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I hope there is a blocking function so that those problematic books will not appear again.

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Genuine Cultivation of Immortality2

Ye Henshui

3.0M8.4507

In the 666th year of the Alliance, government officials excavated a broken server from ancient times from a mysterious ruins. After painstaking efforts to crack it, they learned that in ancient times, humans were the strongest creatures in the universe. Although all the methods of cultivation have been lost, with the unique creativity and unremitting efforts of mankind, many methods of cultivation have been discovered again. The alliance has embarked on the path of national evolution, practicing martial arts, magic technology, and restoring the old views of ancient times! Until the arrival of an ancient soul... Here, the truth is revealed! "What a bunch of geniuses. By the way, can any of you tell me how you managed to figure out the real method of cultivation by relying on a novel website?! But that's good, at least it's convenient for me." Su Xian calmly logged into his VIP account on the novel website! The new book "From the Resurrection of Spiritual Energy to the Age of Ending Dharma" has begun to be serialized. Please support me...

Curator

The introduction looks funny, but unfortunately the author reveals his writing ability at the beginning of the first chapter. Upper text: "All seven of them have sweat on their foreheads, but they don't even bother to wipe them off..." "A nurse came forward to check the boy's injuries, and then exclaimed: "No, the patient's heart has dropped below the danger level. ""

Return to the Laid-off Era3

Chopin Plays The Piano Randomly

1.3M7.454

He traveled back in time and knew the fate of everyone he knew in the next twenty years. But precisely because of his return, the fate of these people also changed. This story is purely fictitious and should not be taken for granted.

Curator1

I accidentally clicked on it again while looking for a book, so I made a mark. The introduction just doesn't make sense, so what else can be interesting about the main text...

Live in Computer4

Live in Computer

Science Fiction

Leng Yue Tian Xia

1.6M8.094

The second part of the Civilization Clash series "After Nuclear War, I Can Be Resurrected Infinitely" is newly released. Please collect it, invest and read it! Some people live in history books, while others live in people's hearts. Some people fantasize about living in heaven, while others fear living in hell. Li Chunfeng lives in the computer... From now on, this life will be a masterpiece! --------------------------Book club group: 783808484 (no verification required)

Curator1

When the text is used normally, it is just like passers-by walking normally, blending in and not conspicuous. But if the author misunderstands certain words and uses them frequently, it will stand out like a disabled person walking in a crowd with a cane. The author of this book is like this, he is mistaken about "obviously".

Invincible Little Emperor Uncle5

Water Shear Ii

1.2M7.2319

The little emperor's uncle flipped through a Buddhist scripture and suddenly felt that the two channels of Ren and Du had been opened. He thought that there must be some mysterious skills in it. Then he stabbed out a halberd that destroyed the world, but the talent of Shenyin was activated, so in the eyes of others, it became a light thorn. When the halberd came out, the mountains and rivers were shattered. I went back to the field to pick a tomato and ate it. Suddenly, I felt a hundred years of internal energy in my body. The past life is blurred, stopped at midnight, civil strife in the White Lotus, darkness under the Buddha and Demon Lantern, the top of the Forbidden City on New Year's Eve, strange destruction of the world, the sea of ​​knowledge, the prototype meeting, a hundred thousand cavalry across the rivers and lakes... This is the story of an invincible little emperor's uncle who went from the martial arts world to the fantasy world, until he took control of eternity. PS: Try to support the genuine group: 106347301PS: Self-promoted new book: "The Invincible Emperor"

Curator

This book was deleted after I posted a comment. Please mark it. Chapter One, Third, the four sentences are not fluent, the meaning is clear and the logic is confusing. The author obviously has insufficient writing skills, and this situation should happen frequently in the future.

The World's Treasure6

Candle

1.2M8.8244

The earth has a history of 4.6 Billion years, and the origin of human civilization, recorded in words and pictures, only lasts for seven or eight thousand years, accounting for only one percent of human history. In these long years, some magical things, some mysterious treasures, some glorious civilizations that may have existed and then disappeared inexplicably have been buried under the vast river of time, leaving only a looming trace. What you know may not be the truth! All in all, this is a story of exploration, adventure and reward! There are treasures hidden in the world, waiting for you to discover...

Curator1

Two questions. First, in the author's setting, the protagonist's boss is a good boss, and then the protagonist does something wrong and the boss says something, and the protagonist feels aggrieved... So, is this a problem with the protagonist or the author? Second, this author's use of commas is very... I don't know how to complain. I want to ask the author: What did you do when your Chinese teacher taught punctuation... This is the first author I have encountered who uses commas like this? I wonder if these authors used any software to write their books.

