🎇🍃bad Breath & Aftertaste🔔🎶

🎇🍃差口气&余韵🔔🎶

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🐾The bad taste, these are books that are pretty good in all aspects, but just a little short of a breath. 🐾The aftertaste may not be perfect, but even after a long time, I still remember the good writing. 🐾Let's read novels. The three perspectives must be consistent, the aesthetics should be similar, and the psychological maturity should be close. I like an author or a novel, not because he is the best, but because his choices of worldly affairs are similar to mine. His level is neither too far nor too close to me. I can see it, as if I can reach it with my hand, but in fact it is not yet there. All appreciation is based on this foundation. 🐾A novel is not like a road, it is more like a house. You go inside, stay for a short while, walk here and there, observe the connections between rooms and corridors, and then look out the window to see how the world outside has changed from this perspective.

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Late Ming Dynasty1

Ke Shanmeng

2.3M9.6569

At the end of the Ming Dynasty, the northern country was filled with smoke and corpses; the bridges and flowing water in the south of the Yangtze River were peaceful, and people were singing and dancing. Amid the internal and external troubles at the end of the dynasty, the sinister office director rose up and sounded the final horn of China. A true hero changes his destiny. The cruel and tragic ancient wars, the real Ming Dynasty marketplace, and the history created by each and every little person unfold a magnificent yet gentle and touching picture of the late Ming Dynasty. Book Friends QQ Group: 145034435

Curator25

♛Aftertaste ◎History Excellent product! The war scenes are so beautifully written. How to describe it... It's like "Infernal Affairs" suddenly appeared among a bunch of romantic stream-of-consciousness gangster movies. A technique that subverts mainstream aesthetics and pursues realism. Rush battles, encounters, urban battles, street battles, and field battles. The extremely detailed descriptions and realism are very exciting! The two best parts of the book are the war scenes and Zhang Zhongqi. The first time Zhang Zhongqi focused on the death of the mute. The people at the bottom were very miserable, the war refugees in Liaodong were even more miserable, and the most miserable were those abducted as slaves by Hou Jin. Starved, cold, beaten and scolded. Even so, Zhang Zhongqi still has expectations for life. He wants to raise a flag so that he can buy the mute back and live together in troubled times. When he came back from the battlefield full of joy, the mute had starved to death and threw his body in the wild. Wild dogs were tearing away human flesh, and there were pieces of clothing and bones on the ground. Dumb clothes. Zhang Zhongqi knelt down and howled like a beast. Zhang Zhongqi's second emphasis on description is also the climax of the full text. When I saw this, I dropped my knees to the author's writing. Before the chapter "Want to Live", the author was always very cold, his writing style remained objective and calm, and he never wrote a lyrical sentence. He wrote that Dalinghe was besieged, the city was running out of food, and people began to eat people. Zukefa was talking when he lowered his head and found that half of the human arm in his arms was exposed, and he stuffed the arm back casually. When it comes to the Battle of Port Arthur, in the chapter "Ants", the coldness of the writing style reaches its peak. But then, the emotions hit! "The Military Song is Loud", "Who Will Sacrifice For", and the ridiculous "Battle of War", arousing a wave of passion. Then the pen turned again, another callous stroke. "Driving", "Filling the Trench", "Corner", those Han people wrapping them up, those ants. And then right here, after the ups and downs, the pinnacle chapter of writing and emotion - "Want to Live" appeared. Huang Shan and Zhang Zhongqi started a life-and-death fight. The two of them rolled around and strangled each other, berating each other, defending themselves, and begging for mercy in defeat. One shed tears, "You take me back today, and tomorrow... I have to fill the trench again. Please let me go, I don't want to die." The other cried in a low voice, "I have never harmed anyone, my whole family was killed, I don't want to die, I don't want to die...". The confession created a crack, and the numbness that was deliberately maintained collapsed. The exhausted two men held the knife and sobbed in the silent Baimagou, looking at each other with tears in their eyes. Finally, Zhang Zhongqi climbed up the Banmagou ditch and disappeared into the night. There was a faint light of fire behind the dark earthen walls of Lushun. Huang Shan bit his lips and cried, crawling towards the direction of the fire. Zhang Zhongqi is a very miserable character. It's not that he has been living in darkness, but that he lives in the darkest place but always has expectations for life. The struggle made him look even more desolate. When Mute 2.0 Committed suicide, I almost felt angry when I saw the defeated Zhang Zhongqi. Why did she give up when others tried their best to pull her to survive? But think about Zhang Zhongqi going to the battlefield. She was alone with a baby, without food, and she would always die. The anger turned into discouragement. I think the part where the little baby is killed is the most painful in the whole book! The last spark of fire in Zhang Zhongqi's heart was extinguished...

Entertainment Headlines2

Wan Er Wr

1.7M9.53,678

From the daughter of the Feng family, she was reborn into a poor family and wanted to enter the entertainment industry with her beauty.

