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Book title: "Records of Dahao Rivers and Lakes" Author: You Chou Type: Martial Arts Word count: 150,000 Introduction: During the heyday of the Dahao Dynasty, the conflict between the rivers and lakes and the temples reached its peak. The new champion Ji Changzui is the only disciple of the best master in the world. He is caught between the world and the temple, and is in a dilemma. When the top master in the world is critically ill, the champion Lang Jichangzui suddenly disappears, attracting the attention of the whole world. Let's see how Ji Changzui enters the court, ranks among the three nobles, and gradually reveals the unknown secrets of the world... Book review: Confucianism disrupts the law with literature, while chivalry violates prohibitions with force. If the king of a country is determined to eliminate this world, what will he do? What would a former hero do if he was in the court but his heart was in the world? Once, they were brothers who lived and died together; now, apart from their status as monarchs and ministers, will they also turn against each other for their own choices? With a court, this should be a world full of bloody conspiracies; with characters with different identities but closely connected, this should also be a world full of choices. Dahao Jianghu Lu tells a story about Jianghu and its people. As far as the overall storyline is concerned, there should be no problems with this book. Then, the opening dialogue in the palace introduces the central theme sentence "A chivalrous person uses force to break the ban" and the legendary figure, which makes the novel already full of suspense at the beginning. The content of the next twenty chapters will all revolve around the various forces looking for the number one scholar who was once the best in the world in swordsmanship. In this way, the content of the novel becomes single. However, the author is not satisfied with a single story, so he uses narratives from multiple perspectives and characters to enhance the readability of the novel. Precisely because of this, readers will feel confused and confused when reading. The author's writing style is good, especially the description of the scenery. Just the purple bamboo glowing in the morning mist can make people remember it for a long time. As for the characters, although they don't have many memorable points, they still allow the story to flow smoothly. Overall, this should be a novel that becomes more and more exciting as it goes on. When the choice comes and the shocking layout is revealed step by step, you will also have the feeling of being a great hero or being obsessed with the world in your memory. I want to see again how fast the former best sword in the world is. PS: The above are all spoken by one family, please forgive me for any inappropriateness!

Book title: "Happy Loneliness" Author: Jiulouxi Word count: 120,000 Type: Martial Arts Introduction: Cranes fall in love with their hometown, nests, and clouds fall in love with Xiu. They are still not at ease than you. The martial arts will not die, see you in the world! Book review: He is the best swordsman in the world, the owner of the ninth floor of the thirty-sixth floor in the world, and the most handsome young man in the world. But now, because of a secret book and a woman, he resolutely walked into the murderous situation with a narrow escape; He is said to be ruthless, and he excels with a fine steel and soft sword. But he was his friend even more. He believed in him, and even if he didn't want to, he still took away his child and the half volume of martial arts secrets. He promised to be his children's teacher, and he did so. Twenty years later, there is still a reputation for ruthless talent in the world, but the stunningly talented Jiu Louxi has disappeared. This is how the world of martial arts should be, the older ones leave and the younger ones continue. A young man with peerless swordsmanship and an astonishing life experience has entered the world. There are wine, beauties, and unpredictable things in the world. Deer-cutting knife, Xiao Shiyilang, when these familiar names appear, there is a sense of intimacy inexplicably. With this kind of intimacy, it is no longer easy for this book to break away from the traditional realm. Coupled with the author's artistic writing style, Leng Buding really feels like it when reading it. Among them, the author's description of the characters is even more impressive. Just the nicknames such as Jiulou Xi and Beifang Hencai can already make people imagine their appearance, and with a little embellishment, the enviable and unrestrained boldness will appear in front of people. Someone once said that Gu Long is good at using short dialogues to promote the development of the story. But no matter what kind of attack he plays, readers can understand it at a glance. Perhaps this is the reason why his novels are still so comfortable and enjoyable to read even today when the storyline is developing very fast. The author may want to pay more attention to this point. However, it may also be because I am too slow to understand, so I am deeply confused in some dialogue words and do not know what they mean. Overall, this is a traditional martial arts novel worth reading! Ps: The above are all personal opinions, please forgive me for any inappropriateness!