I Am a Hong Kong Island Filmmaker7

Another Plate Of Cool Mushrooms

4.9M0254

A story about Hong Kong Island movies. I'm Wu Xiaozu, making the best movies and having the best time. Guliang's cinema group number: 36744687

Curator

I was told to quit at the beginning of the first chapter. The dialogue is in Cantonese, but the author's Cantonese proficiency is not good enough, resulting in nondescript sentences that would look awkward to people who understand Cantonese.

Return to the Ming Dynasty and Become a Tyrant9

Tianhuang Nobles

3.2M8.3783

As the Son of Heaven, I have been ordered by Heaven to control the world, fight against the remaining heroes of Taizu, carry the Emperor's Sword, and defeat the unconquered subjects. Tell Bahuang Liuhe: In the whole world, everything is the land of the king, and on the shore of the land, are the ministers of the king, and the barbarians and barbarians are all the concubines of the Han Dynasty. , PS: The audio version of this book has been released in Himalaya, welcome to listen and subscribe! Ordinary group number: 521480716 (To add a full subscription group, you must be verified by this group and then let the dog management add it to the full subscription group)

Curator1

Read the first chapter. The first chapter contains a lot of nonsense. If I remember correctly, I once saw it at the beginning of another book (I forgot what it was called, and I read it in the beginning and then retreated), and then I had an idea and Baidued a few sentences, haha... Are these two books borrowed from others? ? ? Or are they actually researching together? ? ?

Rebirth of the New Farmers in the 1980s11

Gold 01

5.1M7.861

The new book "Rebirth in 1983: The Return of the Prodigal Son" has been signed and released. New and old readers are welcome. Rebirth in the countryside in the 1980s at the beginning of reform and opening up. Everything is in the past and everything is a beginning. New challenges have begun. How should the protagonist's life be written this time?

Curator

I haven't finished the first chapter yet. There is a lot of room for improvement in this author's writing skills. Here are a few paragraphs of text: The blacksmith's name is Jiang Hongjun, and he is nine years old this year. When he was eight years old, he went to the brigade to play and went to the blacksmith's furnace to watch the excitement. He felt that the blacksmith's forging was very interesting and he watched it all morning. Who would have thought that when he got home, he would pick up a matchmaker, shovel, and matches to strike iron? It would be a bad idea to strike iron anywhere, so he chose a place. Every household here burns grass for cooking and heating, and there are stacks of hay of different sizes in front of every house. The main reason is that the connection between the second and third paragraphs is not smooth, plus the use of "you" in non-dialogue and non-psychological descriptions.

Northern Song Dynasty Man12

Sir Dybala

6.0M8.9797

New book: "The Broomstick of the Tang Dynasty" has been released. ... Later generations say that the Song Dynasty had no husband, so it was a weak Song Dynasty. The weak Song Dynasty could not defend itself and settled in a corner, thus causing the mainland of China to sink. This is a story about a man running rampant in the world. This is a story that gives the Song Dynasty its backbone. ... Jazz's complete old book of more than five million words, "Bringing the Warehouse to the Ming Dynasty," is lying there quietly, welcoming new readers to step on it.

Curator2

Mark it. After reading the first chapter, I posted a post at the beginning to help the author correct the wrong sentences, but it was deleted.

Power Spread North and South13

Ran Xuan

5.0M067

The new book "What Happened in the Late Jin Dynasty" has been released! In a world of chaos, people are like dust, following the wind but not themselves. For a strange little white-collar worker who accidentally traveled through time and became the descendant of a veteran of the White Robe Army, his top priority is not how to aspire to dominate the world, but how to save his life in this era. In this era, there are Yang Jian, Li Yuan, Yuchi Jiong, and countless heroes; in this era, there are Xiao Shi, Chen Xuanhua, and Zhang Lihua, who are as beautiful as jade; in this era, there are Huaishang, Jiankang City, and Luoyang Mansion, with long branches piercing the clouds; of course, there are also Chen Empress, Yu Wenyun, and absurd monarchs... When the white-robed iron cavalry rolled behind him, Li Xingchen looked back suddenly. The country is picturesque, how many heroes are there at one time?

Curator2

After reading five chapters, I'll pick the last one I saw and talk about it. I'm too lazy to go back to the previous ones. Text: Although he didn't know where these bandits came from and what they wanted to do to the village, looking at the traces they left today, Li Xingchen understood that these bandits were at least a potential threat to the village. Moreover, these bandits opened roads in the mountains instead of taking main roads, and even specially disguised the roads they opened, which made Li Xingchen even more wary. The first sentence is logically confusing and unclear. The second sentence is written very deliberately, especially the word "specialized". There are also many places in the previous chapters that feel like the author's writing is very deliberate and unnatural.

