Northern Song Dynasty Man

The author is great. Warehouse is the only online novel that I have read to the last chapter. I have never read the others until I have read them. I hope this book will be more interesting overall. Also, although in ancient times it was awesome to have three wives and four concubines, I still don't want the protagonist to have too many wives. For example, Fang Xing's three wives are enough, and the emotions can also be described a little bit. I really feel that Mochou is too forced to become a wife. Then invent something practical that doesn't break away from the "high-tech" pretentiousness of the society at that time.

Since there are no bugs in this time travel, it will be much more difficult to manipulate the reform coefficient than in the previous book (Warehouse), and the protagonist's talents will be difficult to develop without buff enhancement and support, so the author must work hard on the battle of wits and courage. This may not have the refreshing feeling of the previous book (Warehouse), but the difficulty of creation has not gone up by another level, but because of his understanding of Jazz, he is not willing to perfunctory, so this book should be more difficult to create, and I hope you will not rush for updates too much. I believe everyone also wants to see a book that is no less exciting than the previous one (Warehouse). Although there is less exciting content, the story is still exciting. Come on! ! !

I've been reading Jazz's Warehouse for a long time. The ending is really not good. I feel it ended too hastily. I hope the new book can give us another story, a fascinating story. Come on, Sir.

Too little is not enough to watch, watch the beginning and wait until later. I came here to vote for recommendations.

The transitions in each plot are so rough that it jumps a little here and there, and the writing is not smooth, as if a pirated book is missing chapters and words. The character creation is too simple, and I want to write about a person in just one or two sentences. The depth of thought is too shallow, the villain has no brains, and the betrayal and revenge are finished in less than one chapter. The writing is not good enough, and the sister in the painting looks like a fool. The protagonist has no brains, and the supporting characters are just brainless praises: "This son is cunning", "This son is treacherous", "This son is smooth", "He is not as good as his father"

The people in the Song Dynasty in this book have twentieth-century thinking in their minds. If a commoner incites the masses to cause trouble, in any feudal dynasty, it will be the result of losing his head. If you are lucky, you can be executed for dissatisfaction. Will Bao Longtu visit a commoner? Not to mention that he does not have the idea of ​​​​personal equality that is only available in modern Western countries. Isn't he afraid of being impeached by the admonishment officer? If the male protagonist stayed in the real Song Dynasty, he would not even be able to reach Bianliang, Tokyo. I'll read Water Margin when I have time, and then I'll write this book.

Since coding is not easy, I won't give you a low score. Considering that the author's previous article was mindless and cool, and he couldn't even understand the basic logic, I just read a little bit and got addicted to death. Well! I also came from reading novice novels. At first I could read everything. The more I read, my level of appreciation gradually improved. As a result, I am now in a constant book shortage. It's so uncomfortable! ! ! ! Waiting for Taoist friends to test the poison, I am not optimistic about this book.

The concept is okay, but the plot is unbearable. Today the mirror comes out and tomorrow you can make your own wine and drink it. It's like today's No. 1 Scholar and tomorrow he will go to court and become prime minister. Everything is covered in one stroke and it seems to have no beginning or end. I hope the process and plot part will be studied carefully before there are exciting clips to watch.

The author's last novel, Ming Dynasty, was very good, but I think this one is a bit misleading to the public, making everyone think that the Song Dynasty was very weak. The real Southern Song Dynasty was not that weak. Especially at this time, the industrial system of the Song Dynasty was actually quite powerful. The Southern Song Dynasty's war winning rate reached 70%, and its GDP accounted for 80% of the world's. But the novel is indeed a passionate read.

The storyline is uneventful and has no passion. Language expression is like that of a primary school student I died of poison after reading chapter 20 It's purely personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it