels, even after a year or two, are still impressive when you read them, and you still enjoy them when you read them again. This short story meets both of the above criteria.

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying It's a sweet pet article. Xiao P's writing style is very unique, scattered and orderly, boring and light. She is the best author who loves to explain non-stop when writing a novel. But it's not boring, instead it flows smoothly. I just admire her writing skills. I couldn't read Xiao P's article a second time, the text was too light. But her writing left a deep impression on me and I will always remember it.

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying Makes me want to eat

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying It's a bit clever. But it's a scam. So I have mixed feelings about this movie. But that's how Zhizhi's character is. Even if she can't continue writing or gets stuck, she will finish it in a neat and orderly manner, telling you not to wait any longer. He is a responsible character and always has a pleasant attitude.

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying Many people say that Zhizhi's best game is The Concubine's Guide, but I like Flower Blossom and Nine Layers the most.

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying The story of the uncle and the little loli. Loli is well written, and the uncle seems to have a lot of fans. Zhizhi has an advantage. Even if the rebirth and time-travel stories are bad, many authors would like to just say, "This article is about rebirth (time-travel), and it's just a joke!" After explaining the prelude, she must have taken it seriously and described the entire acceptance process. I first noticed Zhizhi because of the well-written beginning of "Nine Layers of Purple". Maybe Zhizhi wanted to bring out some suspense, but there were countless threads buried in the article at the beginning. It's not the kind of gray snake thread that stretches thousands of miles, it's the kind of burrs that stick out, with the words "I am a thread, I have suspense" written on the face. ╮( •́Ω•̀ )╭ Farming articles are meant to describe the slow progress of daily life. In addition, Zhizhi* inertia draws the entire relationship diagram of the characters at the beginning of the article, so the dense threads are stacked with thousands of connections between people, squirming under the pressure of the first two hundred or so chapters. I was so tired after watching it that I couldn't muster the energy to explore the many suspenses that the author worked so hard to throw out. He kept fighting with the two hundred or so Zhang with a confused face. On the other hand, I feel sorry for the author that all the careful design was wasted. The opposite of this is found in the last third. At this time, the questions are basically solved and the relationships are straightened out. There are only two suspense left in the whole text: 1. Why was the Cheng family convicted? 2Who boarded Dabao in the end? At that time, the male and female protagonists were already married, and the emotional line involved the birth of a baby and the family disputes. The emotional line no longer attracts me. But just because he wanted to see whether Cheng Chi would choose the eldest grandson of the emperor or lean towards the fourth prince in the end, he even knew later that it would not be the fourth prince, but he wanted to know how he would defeat the fourth prince. Like a person who drinks too much coffee before going to bed, I am always full of energy and holding my phone. What is depressing is that before, I slowly laid it out layer by layer, but on the day of the palace change, it suddenly fell to the ground. High-quality works can improve the level of appreciation, and learning from the mistakes made by others can avoid detours. What's rare is that this article has both.

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying I wanted to give up before finishing the first volume. What kept me going was the big girl. I really liked that girl so much. She was so vivid, lively, and silly that I couldn't stop loving her... But even the big girl only kept me going for half the book. I think the main reason is that I was chasing Jin Tong at that time, and I was really spoiled by Xian Na's writing style and plot, and the other writing was completely unpalatable. No matter which book I read, I would sigh after reading a few lines, and quit again and again to read Jintong. I abandoned the books I was chasing at the same time one by one. At that time, the only thing that remained in my hands was "Bianjing Chun Shen" by Wheat Se. So based on the above reasons, I think there will be a difference when I read this book after reading Jin Tong for the second time. After all, it has been ranking well in the rankings, and the public's eyes are sharp, right? And besides the fact that the eldest girl is really well-written, the male protagonist is actually also well-written. What's not interesting is the female protagonist and the second and third male characters, and the plot is too cliche. You can tell the difference just by looking at it. I think I will watch it again for the eldest girl and the male protagonist.

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying Some people never grow up in a lifetime and remain naive all their lives. If Lin Jinru hadn't lived her life again, she wouldn't have seen how good Lu Mian was.

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying I like the second male lead, and I also like the first male lead. The biggest failure of this book: the obstacle to all time-traveling women - the golden finger is wide open. The key is that this is a heavy, fresh, text! ! The one who traveled through time was just a female supporting character! ! ! So, what a big piece of rat shit o>_<o

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying I had to watch the beginning a few times before I could continue, but the rest was pretty good.

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying The parts with the male protagonist are very interesting, the parts with the second male lead are very interesting, the parts with the third male lead are very interesting, the beginning is very interesting, and the writing is good. I can't tell what I'm dissatisfied with. (´◔‸◔`) Dang Dang Dang! ! Here comes the point. I sincerely advise you, don't stand on the CP at will. The pain of standing on the wrong CP... I won't tell you, you know.