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1Minglong
Xuanhuan鸣龙
Mr. Guan
\t"The thing is like this, I was in a desperate situation and unexpectedly met a dragon. It insisted on saying that I was a martial arts wizard and wanted to show me the way to immortality..." "Is this why you dug up the Demon God's Tomb and became a slave to the demon?!" "I Xie Jinhuan never succumbs to others. He is a slave. To be precise, I have been served by a dragon..." ... There are thousands of completed copies of "The Prince Is Very Fierce", "The Fairy Is Very Fierce" and "The Heroine Wait a Minute". Friends who are interested can read the old books first~
\t"The thing is like this, I was in a desperate situation and unexpectedly met a dragon. It insisted on saying that I was a martial arts wizard and wanted to show me the way to immortality..." "Is this why you dug up the Demon God's Tomb and became a slave to the demon?!" "I Xie Jinhuan never succumbs to others. He is a slave. To be precise, I have been served by a dragon..." ... There are thousands of completed copies of "The Prince Is Very Fierce", "The Fairy Is Very Fierce" and "The Heroine Wait a Minute". Friends who are interested can read the old books first~
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2谁让他修仙的!
The Whitest Crow
"I have repeatedly emphasized that the atmosphere in the world of immortality is inherently crooked, and I am not the one who caused it. They say history books are written by the victors, so why do people always frame me when I win?" Lu Yang Jianxian said this to reporters, expressing great anger. The next day. "I have repeatedly emphasized that I have distorted the atmosphere in the world of immortality. History is written by the victors. I won!" Lu Yang Jianxian said in an interview with reporters, expressing great anger. --"Xiuxian Daily" reports for you.
"I have repeatedly emphasized that the atmosphere in the world of immortality is inherently crooked, and I am not the one who caused it. They say history books are written by the victors, so why do people always frame me when I win?" Lu Yang Jianxian said this to reporters, expressing great anger. The next day. "I have repeatedly emphasized that I have distorted the atmosphere in the world of immortality. History is written by the victors. I won!" Lu Yang Jianxian said in an interview with reporters, expressing great anger. --"Xiuxian Daily" reports for you.
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3The Sword Comes Out of Hengshan
Multiverse剑出衡山
A Piece Of Sage Leaf
As a member of the Hengshan faction, Zhao Rong has become increasingly obsessed with rectifying his workplace. As the saying goes, the world is slippery and people's hearts are complicated. When our Hengshan School discusses art, there are a lot of big names gathered, including Xiaoxiang Yeyu and Guangling San, who are very loud. But in terms of combat power, who can DPS check? Even the demon sect elder Shangguan Yun, who was lying dead for a second, had something to say. I participated in the world boss siege battle. What is your record in Hengshan? "The business model of Mr. Yue's sister store next door is backward, and it must be in line with the five-year plan of the left alliance leader." "The direction must be clear." "We must build combat power and develop the guild!"...
As a member of the Hengshan faction, Zhao Rong has become increasingly obsessed with rectifying his workplace. As the saying goes, the world is slippery and people's hearts are complicated. When our Hengshan School discusses art, there are a lot of big names gathered, including Xiaoxiang Yeyu and Guangling San, who are very loud. But in terms of combat power, who can DPS check? Even the demon sect elder Shangguan Yun, who was lying dead for a second, had something to say. I participated in the world boss siege battle. What is your record in Hengshan? "The business model of Mr. Yue's sister store next door is backward, and it must be in line with the five-year plan of the left alliance leader." "The direction must be clear." "We must build combat power and develop the guild!"...
○There are too many third-person perspectives, and it's too tiring to watch. The reader has to become the protagonist. The third-person perspective is simply competing with the reader's attention. ("How to Become an Immortal Without Money" does this very well) ●Zhao Rong wrote very wonderfully about treating the eye diseases of the Luo family children.
4没钱修什么仙?