Curator54

♛Aftertaste ◎Entertainment article At the beginning of the novel, about the college entrance examination, the author wrote many little details that revealed his age, which attracted complaints from young and beautiful girls. Master Shan silently rubbed his knees, tears streaming down his face... The best part of this book is actually several movie scripts. The reading process was like actually watching those movies, and my heart was filled with excitement. It was the first time I read an entertainment article and saw a description of the filming scene. The author described the reshoots and deliberately repeated the same lines. "If Zhou Mingchong doesn't hand over the things, you will all die!" The comma after "if", the comma after "you", the sense of tone, and the image of a very serious and shivering Japanese soldier vividly appeared on the page. When I encountered the sense of disobedience that I was not yet able to enter the scene, it directly made me laugh. In the early stages of reading the novel, my focus was of course on romance, but after the script "Peking Events" appeared, my anticipation gradually shifted towards each script. The scene describing Cardamom's death actually brought tears to my eyes. The outline of "Devils" intrigued me as soon as it appeared. At that time, I still thought that this was a romance novel. I never thought that the author would write such a heavy length for each script. I thought that this novel would just be written as an outline. At that time, I thought that the story was quite interesting. In fact, the author could write another "Devil" novel, which would be very good. As a result, the author wrote it well, including all the key points, and the wonderful ending was highlighted. Different from the method of writing novels, it describes the actors' performances and the audience's perceptions, which is very contagious. I feel that if there is such a movie for me to watch, it may not be able to arouse such strong emotions in me. I thought there was nothing to write about the script of "A Chance of Life", but this script introduced Jiang Zhiyuan. Jiang Zhiyuan can be said to be my favorite character in the whole book. He is very similar to the old emperor in "The Long Diary". He appears in a relatively negative image at first, but later becomes more and more fleshed-out, making readers very moved by their deep affection. What the old emperor loved deeply was his father and the inheritance his father had entrusted to him. Jiang Zhiyuan's deepest affection was for his daughter, his only blood relative. Deeply affectionate, resolute in character, and able to endure loneliness. Every time I see this kind of attribute, I always feel love and affection. .................................................................................... This book covers all romance content

King, Spare My Life3

Talking Elbow

2.8M9.69,998

Lu Shu, a high school student, had his life changed in a car accident. When the era of spiritual energy recovery comes, he will be the leader of this era. Natural selection, the winner is king. ...

Curator1

I just clicked in and watched for 10 minutes. Well, I am currently stuck in the first chapter, being teased by the turbulent Zhang Shuo on the stairs... Even in such a bad situation, I still found a chapter comment that I liked, liked it, and left a majestic "Your sister..." If you have time to swat flies, you might as well click in and play the "Mystery Floor Laboratory" game. Hehehe, remember to order the small data building. As for the specific book review, I will talk to you after I finish reading it.

The Good Wife is Poisonous4

Lei's Article

699K8.747

The abandoned wife is reborn with no regrets. Not seeking revenge, just staying away. Even if fate plays tricks on people, they can't escape or escape, and they will meet again again and again. But she still clings to her ordinary happiness.

Curator26

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying Fate is like a book. If you flip through it accidentally, you will miss it. If you read it too carefully, you will shed tears. After watching it, I wish I could have the heroine be reborn again and renew the missed relationship with the second hero. In fact, the male protagonist of this article is not attractive enough. Strictly speaking, the female protagonist's feelings for him cannot be considered love. But the final reversal made me feel like a cat scratching my heart. I feel sorry for the second male lead.

Light, Short, Loose5

Light, Short, Loose

Short Fiction

Come On

686K8.7217

All kinds of fantasies, short stories. The trilogy "Light, Short, Scattered", "Soft, Transformed, Object", and "Turn, Give Up, Leave". Half sci-fi, imaginative. Light novels, short stories, essays. Endless railroad tracks, long journeys. Only thoughts can make you no longer lonely.

Curator64

♛Aftertaste ◎Short story The author is thoughtful This collection of short stories is very good in all aspects. Can be used as bedtime reading. Recommend.

Doomsday Paradise6

All Things Needed

7.2M9.02,632

[2024 new book "Artifact Report" is being serialized] [2023 new book "Wild Deer Convenience Store" is a horror short story that can be killed] "I feel... My boyfriend seems to want to kill me." Lin Sanjiu murmured. Thinking of her wealthy, handsome and gentle boyfriend, she couldn't help but shuddered all over. The doomsday hell, opened by the people around her, was roaring toward her. **This article is not a cool article**

Curator127

♛Afterglow ◎Apocalyptic Essay Unlimited streaming. Make your own copy. Big brain explosion! Let's feel the author's surging imagination shock waves together! I guess Suo Kuzan is a Pisces woman. I know a Pisces woman who is just like her, with her own playful attributes. This book made me laugh so hard that I couldn't hold my phone many times. Ah ha ha ha ha ha... Help... Help me up... I can still... Laugh... The writer's remarks are equally entertaining, and even the leave application note is full of entertainment. Just for this part of the speech, I suggest you read the original version, hahaha. I found it from the free book list and enjoyed reading it. I continued to subscribe after the free book ended. When I first started reading this book, I only had 10 comments per day, and I used them all every day. So the added value of reading this book is that you can often see my wise hahaha and 2333 ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾ And when my ten comments are over, you don't have to worry about me too much. Did you see the number in the upper right corner of each comment? Yes, that's right there✊! Shanzhu's magical laughter is always with you! Ps. Currently, the fan base of each supporting character is extremely enthusiastic, and I seem to have the potential to be promoted to a wallflower...(゚⊿゚)ツ

Girlfriend7

Girlfriend

Ancient Romance

It's Late

1.4M9.52,584

Xie Shuning is dead. He died in March in Yangchun together with his youngest son. But when she opened her eyes, she returned to the time when she first came to Beijing with her mother. The sky was white and the road was covered with snow. When she was young, she was protected by her mother who died of depression in her previous life and her brother who died young. The carriage swaying beneath her was carrying them towards her nightmare of the past...