Book title: "Huang Xiaoxian's Friends and Friends" Author: Feng Guo Wu Mo Genre: Modern Romance Word count: 59,000 Introduction: Huang Xiaoxian is an out-and-out homebody. Although she went to a good university, she couldn't even find a job. I begged my grandpa to tell my grandma to find a decent job, but it also had the nature of a spy - spying on my cousin-in-law for my cousin who was out of reach. If she really gets the handle, can she still keep her job? Fortunately, her gentle personality saved her, and by chance, through an ordinary Uncle Hu, she actually got a fox fairy as a friend. Her life was a mess, but in the end she relied on her strength. [Books] Book review: "Huang Xiaoxian's Friends", when you first read the title, would you think that this is a daily novel with characters as the main support? In fact, this is not the case. Although the characters in the book have their own characteristics, it is the plot and imagination that really play a supporting role. The protagonist Huang Xiaoxian graduated from a good provincial university, but his communication skills are so poor that he has been unable to find a job. After a lot of effort, he got his help from his cousin who was unable to fight, but the first thing he did at work was to catch his cousin's husband (the general manager of the company) raping with him. After all this trouble, although she was not challenged, she was still alone. Because of her clean and meticulous work, she met the concierge Uncle Hu. Uncle Hu is a strange person, and strange people have strange things. Through Uncle Hu, she discovered that she was destined to be an immortal, and thus got to know the Fox Fairy again. With the Fox Fairy as a friend, Huang Xiaoxian's rise will surely become a reality. But let us wait and see whether this fact is achieved through the power of the Fox Fairy or through one's own efforts. The plot of the novel is coherent, and although it seems like they are all small things in life, the plot arrangement makes the novel enjoyable to watch. Being able to write about small things well and ordinary things as extraordinary shows that the author's writing skills are average. After talking about the plot, let's talk about another important part of the novel-the characters. This is a novel with a workplace nature, and the workplace is shaped by people. So there is Manager Guan who suddenly changes his position once he becomes powerful, and there is also a cousin who gives up on love and marriage just because she wants to be the director. There are indifferent people, there are people who take advantage of their power, and there are people who are flatterers. When all kinds of characters appear in Huang Xiaoxian's life journey, how should she deal with them? Should we treat them equally or turn a blind eye? Is it to be trampled underfoot or to be admired? This is also a major expectation point of the novel. Furthermore, the fox friend has been spotted. Is the dog friend a human or a dog? Ps: The above are all personal opinions, please forgive me for any inappropriateness.