Bear Wolfdog
Old man: "You want revenge?" Young man: "I have been repeatedly insulted by strong men and treated as trash by my master. How could I not want to take revenge?" The old man touched the young man's head and sighed: "Good boy, let me teach you the skills." The young man was shocked: "Senior! How can this be done?" The old man stretched out his hand: "Give me your phone." The young man looked at the changes on his phone and said in shock: "Senior! Where does this century-old skill come from?" The old man smiled slightly: "Good boy, this is your backup skill in heaven. You can use it whenever you need it urgently in the future. Don't be insulted again." The young man frowned: "Isn't this a magic loan? I'm afraid..." The old man: "Heaven is a big platform. New users can borrow a century-old skill without interest for 30 days. The daily interest rate is as low as half a day's skill, which is more than a week for you." ... Zhang Yu snorted coldly and turned off the advertisement above.
Old man: "You want revenge?" Young man: "I have been repeatedly insulted by strong men and treated as trash by my master. How could I not want to take revenge?" The old man touched the young man's head and sighed: "Good boy, let me teach you the skills." The young man was shocked: "Senior! How can this be done?" The old man stretched out his hand: "Give me your phone." The young man looked at the changes on his phone and said in shock: "Senior! Where does this century-old skill come from?" The old man smiled slightly: "Good boy, this is your backup skill in heaven. You can use it whenever you need it urgently in the future. Don't be insulted again." The young man frowned: "Isn't this a magic loan? I'm afraid..." The old man: "Heaven is a big platform. New users can borrow a century-old skill without interest for 30 days. The daily interest rate is as low as half a day's skill, which is more than a week for you." ... Zhang Yu snorted coldly and turned off the advertisement above.
●The part where the protagonist participates in a sports competition (the main opponent is Jindan disciple Yu Xinghan, and the events are dodge, race, and weightlifting) is really well written and very exciting.
5Become a God from Water Monkey
Xuanhuan从水猴子开始成神
Crustacean Ant
[Seven thousand of them have been completed, and they are all high-quality works. The quality is guaranteed, so you can read with confidence. Choice is greater than effort! The martial arts masters beat the land treasure tree to a bloody head, but no one cared about the deep water sacred grass. Liang Qu, who traveled through time and became a fisherman, obtained the Cauldron of Water, refined the talent of [Water Monkey], controlled water beasts, harvested all the way, and reached the top! Water Monkey→Sze Tamarin→Water King Monkey→Huaiwo Suijun! From now on, I will be in charge of Wanli Zetao! ............ The floods surged. People knelt down to pray and offer sacrifices. "Please bless me, Lord Water God..." Damn it, can you please stop sacrificing girls to me? I am really not a water god!
[Seven thousand of them have been completed, and they are all high-quality works. The quality is guaranteed, so you can read with confidence. Choice is greater than effort! The martial arts masters beat the land treasure tree to a bloody head, but no one cared about the deep water sacred grass. Liang Qu, who traveled through time and became a fisherman, obtained the Cauldron of Water, refined the talent of [Water Monkey], controlled water beasts, harvested all the way, and reached the top! Water Monkey→Sze Tamarin→Water King Monkey→Huaiwo Suijun! From now on, I will be in charge of Wanli Zetao! ............ The floods surged. People knelt down to pray and offer sacrifices. "Please bless me, Lord Water God..." Damn it, can you please stop sacrificing girls to me? I am really not a water god!
Great fight scenes: ◆Liang Qu vs. Beiman Haruhan. ◇Liang Qu vs. The three heroes of Xihefu. ◆The demon's iron cannon vomited blood and meteors, and bombarded Liang Qu, Long Binglin, and Long Eying. ◆Zhenxiang Liangqu transformed into a white ape to snatch the dream white fire, and crippled the ghost mother with three sticks to teach Yishi Zhenxiang. ◆The protagonist of the Second Realm of Zhenxiang VS the Eight Beasts and Eagles of Beiting, the Celestial Master Balstai. One of the characteristics of exciting battles is that both sides of the battle are "moving", thus avoiding the turn-based system. -------- ✖The scene where the protagonist performs a series of tricks on Yuequan Temple and the Bai family has too many perspectives and does not focus on the protagonist. In order to maintain a high-level style, the narrative is very vague and confusing. It is a very bad writing method.