Curator42

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying I just love Yin Gong to death╭(╯ε╰)╮

Katu8

Katu

Science Fiction

Fang Xiang

2.1M9.1393

A brand new fantasy world built by Fang Xiang, please come in!

Curator74

♀Bad breath ◎Science fiction Regarding imagination, there are stories like Infinite Flow that exaggerate and transform all kinds of ordinary things in life, and a book is full of all kinds of different ideas. There are also small ideas like this book: If everything in life were realized by cards... Then the author began to expand around this small seed, imagining food, clothing, housing, transportation, education, entertainment, battles, environment, background, details... Layers upon layers of richness, creating a solid and full world. I want to say that such an author is great! The writing style of this book is quite good, that is... A little wordy, rigorous in conception, neither impatient nor impetuous, and so calm that it hardly resembles an online article that is posted and written at the same time. I listen to books while running every day. After running, I often take them into the bathroom and listen to them while taking a shower. After that, I put them next to the computer and listen to them while doing things. Anyway, I don't really want to stop. An episode lasts about ten minutes. At most, I can listen to more than thirty episodes a day.

Jintong10

Jintong

Ancient Romance

Listen To The Falling Flowers

1.5M9.47,051

The serialization of the new book "My Grandma" has begun! Li Tong was reborn and woke up. It turned out that he had never loved her or cherished her... Jiang Huanzhang went against the will of heaven and returned. This time, he wanted to go to a higher level. He wanted to be truly inferior to one person and superior to ten thousand people... Ning came from a thousand miles away: Jiang Huanzhang, I am professional in destroying people...

Curator70

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying Light absurdity. Excellent product! Weird people gather together, idiots gather together, and cute people gather together. Xian Ziwen wrote that this book can be regarded as opening up the two channels of Ren and Du. It is said to be a masterpiece because the stroke of Jiang Huanzhang's death was somewhat skillful; because the author wrote about the stubborn inertia in thought and behavior of a man who was not very smart and lived to be in his fifties after being reborn; because a heroine with a despairing heart really did not know how to immediately turn on the golden finger after rebirth and actively and bravely reborn; and the stroke that Li Tong saw in the water was so wonderful. I used to say that hope Xing's Zhu Sha fell apart at the end of the writing, and the logical line was broken. The current Jin Tong is a typical kite-playing master, with the absurd plot of a group of demons dancing around, but the logic should be down to earth and unwavering. In the chapter "The Imperial Envoy Is Back", Jiang Huanzhang stood in front of the screen wall and thought about his past and present lives... The description of that scene made perfect use of pushing shots, long shots and flashbacks. At least among the online articles I have seen, this is the best use of film montage in a novel. Li Tong and Ning Yuan came out of the dungeon and walked out of the long alley holding hands. It was obviously getting late, but they said "standing under the bright sun." This seemingly illogical sentence makes the whole mood brighter and clearer, and the gloomy description of the dungeon, which seemed to be ordinary before, also has more texture. These are things that only an author who pursues writing style would want to do. I also like Chapter 411, "A Luo's bad breath." After A Luo was kicked out by the fourth prince, she walked on the street, casually walked into a pawn shop, pawned her golden ears for some small money, bought sugar hawthorn, drank bayberry juice, and ate snails while shopping freely. In the past, every time I read the ups and downs chapter of "Six Chapters of a Floating Life", I would be so uncomfortable that I couldn't stand it anymore. Whenever I got there, I would have to put down the book and stop for a few days. This world has never been equal for all beings. People at the top not only possess more material and power resources, but importantly, they are also inherently closer to reality cognitively. Regarding the formation and changes of social structure, the formulation of rules, and the meaning and application of rules, children of those with vested interests have an innate environment for observing and learning. Shen Fu and his wife faithfully implemented the teachings of the sages' books, but did not have the ability to distinguish truth from truth under the rules, nor the sense of resistance to protect themselves. Why are the two people who are so clever and intelligent in the story of Xian Qing so stupid and at a loss in the social environment? It depends on the class environment you live in and the education you can get. This cognitive gap between classes was especially obvious in ancient times when information was closed. Which camp you are born into determines your epitaph. Jiang Huanzhang's death made me see the author's calmness, the calmness that he calmly recovered after being extremely emotionally exaggerated. The description of A Luo and Uncle Yang allowed me to see her warmth. After penetrating the cold social reality, her cold writing is full of love for the pure life state of A Luo and Uncle Yang, and the warmth oozes out.

Ruzi Emperor11

Binglinshenxia

1.8M8.6252

Three emperors died one after another, and the prince who had never been noticed succeeded to the throne inexplicably and was in many dangers. The Queen Mother didn't like him, and always wanted to create a new emperor who was younger and more obedient; his half-brothers didn't like him, thinking that he had taken away the throne that belonged to them; the eunuchs and maids also didn't like him, thinking that he didn't look like a real emperor... The Ruzi Emperor had no choice but to save himself.