Starting from Xiao Li Feidao14

Spring Breeze Weishui

972K8.0114

(New book has been uploaded, please collect it.) What's in the world? There is Xiao Li, who is compassionate and compassionate, and has a flying knife, there is Xiao Shiyilang, the thief who has the cleanest attacks in five hundred years, and there is Lu Xiaofeng, who knows how to point out four eyebrows. Of course, beauty and liquor are indispensable. Xia Yunmo found an ancient book in his hometown. When he opened the ancient book, he came to the world in the novel. Everything started with Xiao Li flying a knife. (This book, unlimited streaming)

Curator1

Not long after the beginning of the first chapter, two sick sentences came in succession... I can only wish the author to write better and better...

Interstellar Almighty Evolution15

Galaxy Holy Light

5.1M8.21,863

Qin Hao, an unambitious mobile infantryman, accidentally killed the Zerg prince who came out for training, and unexpectedly gained the power of the Zerg, which began his rise to power. Chief: Qin Hao, why are you fighting? Qin Hao: I fight for survival! Enemy: Nonsense, we are the ones who will be killed, okay? Qin Hao: I want to make more money! Rich man: Try to save some face. You, an arms dealer, are so poor that you only have money, right? Qin Hao: Then for honor? President: You have received all the federal medals, how about you take my chair? Qin Hao: Then it's not enough for me to fight for love? Everyone: You still want to harm this girl! ? Book club group: 895437683

Curator2

Chapter 1 Text: "You are really lucky, you actually detonated an energy grenade at close range..." This dialogue left me speechless. What kind of logic is this? I was defeated when I saw this. The previous content was not very smooth to read. Unless the author improves his writing skills, there is not much to look forward to in this book. Even if the plot is good, many people will be put off by this poor reading.

Big Drama16

Qiqijia D Cat Cat

8.0M0279

Is he a genius in the spotlight, or a lunatic behind the scenes? Special thanks to "Tea Picture Shop" for the cover.

Curator

After seeing the defeat in the second paragraph of Chapter 1, go to the text: Although there is no time limit for today's audition, you can arrive at any time of the day from 9 am to 6 pm, but if he hadn't worked until 4 am last night and the alarm clock couldn't wake him up, he should have been waiting in the queue at this time. Who knows if the people queuing up for the audition today will fill the entire theater. I want to tell the author that if you can't write complex sentences, don't force them together. I believe that if the author writes two logically related sentences separately, there will be no logical confusion in the text.

The Strong Man Who Emerged from the World of Ruins17

Riding The Wind And Sword

3.3M8.8460

The strong are fearless, the strong are fearless, the strong are the strongest, and the strong are invincible. Will the development of science and technology bring about the doom of warriors? But... When Li Qiuxian walked out of the nuclear explosion center safe and sound, the world was shocked! ... A world without cultivation, without magic, without supernatural powers, without true energy, a world of pure warriors. ... The new book "Huanghuang Tiandao Supreme Sword Sect" is released, please continue to support it.

Curator

Chapter 1, text: Long Zeyun, who was wearing the uniform of Yaoyang Middle School and still had a childish look on his face, looked at Li Qiuxian who asked such an inappropriate question, with a hint of worry on his face: "Qiuxian, don't let your mind wander... Although the unexpected death of my aunt is hurtful, you must cheer up. The college entrance examination will be in the next month. I believe that my aunt in heaven never wants to see you fall down because of her." This dialogue is awkward to read after the ellipsis, especially "the day of the college entrance examination". I hope the author can be more careful when designing the dialogue.

The Audacity of Rebirth18

Rhino Resonance

2.3M0174

Which is more important, insight or courage? This is a story of a Wenzhou man who started out with treasury bills, Baotian (oil field), Baodi (coal mine), Baoshan, Baodao, Baolin, Baohai, Baotian (contracting aircraft), and a Wenzhou man who is so bold! Bold group number: 743292149~Welcome to join!

Curator1

Let me talk about the title of the book first. According to what I have read, although the protagonist is quite courageous, he is not very bold. Therefore, the title of the book is bold and bold, but the boldness can only be forced. It is estimated that the author focused on the word "Baotian" when choosing the title of the book, and he happened to have the audacity to use it. Well, maybe from the author's point of view, the protagonist is bold enough, but in my opinion, some of the content is too cautious. After talking about the title of the book, let's talk about the main text. For me, the best thing about this book is the various events that happened in various time periods. In terms of smooth sentences and clear meaning, the author used a small number of words inappropriately while struggling towards the passing mark at fifty points, which also resulted in blunt expressions of various emotions. The protagonist's switching between the two roles of student and businessman is not very smooth. The sentences are not smooth and the meaning is clearly expressed, so the writing style is out of the question. Without writing style, the various emotions in the highlight of rebirth cannot be expressed in that way. Therefore, this book is only worthy of various events. That's about it. The author also has a small problem. He likes to use "but is", although he doesn't use it much. When a word is used appropriately, it is just a few words in a pile of words. When used inappropriately, it is very conspicuous. The author's "but is" stands out in my eyes. Based on the author's writing ability, if he pays attention, he should be able to make the sentences fluent and express the meaning clearly.