Book title: "Sin Feng Suppresses Demons" Author: Kunlun resentment Type: Martial Arts Word count: 57,000 Introduction: A peerless knight, in order to slay the devil who brought trouble to the world, willingly accepted the Nirvana Dharma of the Buddha, burned the fire of life in exchange for being invincible for seven days. Holding the demon-suppressing magic blade in hand, you can forgive the sin of killing, slay demons and subjugate evil, and move forward bravely. I hope you will have no regrets in your holy conduct on the road to ending your sins. At the top of the residual wind, the Buddha and the devil are at odds. The moment the truth is revealed, it is like thunder in the sky, but I know where my heart is, where is the way back? [Books] Book review: If you only had seven days left in your life, what would you do? What would you encounter in these seven days? When the hatred has never been forgotten and there is only one opportunity, will your choice be like the protagonist in the article, even if there are only seven days left, you must kill the enemy with your own hands? The greatest enemy in the world is to be wiped out. That's why Xiao Ting couldn't forget his personal grudges after practicing Buddhism for three years. He resolutely sacrificed his life in exchange for being invincible for seven days. He held the Demon Suppressing Blade and went down to the Tibetan Pagoda. Along the way, first defeat the divine will and slay the soul, then destroy the residual light and destroy the heaven. When the twelve demon kings are gone, it is the time when the sky defeats the demon sect. The author's writing style is good and his ideas are clear, so he can arrange the short seven-day period in a compact and not crowded manner. Coupled with the vivid demon sect characters, it can give people a very good reading experience. The author's protagonist may not be that outstanding, but his portrayal of the supporting characters - the Twelve Demon Kings - is good. Everyone knows that demons are evil, and they are among the twelve demon kings, and they are the most evil among evils. What is rare and valuable is that the several major demon kings that have appeared so far are all evil in their own way. Just like their distinctive appearance, you can tell who is who at a glance. They are not one-sided and make readers feel visually tired of the characters. Not only that, the author can skillfully combine reality and fiction. When I saw the explanation of "Old-Old Village", the current situation of many contemporary rural areas flashed in my mind unconsciously. It is not easy to make people think deeply in online novels nowadays. However, perhaps because of the single main plot, although the characters in each story are distinct and different, the plots are the same. When I first read the first few chapters, I was still very interested. After reading a few chapters, my interest will be dulled by the similar plots. To put it bluntly, there is not much suspense between the stories. One devil dies, another devil appears, one dies again, and the other appears again. Since the ending has been guessed, why should readers spend time reading it word by word? However, judging from the introduction, the story may have a big twist, in which case it will be worth looking forward to. Seven days later, is Xiao Ting dead? Is he with Yun Duoduo? There is still suspense, but unfortunately the setting is too far back. PS: The above are all personal opinions, please forgive me for any inappropriateness!

Book Title: "Drawing the Sword and Being Angry" Author: Xiao one Type: Martial Arts Word count: 160,000 Introduction: A marriage certificate leads to an assassination. How can Su Xiaohe's first journey into the world be so sad? What is Jianghu? What is Jianghu? After going through wind and rain, washing away the wind and frost, and gaining insight into people's hearts, can he still draw his sword in anger and pull out his "Xiaohan Mountain Sword"? Book review: There are a hundred Hamlets among a hundred people, and there are a hundred kinds of rivers and lakes among a hundred people. Jin Yong's arena is about people, but the author's arena is about killing people - the arena is about you killing me, I killing you, people killing people. If people don't kill people, it's not called Jianghu. Why kill people? Because once you enter the rivers and lakes, you can't help yourself. So after Su Xiaohe went down Xiaohan Mountain with a Xiaohanshan sword wrapped in cloth, he got involved in the disputes in the world. Because he carries a long sword, he is a charlatan; Because he is a Jianghu person, he participated in Jianghu affairs. Because of a marriage contract that was of interest, he became a must-kill person in the eyes of others. Because he had witnessed that terrible thing, others also became the people he must kill. Others kill for profit, but he kills only for the chivalry in his heart. He doesn't draw his sword because he doesn't want to kill anyone. He doesn't draw his sword because he doesn't want blood. But he had to draw his sword because he had to kill. Drawing the sword and getting angry is not for beauty, but for chivalry. Although the plot of the novel progresses a bit slowly, the arrangement of words in small sentences makes it so enjoyable to read that it always makes me feel guilty when reading. I also write about martial arts, why can other people's words make me feel happy, and why are those murderous and blood-soaked sword moves so poetic? As for the characters and plot settings, I won't go into too much detail here. You can go and see what kind of person is standing behind that orange lantern, and how cruel and ruthless the ambitious person hidden behind the high gate is? Entering this arena may not make you feel emotional, but it can also make you feel happy. Of course, it would be great if the author could correct the typos in the article. PS: The above are all personal opinions, please forgive me for any inappropriateness!