Curator20

♀Bad breath ◎History Knowledge and culture are two concepts. I know those famous ministers and generals, and I know the major historical events. I used to be able to recite the specific year, month and day before and after exams. But it wasn't until I watched an episode of Yi Zhongtian talking about Cao Cao and watched his demonstration that I finally understood what an action description that often appears in books is like: [touching palms and smiling]. The early descriptions of the two characters Ruzi and East China Sea King are very interesting. Ruzi's perspective is like historical knowledge written in a book. You know it once you know it, but once you are in it, it is completely different. The King of East China Sea is like the knowledge of history. He thinks he knows a lot, but in fact he knows nothing. History is the study of the human heart and social systems. Smiling while stroking hands, slowly bringing one palm to the other like a pat or rubbing, accompanied by laughter with different expressions, whether embarrassed, cunning, heroic, or emotional... Smiling while stroking hands may seem like an action description, but in fact it is a description of the scene, psychology, and atmosphere. Modern people rarely see this action, so I can't always imagine it. When Yi Zhongtian uses his life experience to reproduce words with movements and expressions, history is no longer just a story, it is life, life. When Qu Zixi and Ruzi were arguing about the use of large ships and small boats, Guo Cong, the oldest and most prestigious person, said the wrong thing and was very embarrassed. 'A hundred times more embarrassing than a child who fails to taste the beauty of tea'. So 'put your hands on the mat, bow your head and admit your mistake'. This [Hands on the Seat], which is full of the sense of the times, is extremely vivid. The demeanor, inner activities, and atmosphere of the scene are all vividly visible, and they have the same effect as [Putting Palms and Smiling]. Reading history is like archeology. Use life experience to skim off the loose soil, use the eternal human nature to pick and soak, and reveal the original appearance and style of events and characters. Lifelike. The entire book of "Ruzi Emperor" presents such a quasi-archaeological exploration state. I say "genre" because it is just a historical drama creation, but it does show the methods and viewpoints in detail. From details to macro, from characters to institutions. When I read "The Book of the Dead", I felt that the creation story was Bingda's shortcoming. On the contrary, he is very good at crafting stories. Therefore, writing novels with historical themes is the best choice to show your talent. I picked up one of the countless historical stories as a blank, and then wrote a story with ups and downs, vivid characters, exquisite details, and what's even better, it has ideas and attitudes. I really like the character setting of Nan Zhijin. He is the personification of the entire bureaucracy, and he expresses the long-term conflicts between the entire bureaucracy represented by the imperial power and the prime minister in a sharp and clear way through his repeated head-on conflicts and secret confrontations with the children. I think this is a very clever idea. 👍 The confrontation between imperial power and prime minister power is very exciting. Some people in the comments said that there are too many side chapters, and I feel the same way. If the author shortens the Jianghu part, the book will be more grand. The problem is that I can't create stories out of thin air. Once I create my own plot, I fall into a suspense drama. "The Child Emperor" is a story about growing up.

Eldest Son12

Eldest Son

Ancient Romance

Wan Er Wr

1.4M9.21,432

What Xie is planning is the Fu family's good fortune for a century. What Mr. Fu seeks is a future of power. In the dream, she was a loser who was lost in the game. Her mother committed suicide. She was hastily married off to a poor member of the Lu family who was famous all over the world, but she died young in her prime years. When she wakes up and sneers, you should all repent!

Curator46

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying I can't say what's good about it, but there are many details that I can't help but ponder over and over again. Don't be fooled by the dozens of chapters ahead, believe me, it's sweet! Favor! Arts! In the later period, he spread dog food and tortured dogs in various ways. 😒 Wan'er is really a magical author, almost a novel in one style. As soon as I finished watching The First Generation, I read her Cannon Fodder Strategy, and I thought, Hey, this one is so different in power? Then I looked at the reborn female supporting character, and I felt like my head had been blown all over by a strong wind... Ugh⊙∀⊙! ... What a rough CEO article... Now she has made headlines in the entertainment industry again. Do you want to read it? I'm... Very confused inside... What's even more amazing is that I once read Waner WR on Baidu, and it was said that it was a Taiwanese male writer. I had just finished reading The Long Diary, and I was amazed that a male author could write such a delicate romance novel. Secretly guessing: maybe he is gay😝. But when I searched again yesterday, I couldn't find any of that information. It's so mysterious, isn't it?

Go Back in Time and Become a Cat13

Lazy Speech

1.4M9.71,044

At the gate of the courtyard of the East Family Area of ​​Chuhua University, the guard uncle answered the phone, opened the window and shouted angrily toward the grove not far away: "Hei Tan, your mother told you to go home for dinner!" Whoosh - a black cat burst out of the dense grass on the other side of the grove, ran towards a certain building, and disappeared at the entrance of the corridor in the blink of an eye. After it, cat heads emerged from the grass one after another. When dinner is served, everyone goes back to their respective homes to find their respective mothers. ... Some people say that cats are the only animals in the world whose entire race is insane. Yuanfang, what do you think? -----------------If you don't have any practice, you can click "X" if you want to see it. ----The new book "Future King" has been released.