After Sleeping Soundly19

I Am The Right Way

1.9M9.0613

The wandering soul is wandering, and the worms are scattered. Invisible things surround you, and whispers in your ears come from. Abominations wait in the abyss. There is no wind in the dead silence, and it cannot blow the corners of my clothes and the ends of my hair. Musu stared into the abyss, and the abyss stared at him. It wasn't until Mu Su took off his clothes that Abyss had to look away in embarrassment.

Curator

From the introduction, I feel that this book should be very interesting and not too serious. If you like this kind of book, you can read it. Note that this is just my personal feeling after reading the introduction. I have not read this book. Why didn't I read it? Please read the following content: The use of "start" in the introduction, as well as the attitude of other book friends in the comments after the book friend expressed doubts about "start", are very puzzling. Maybe it's some jokes that only they themselves understand. I have always believed that no matter what kind of writing you play, it must be done under the rules of words. There are two words to summarize what is outside the rules - sick sentences. Speaking of bad sentences, I recently read books and saw that many authors abuse some words and use them regardless of whether they are appropriate or not. These words are "finally", "already", "also", "myself and others". These words do not mean that they cannot be used, but that they must be used appropriately.

Wasteland Survival Code22

Dark Dust Disperses

2.3M8.1149

The nuclear war that broke out due to the energy crisis led to the advent of nuclear winter, and the surviving humans were forced to turn to underground shelters to survive. However, the resources reserved underground are ultimately limited. In order to return to the surface as soon as possible, a fully immersive game called "Wasteland Survival Code" was forced to be promoted in all underground shelters. In this game, everything that may happen on the surface is perfectly simulated, such as radiation, hunger, monsters... Players may face a variety of fatal threats. However, each person can only have three chances to be resurrected in the game. Once the opportunity for resurrection is exhausted, the shelter's intelligent main control system will automatically cut off all material supplies in the player's reality... Food, water... And even oxygen. "Hello, I am player 9527. How can I sell this power armor?" This article is about an apocalyptic wasteland-style online game. Part of the game settings are borrowed from Bethesda's Fallout series. Book Club 564747351's new book "Ashes of the Old World" has been released. Please support me.

Curator2

After reading Chapter 29, I found that the narrative was a bit long-winded, the logic was a bit problematic, and some sentences did not make sense. There are many questions, so I won't explain them in the text.

Countercurrent Perfect Youth23

Where Is The End Of The World?

2.0M8.177

Liu Yun returned to 2002 and had the opportunity to experience the wonderful and colorful scenery that he had never experienced in his previous life.

Curator1

Chapter 1, text: Li Hui seemed to have thought of something, and he said in a comforting tone: "I know you must be in a bad mood now. That paralysis ring, the best gaming equipment, was exploded. This is your hard work for more than a year." There is no problem before the first comma in this dialogue, but there is a problem after the first comma.

China Entertainment Era25

Eat And Fight Monsters

2.3M8.5421

Returning to 2004, in this era when Chinese-language films have just begun to develop, Tang An's career as a director begins again! From China to the world, this is an era of glory for Chinese-language films, and it is also a great era for Tang An!

Curator2

I didn't plan to add a book list, but the book review was deleted. Chapter 1, main text: Recalling that when Tang An applied for the job, Xu Jinglei, a 23-year-old assistant director, almost kicked him out. There are two problems with this paragraph due to the author's lack of writing power. First, the previous and later parts of this paragraph are actually written from the perspective of another character, but at this point it becomes the perspective of "Xu Jinglei" due to the author's lack of writing power. Second, the "23-year-old assistant director" was originally intended to be "Tang An" by the author. Also because of the author's lack of writing power, he can be used to portray "Tang An" or "Xu Jinglei". To put it simply, the author of this paragraph failed to make the sentences clear and clear.

My Eighties26

Master Of Sharpening Hall

638K060

If you were given a chance to do it again, what would you do in the turbulent time of the 1980s and 1990s? Everything yesterday was like death, and everything today is like life. Guan Xiaojun, who had been reborn, had already taken a dim view of love. What he cared about most was his relatives. His family is fine, everything is fine, and his struggle is just to regain the life trajectory that his family should have. In addition, a few small extravagances can be fulfilled by the way.

Curator2

When I saw the second chapter, the author wrote that the protagonist's father was aloof and would not attend the class reunion. I didn't know how to complain about this logic.

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