Book title: "Yin Yang Spirit Officer" Author: Zhiluo Lingyan Type: Classical Fairy Tale Word count: 400,000 Introduction: Being low-key does not mean being mediocre, and being in the market does not mean taking things easy. Once you ride on the wind, you will shock the world! Plot summary: Lin Yi was originally a little piano boy on the Huai River. He had a mother who loved him very much, and he was protected by the secretive and always loyal Duke Xu. But all this beautiful things changed when a general from the Beiyou Army responded to a call. To protect his mother, Mr. Xu died. To protect himself, his mother died. Lin Yi hid at the bottom of the cabin and listened to the Beiyou thieves murdering his mother bit by bit. His silver teeth were shattered and his body was covered in blood, but he had to live. Only by living could he avenge his mother and make the evil thief pay with blood. Book review: "Yin Yang Spirit Officer", when I first saw the title, I thought it would be a supernatural novel. Looking at the category again, it turned out to be fairy tale novels. Looking step by step, it turns out that the two words Yin and Yang are not what the Ghost Record refers to, but the spiritual energy and Yin Ming energy cultivated by the protagonist Lin Yi; and the spiritual official is the guardian of the world in the novel. The story of the novel revolves around these four characters step by step, which shows that the protagonist Lin Yi will be a person who guards one place and protects the peace of the world in the future. At the beginning of the story, the author uses a lot of words, "It's late for boating on the spring water of the Bijiang River, and the setting sun gradually fades into the clouds." "Time goes by, forces divide and combine, and it has been more than seven hundred years since the fall of Daxia...", With just a few strokes, it can clearly explain the background of the story while showing off the beautiful scenery. At a glance, you can tell that the author has good writing skills and the story should be explained clearly. Sure enough, Lin Yi first suffered the pain of losing his mother. He thought that after escaping the disaster, he would be able to rise to prominence like the protagonists in most novels. Unexpectedly, the author changed his pen and Lin Yi turned around, only to run straight into the arms of the hungry tiger. This is a turn of events. And when Lin Yi followed Lingguan Luoshan to Lingguan Mansion, not only was he not accepted as a disciple, but he was also humiliated by his fellow disciples. As the saying goes, bottoming out and rebounding, after many twists and turns, Lin Yi successfully planted his spiritual roots and became the disciple Luoshan had high hopes for. The plot of this book is ups and downs, the suspense setting is also appropriate, and it is connected with skillful writing, giving people a refreshing feeling when reading it. In terms of character setting, whether it is the smooth and tolerant Lin Yi, the sinister Shen Wuxin, the muscular and simple-minded Wei Wenbin, or the kind-hearted and slightly naughty Luo Caiwei, the author can make them all lifelike. Someone has a story and beautiful words connecting it. How could this not be a novel worth reading?