Curator129

♛Aftertaste ◎Urban Use an adult's tone and a child's eyes to tell an urban fairy tale. She wrote lazily and slowly, and I read it leisurely, as if the years had passed quietly. Many times it reminds me of those foreign children's novels I read as a child. There are many times when I seem to be calm and watch a group of shit scrapers going crazy in this book... ⁽⁽ƪ(•̩̩̩̩_•̩̩̩̩)ʃ⁾⁾ᵒᵐᵍᵎᵎ

Happy Family14

Happy Family

Ancient Romance

Lei's Article

1.1M8.210

The confused kindergarten teacher was brave once in a lifetime, and the result was heroic! The young shota, who had just become the master of reception, clenched his fists and said, "I will never let this aunt ruin my first mission by crying." 'Qing Dynasty, here I come! A new oolong incident has begun! An additional chapter will be added every thirty pink pictures, and the additional update time will be at 9 p. M.~

Curator25

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying I also really like the plot of the second male lead having an unrequited love and protecting the female lead for the rest of her life. After Sisi died, he asked Tuanzi to bring Mo'er a letter: "Mo'er, fourth brother is leaving. Fourth brother doesn't like the ending of your story of "Fighting Buddha". How can Forget-worn grass forget Tathagata Buddha? It has been forgotten so completely. Can you write a sequel and write that Forget-worn grass and Tathagata are ordinary people in the next life, and they are together again, okay?"... That "good or bad" sound... Made my eyes watery all of a sudden... I begged for the next life, so politely. And that trace of extreme caution, yet extremely heavy... It was after reading this novel that I went to Dou Fo to read it.

Trafficking15

Three Days And Two Sleeps

1.1M9.6373

Genius. Autistic, lonely, paranoid, crazy. Whenever times change, he raises the flag of the reverse cross. If it succeeds, it will lead to princes, generals and prime ministers; if it fails, it will lead to maggots, flies and excrement. In a time of peace and chaos, his subordinates are busy in all directions, and their bells and spirits are beautiful. Hidden in the marketplace, there is only one person who looks down on the world in this life.

Curator21

♀Bad breath ◎Urban, super power Currently reading, book review to follow

Zhusha16

Zhusha

Ancient Romance

Hope

1.6M9.41,114

When it comes to wishes, no one may believe it. But Xie Rouhui's biggest wish is to be able to say no. Starting from the summer when she was twelve years old, if she had said no at that time, my sister would not have been washed away by the water. She would not have been abandoned by her family, she would not have given up her child, she would not have been married to the King of Zhenbei by her father as his stepmother, she would not have been humiliated by her step-grandson, and she would not have been hanged with a white silk ribbon to death today.

Curator39

♀Bad breath ◎Old saying Aesthetically speaking, distance produces beauty. When we are young, we don't know the feeling of sorrow. We live carelessly, and we are sad, anxious, and troubled. They are all too far away. Only then can we gain aesthetic pleasure from these plots, such as violent fights, life and death, injustice and humiliation. Only then can we have the capital to express sorrow in new words. Have you seen Stephen Chow's interview? I saw him once when he came to Kangxi. He laughed, but he was unhappy. I have also read some of his life, so I say that as much unhappiness as there is, there must be as much laughter as possible. Because it can't be touched, who knows whether a puddle of tears or a pack of explosives will come out with just one finger. Therefore, an old man like me, who has gone through a lot and endured life, can't stand the dozens of chapters at the beginning of this book. ╮( •́Ω•̀ )╭ But the author's writing style is so good that I couldn't let it go. So I took a look, took a breath, and gathered some energy and courage to look again. After procrastinating through the dozens of chapters, I was immediately attracted and couldn't stop reading. (•́Ω•̀ ٥) Xie Roujia, Xie Rouqing, Shao Mingqing, Zhou Chengzhen, all the characters are portrayed beautifully! After entering the mountain until Shao Mingqing decided to leave, the plot and the description of several scenes were of excellent quality. The days in the mountains made me very happy. The scene between my grandmother and Du Wangshu made me burst into tears. When I came out of the bathroom, my husband looked at me hesitantly and said, "I thought I heard you laughing..." He covered his face~ Yes, I read a novel while sitting on the toilet and started laughing. How? ! ╯^╰ Because these two-thirds of the content are so wonderfully written, I even survived the lengthy verbal sparring between twins and between mother and daughter, which was very American drama style. Oh my god, I'm great! (Quickly pat yourself on the chest) It's a pity that this level could not be maintained until the end. Logic, no matter what kind of writing style, cannot be without it. Science fiction, fantasy, two-dimensional... All have their own logical lines when writing. Social logic, human logic, story logic... The bigger the imagination, the more exaggerated the story, the more important this thread is. Just like flying a kite on a windy day with east, west, and northwest winds blowing together, the kite hit the rear windshield of the Jetta parked on the left, and hit the concrete ground with a bang. Before it could hurt, it wheezed and rushed towards the big tree on the upper right... The plot is the kite bone, the scene description is the kite surface, and the logic is the thread. If you hold the line firmly at this time, you will be dancing wildly in the wind, which is thrilling! Wonderful! Happy! If the string is broken, the kite can only face the wind and roll all over the ground! It was obvious that hope Xing was having sex and taking off. The story tells that the double tripod appeared, after which the logic line collapsed and rolled on the ground. It's exciting in the front, but miserable in the back.

Book of the Dead17

Book of the Dead

Martial Arts

Binglinshenxia

3.9M9.0408

A book of dead people, half a book of no way. Cut off thousands of heads and devour the bones of hundreds.

Curator26

♀Bad breath ◎Martial Arts I was attracted by the relevant works from the first page. A mature man with experience and background talks eloquently in the fields he is interested in, exuding the charm of his thoughts and the infectious appeal of child-like joy, making the readers tainted with his fun. Also, the depiction of emotions is really great. Sensitive, delicate, in-depth and real. It is better written than most romance novels written by women. Much better. What does it say in "Mad Men"? If you come alone, you will leave alone. This world throws a bunch of rules at you. It is these rules that maintain society and make the world a success. Everyone is like a spider, trying to spin and build webs as much as possible, trying to subdue others with the largest and tightest spider silk, and at the same time being bound by other people's webs. Old Man Mu and Zhenren Zihe look very similar on the surface, they are both unruly old naughty boys. In terms of behavior, they are completely opposite. One despises all rules, while the other respects the rules and navigates them with ease. The two seemingly opposite paths actually lead to the same goal. The ultimate pursuit is to break free from the constraints and become the master of the rules. Just like the Dead Man's Book sword technique, there are 29 training methods with the same destination. Because the work was so well written, my expectations were too high, so I was a bit disappointed. In fact, the relationship between the works is the highlight of the book, which perfectly explains what is meant by "knowledge of worldly affairs, and knowledge of human feelings". If you think about it carefully, this book has many advantages and only one major disadvantage. That is, the whole text only uses the same routine. The eternal rivals play tricks, the male protagonist passively accepts the tricks, and then fights back at the last moment. After one is finished, another one immediately follows without stopping or changing. Can you imagine that at least 900 of the more than 1,200 chapters are in the same rhythm? From the 700th chapter onwards, I felt extremely bored. It's beautiful to use the same technique once or twice. If you use it again, you have to add a buffer zone in the middle, otherwise the reading experience will become dull and numb. The originally strong sense of ups and downs will be softened by the seamless connection of filling. Seven and a half of the nine volumes in the book are in the same tone, so boring, so boring, alas! Originally, a novel had so many advantages and only one small shortcoming could not affect the overall situation. However, this shortcoming was too big and too long, so that it brought the whole book down to a new level.

Full-time Master18

Butterfly Blue

5.3M9.710,003

He was hailed as a top player at the textbook level in the online game Glory. He was expelled by the club for various reasons. After leaving the professional circle, he found himself in an Internet cafe and became a small network administrator. However, with ten years of gaming experience, he re-entered the game in the newly opened tenth district of Glory. With memories of the past and an unfinished homemade weapon, he began his journey back to the top. ===================================

Curator49

♛Afterglow ◎Game Group portrait. Excellent product! Halfway through the book, I really wanted to play the game written by the author, so I searched "Glory" on Baidu... Wow! I found a whole page of Huawei mobile phones...( ̄ー ̄) This group of portraits is really a group of portraits! I kept calm and calm, but in the end I became a fan of Tyranny. Yes, it's a group, not a certain person. I became a fan of a fan group written by the author. Awesome, right? Who else can write group portraits to this extent? ! The description of individual scenes that impressed me the most was Tao Xuan at the moment when Excellent Era was eliminated. ''Tao Xuan instantly seemed to be possessed by the God of War. He jumped up quickly, waved his hand, and the bottle of water in his hand hit the edge of the competition stage hard. '' Is there an image of a completely competitive stadiumside coach? Super cool writing! And what's more, the finals is an absolute climax! It makes my blood boil! The last time I was so excited was when I watched "Attack on Titan." In Chapter 2, Mikasa rushed out with the remaining people after hearing the news of Eren's death. At that scene, the fire in my heart started to surge, and my eyes were so excited that my eyes were hot. And these are not the most powerful things. What shocked me most about this book was the amount of preliminary preparation work done by the author. I seem to have seen various manuscripts filled with lines and boxes. First, there are two parallel main lines. After Ye Xiu was retired, he formed a team and returned to the professional league to win the championship. This is the main line. Another main line is the 20 teams in the professional league. When the two lines run parallel on the same time track, where they collide, how they intersect, and finally merge... The author carefully weaves a full three-dimensional story framework. Many boxes are inserted above the two lines. The content in the early box is often the chapter title with the name of the person, skill name, boss name and dungeon name. This noun-like block-like advancement method is reminiscent of the structure of comics. When I read the first 300 chapters, I naturally thought of Slam Dunk Master and Chess Soul. Then there are some auxiliary lines. Online games and the All-Star Game, these are vines growing from two main lines respectively. Sometimes they extend to wrap around each other's main lines, and sometimes they tighten to bundle the two main lines into one. Ye Xiu and Tang Rou's family background, Chen Guo's father, Su Muqiu... These are branches and meridians, extending outward densely... Fans, media, transfers, retirements, commentators... These are leaves, spread all over the trunk and branches. Oh! I have to start another draft, lay out the game process, and deduce the points and rankings. Another draft to draw the skill trees of each profession, what a complicated skill tree! I just played it and I couldn't sort out so many skills at all. Just like a painting, the novel is real because of its complicated details, and love, hate, and resentment become flesh and blood. The author carefully depicts every detail. Thinking about this huge workload... Oops, my head hurts! .................. A thousand words are only enough to talk about the framework. For those touches and passions, those writing skills, rhythm and layout, another thousand words are needed. ପ( ˘ᵕ˘ ) ੭ ☆