Book title: "The Scumbag from the Alliance of Love Rivals Appears" Author: Feng Guo Wu Mo Genre: Modern Romance Word count: 720,000 words Introduction: He is a charming man who neither cheats for money nor cheats for sex. He is personable and can make women fall in love with him. He is a modest gentleman who is willing to spend money, considerate enough, and likes to impress women with his actions. The women around him are fat and thin, and it seems that he has given his true love in every relationship, but he has never stopped pursuing... Is such a man a good man or a scumbag? The novel tells you how to spot a scumbag. Plot summary: I am an online writer. At the request of a friend, I met a woman who was suffering from emotional torture. Her name is Yang Huijun, and she once tied all her feelings to someone for seven years. The relationship that I thought would last forever, the wonderful man that I thought would last a lifetime, completely changed because of a cell phone being left behind... Book review: What is a scumbag? The entry explains that the so-called scumbag refers to a man who feels good about himself, is selfish, good at asking for things, irresponsible, and enjoys playing with other people's feelings. In order to allow the majority of female compatriots to easily identify scumbags, the author has taken great pains to start with the character of scumbags and then reveal step by step how to develop scumbags. This book uses the first person as the main perspective, like a narrative novel, and the author is just like the protagonist in the book, but the author of the event. Moreover, the division of labor between the two is clear. The heroine is writing other people's stories, but the author is writing the heroine's story. Although narrative novels are a bit bland in terms of plot, they are valuable in being comprehensive, as if the characters in the book are standing in front of you and telling you a true story. In order to make the image of the scumbag full and palpable, the author writes like a detective, advancing the direction of the story and completing the supporting evidence at the same time. When the second female lead recounted her love and hatred, the thick diary made of chat records became the most powerful description of the scumbag image in the article. He looks gentle and has such a good personality that no one would think he would lose his temper. When the love talk continues, you can also use virtues such as filial piety to gain attention. He is good at acting, and it can even be said that he acts every day. Being able to maneuver among countless women without being discovered, how can such acting skills be taken lightly? Before the incident happened, he would ask for help; after the incident, he would kneel to the ground shamelessly; but after realizing that it was irreparable, he would also mercilessly speak harshly to someone. Scumbag men are all multi-faceted, and each side corresponds to a deceived woman. As long as there is an opportunity, he can take advantage of it. In addition to the image of a scumbag, the female characters in the author's works are also distinct and different. There are those who have deep feelings, and there are also those who don't know what a face is. Although I don't quite understand the so-called people who use deep feelings, I can't help but use some people I once knew as substitutes in the text. It turns out that when you are deeply in love, you really can't help yourself. It may be controversial, so I won't go into detail here about the specific creation of the author's female characters and the development of a scumbag. If you are interested, you can go and take a look. Of course, while its advantages are outstanding, this book also has its shortcomings. The first is the allocation of paragraphs, and the second is typos and unclear character names. These may affect the smoothness of reading? One final word, you need to be careful when entering the trap, and do not enter according to the wrong number.

What I recommend today is my own traditional martial arts novel "The Slaughter of Jianghu". The recommendation is as follows: Dear readers, what we are telling you today is the story of a young knight in white who gradually transformed into a murderer of the rivers and lakes. It is said that in the fifth year of Tianqi, when the eunuch party was in power and the government was unstable, disputes in the world began again. On April 3rd, invited by the famous hero Ling Yufeng, more than a dozen of the world's most powerful people gathered on the island in the middle of the West Lake. Who knew that they would all be poisoned by the famous hero Daliang Gongzi? In order to make a promise three years ago, Ling Yufeng rushed to Hangzhou and exposed the massacre of his family three years ago in one fell swoop. But when the matter was over, he was involved in the treasure crisis again. Tian Ergeng, the commander of the Jin Yiwei, went to Hangzhou in person just to get clues to the treasure. On the top of the cypress, Ling Yufeng first fights Yang Mo and then rejects Chou Jin. After learning that the clue to the treasure is an ancient Sanskrit scripture, Ling Yufeng is surrounded. When the battle started, dozens of people were killed on the spot with a swing of the sword. Just so you readers know, this is a traditional martial arts story. There is no monster-fighting and upgrades (the protagonist's martial arts has reached an advanced level) and there is no harem stallion, but it has swords, lights, swords, wine, meat, and loyalty. This is a fantasy world, a world imagined in order to give myself an answer. If you have ever had doubts and want to put an end to your Jianghu world, welcome to my Jianghu world.