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Listen To The Falling Flowers

1.1M9.6538

She was reborn as a beautiful girl from ancient times and lived with her old nanny. Although he lost his parents when he was young and lived under the fence, his life of leisurely watching the bridges and flowing water was still happy. Can childhood sweethearts hold on? What should we do if we have trouble with wealth and wealth? Snort! Who's afraid of who's trying to show off his skills? ............................. New book: Jintong, it's also very beautiful!

Curator64

♛余韵 ◎古言 闲听落花的第二本网文,比起第一本九全十美是一个大跨步,写作水准一跃进入第一梯队,而且是拔尖儿的。这是一本全文找不出一个真正让你讨厌的角色的经典种田文。让人能翘着嘴角看完全文。 山匪求生日常?看闲的《秾李夭桃》啊,让你笑痛肚皮,笑出眼泪。 大婚?看闲的《玉堂金闺》啊,我再没见过比这写得更好的大婚场面了。哎呦,包您喜欢!不喜欢?我也不赔钱。╮( •́ω•̀ )╭ 生子?来来,来看《花开春暖》,才不会千篇一律,才不与别家同。就那分痛盆,写得可逗了。 就这三个文一过,闲听落花的种田文水准,在我心里妥妥的一流作者。极少数,拔尖儿的。 PS:我从来不觉得古萧是男二,古萧就是个男配,跟千月一样的男配,充其量在戏份上算男配1号。对于作品相关里那么多人把古萧跟程恪相提并论,居然还讨论嫁古萧还是嫁程恪,本单主表示,哼╯^╰ 男二当然当然,当然是周景然拉!辣么深情,辣么全神贯注在女主的人和事上,多少次小心翼翼费尽心思的接触,恨不得掏心掏肺,却又黯然凄惶。 尼萌,尼萌,居然选择性无视了??!!本单主定要大喝一声:嘤嘤嘤嘤,尼萌四不四瞎!o(´^`)o

Melee Mage in Online Games20

Butterfly Blue

3.8M9.2680

A super warrior mistakenly chose a mage while playing an online game. He was accustomed to using violence to fight violence and force to overcome force. He could only make mistakes and transform himself into a violent melee mage. When power and magic were perfectly combined, a new game path was opened for him! Fireball? Chain lightning? Frost Ice Mirror... Wait, I'm here to practice kung fu, what does magic have to do with me? Am I a mage? Oh, yes, I am a mage. But... Do you really believe that I am a mage? Well, look at the knife! Look at the sword! Look at the punch! Look at the hidden weapon! What? And you said I'm not a mage? If you don't believe it, I'll prove it to you; if you believe it, I'll show it to you: The Master knows Kung Fu and no one can stop him! ==========================

Curator12

♛Afterglow ◎Game Maybe most men have a martial arts dream, right? From traveling alone to the end of the world to being a melee mage, Butterfly Lan writes online game stories related to martial arts. A straight man who cares about being an orphan accidentally joins an all-female player guild. So... During guild competition: [The girls twisted their waists and ran away all over the mountains and plains, and their attitude was not very serious. They were laughing, chasing and fighting, which was very strange. When you encounter danger and need to move: [The girls have always faced their own weakness, and agreed to leave the main city temporarily to travel to avoid risks, but this time travel became more exciting. As a result, along the way there was a lot of discussion about where to end, and some people even proposed the idea of ​​simply walking through all the main cities. Gu Fei deeply felt that the reborn Amethyst might not return to Cloud City again. Л̵ʱªʱªʱª (ᕑᗢᓫา∗)˒ Butterfly Blue's books always make people feel comfortable because they are refreshing, irritating, funny, and not violent. The writing style reveals the author's generosity. Then the male protagonists described are very focused on the things they like (even in reality, such men are very attractive). After I started working full-time, I had a bit of a book shortage, which is an inevitable sequelae every time I read a good book. Now I am reading Butterfly Lan's book backwards, and I find that this author has really grown up in big steps with each book, which is amazing! 👍 Also, I think the ending of this book is very similar to the favorite routine of Hong Kong dramas in the 1990s. What do you think?

Good Son-in-law21

Good Son-in-law

Modern Romance

Bing Bin'er

293K020

One day, the man forcibly took her into a car. And three days later, he forcibly put his last name in front of her name. At the grand wedding, in the face of numerous doubts from the outside world and strong opposition from my mother, in front of all the guests and even the country's military and political dignitaries. The man gave up all dignity, knelt down on one knee, took her hand, and confessed to her affectionately: "I wish to be together forever. My heart, in the years to come, I will use my body to shield you from the wind and rain, and use my life to hold up a blue sky for you. Marry me, and I promise you a life without worries." This affectionate scene touched the hearts of everyone in the audience. But who would have thought that all this was due to a sudden glimpse that year. How could this cold-natured man be willing to condescend to lower his body, take her into his arms, and give her the utmost love in his life? When the only "you in me" in the world slipped into a woman's finger, it also sealed He Xinxin's wandering heart. After seeing the vicious father who cruelly abandoned their mother and daughter and sent himself to prison, He Xixin no longer believed that there would be true love in the world when she was very young, and her young heart was closed for many years. In her heart, she once believed that marriage was just to follow the normal reproduction of human beings. But the appearance of Bi Qisheng is like she is an ark in life. It opened a new era in her life and inspired her to use her talent and perseverance to regain her confidence. In the end, she was recognized by everyone and found her lost relatives. In this way, he patiently used his deep affection and sincerity to open the door of her long-closed heart and taught her how to love. And he is willing to enjoy the joy and hardships with the men around him. One is the clouds in the sky, and the other is the mud underground. There is no difference between deep love and shallow fate. In the end, they cannot compete with the destiny of marriage. This is a brand new love story about military marriage written by Bing Bin'er with all his heart and soul. It includes pampering and abuse, love and hate, and tastes the ups and downs of life. Appreciation of the best films: The day of registration: Faced with the firm opposition of her mother-in-law and the wanton ridicule of her sister-in-law, He Xixin stepped forward bravely and declared to everyone in a firm tone: "Although I don't have a high degree of education, a beautiful face, and a strong family background, I love him very much." After saying this, Eunuch Bi jumped up and said, "As long as you dare to love! Girl, the Bi family will always be your strong backing." The man glared at her and refused to agree with her mother-in-law. He said firmly: "I stay when she stays, I leave when she leaves, I live when she lives, I die when she dies." Wedding night: "What are you doing." He Xixin shouted, "What are you doing?" Bi Qisheng frowned, "I didn't agree, I can't." He Xixin insisted again. "Do you need to file a report? This is an exercise of rights. Objection is invalid." Bi Qisheng objected again. "Can't you take a step back and beg me properly?" He Xinxin felt that it was too hard, so he wanted to be softer. "Retreat, in my eyes there is no retreat, only advancement." "Ah,----animal" He Xinxin was angry. "Heaven will give you a great responsibility, and you must first work hard on your mind and body," Bi Qisheng said with a successful look on his face.

Curator25

♛Aftertaste ◎Old saying I actually really wanted to start the chapter with the word "high quality". But the point of this article is not from the reader's perspective, but from the writer's perspective. From a reader's point of view, this book is not enjoyable and is too slow to read. Although the later it gets more exciting, readers may be lost in the early stages. This is a novel that depicts the difficulties of life in a very realistic and non-embellished way. It is not decorated to the point where there is no trace of disgrace, nor is it beautified in the slightest. But it is also very delicately written, so delicate that while I was praising it in my heart for how well written it was, I quit and read a few chapters of mindless and refreshing writing to get some fresh air. (´--`;) The hero's family caused the heroine's house to be ransacked and her family destroyed. The heroine and her brother, the only ones who escaped, took revenge. After the male protagonist's house was confiscated and his head was beheaded, he was reborn in the body of the playboy grandson. The only sunshine the male protagonist had as a child came from the female protagonist's family, but it turned out that this sunshine was a false lie. After his rebirth, he was trapped in the hatred of confiscating his family and exterminating his family and his inextricable love for the heroine and suffered terribly. However, this is not the worst. In the end, it turns out that he does not even have the attitude of hatred, and he is not qualified to have love. Italy showed the male protagonist's struggle and pain very well and described it in detail. The heroine and her brother suffered head-on blows from life again and again. The heroine retreated step by step, trying to manage and rebuild again and again. Until there is no way to retreat, and in the end there is no place to stand. My elder brother was originally an aristocratic son, but he was completely different overnight. He has a strong self-esteem and always resists stubbornly. But the more self-respect you have, the more your dignity will be trampled on. As the song goes, fight back against the teasing of love and the influence of fate without overestimating your own capabilities. However, life will always have a tough patrolman to slow you down and show you who is really in charge. Life is so simple and rough sometimes. The bloodline of the previous dynasty that the Xiao family preserved at the cost of annihilation finally forced Xiao Xu into a desperate situation. This stroke of writing is so cruel and good. Italy's writing in this article is particularly delicate, which made me feel full of pity for these three characters throughout the reading process. I love the layers of texture behind the concise words. The young brother who was on the run made an exquisite water cup out of leaves, holding a handful of river water to comfort his hungry little sister, "Drink some water first to cushion your stomach." The little boy tried his best to be considerate in the face of an unfamiliar situation, but he was at a loss. When I was whipped and disfigured, I couldn't swallow the penis no matter what, but I could only swallow it for life and death, which left me with a particularly complex and profound emotional memory. And what Zhao Cui was thinking when he died: "If you don't love me, I won't love you anymore." This sentence was written in this scene, and it was so well written! At that moment, I felt extremely sorry for Zhao Cui. When Zhao Cui's obsession collapsed, his heart shrank into a ball when he tasted the despair carefully. Time is a game, but the bet is yourself.

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