Book Title: "Rebirth: The First Koi" Author: Ye Cixue Type: Ancient Romance Word count: 490,000 Introduction: Lin Tiange, who has been waiting in line in the underworld for hundreds of years to be reincarnated, won the title of "The No. 1 Koi in the Underworld" by lottery. With the Koi Token, she chose to go back to the past among all the opportunities for reincarnation. This leads to the whole story of the collapse of the previous dynasty thirteen years ago, and the fate of the subjugated princess. In Qingcheng, everyone said that the second young lady of the Zhao family was ugly and cowardly, and was far less charming than the eldest lady. However, Miss Zhao Er took out a sign: As the number one koi in the underworld, short, ugly, black, poor, weak and stupid? It doesn't exist! Plot summary: In her previous life, she didn't know what was happening and she died at the hands of others. After hundreds of years in the underworld, she had figured out everything in the world. When the opportunity came again, she chose to be reborn without hesitation. The humiliation and cowardice of the previous life are only appearances in this life; all the things lost in the previous life must be grasped in this life. And all this started from the day Lin Tiange drew the Koi Token... Book review: There are many books about rebirth at the starting point, and there are many reasons for rebirth, but this is the first time I have seen one who was reborn due to the activities of the underworld and the drawing of a koi order. In addition to the novel setting, the author has performed well in writing, characterization and plot control. As an ancient romance novel, the flavor of the text should be biased towards ancient dialects. If there are too many modern expressions, it will easily cause confusion. The author's writing skills are very good, so there are no vernacular expressions in the choice of words and sentences that would make people laugh. At the same time, the author is also very knowledgeable and has studied classical literature, so he can talk about several literary and current political discussions mentioned in the article. While it is informative, it can also attract readers to continue reading to some extent. I secretly think that the characterization is a highlight of this book. Whether it is the gambling old man who likes to blow his beard who only appears once or the mean Li Yuan who is always by Lin Tiange's side, people can remember their appearance at a glance, not to mention Lin Tiange, who is born with a pair of cat eyes, calm and wise at a young age but short and dark-faced, and Yi Tingyi, who is born handsome and can pull a five-stone bow. Although there are many characters in the book, they all have their own characteristics. While the protagonist's IQ is online, the villains are not all mentally retarded. The battle of wits and courage between the two sides can make the story more interesting. The plot of this book is smooth and natural. Although there is not much plot conflict in the early stage, some refreshing moments can be arranged to win over the readers when necessary. But this refreshing point does not come suddenly, but is an inevitable part of the journey of writing. The distribution is reasonable and there is no sense of obtrusion at all. In addition, the protagonist Lin Tiange is reborn and is based on his previous life. It is reasonable to use this kind of plot without much conflict as a foreshadowing in the early stage. I believe that after the transition, the story will definitely become more and more exciting. After all, there are still so many secrets that have not been revealed, and so much of the past destiny has not been changed. Generally speaking, apart from the relatively slow development of this book, the only thing I can complain about is probably the introduction. No matter how you look at it, this introduction is somewhat inconsistent with the book. This koi is worth collecting

A treasured book, no need to comment

This is a story that takes place on Earth, but there are two worlds; There are cars and villas here, but there are also spirits and demons similar to the auras in fairy tales. When I first read it, I thought it was an urban novel about practitioners wandering around the city. As I got deeper, I discovered that it was a suspenseful supernatural drama that took place in the city and involved practitioners. Are you confused by me? Hey, this is a work that may make you dizzy when you first watch it. Then, according to the review format, let's first talk about the advantages of this book. Advantages of this book: First of all, Dou Niang Da D's talent and imagination must be affirmed. The world is divided into two parts: there are monsters in everything. In the first chapter, the author used her profound skills to show everyone a novel world; Secondly, the author has clear logic and is good at sticking points. He can set up suspense at the end of each chapter, giving people the urge to read more. According to the format, let's talk about the shortcomings. Disadvantages of this book: In an era where cool writing is rampant, the author uses some obscure words and concepts, which makes it difficult to read. Unless you are calm, it will be difficult to remember the relevant plot. Overall rating: 80 points This is a very good suspenseful and supernatural story, with rich content, rich characters, and a very smooth story flow. As long as you don't give up in the early stage, you will definitely be tortured by each suspense to the point where you can't stop.

Written before: My analysis of characters and storylines is weak, so I will focus a large part of my energy on the text during the reading process. Chapter 1 This is a story that travels back to the Ming Dynasty. The protagonist of the time travel is called Liu Hai (the one who plays Jin Chan). The protagonist's profession had a very resounding name in ancient times, called Mojin Xiaowei. There seems to be nothing to complain about in this chapter. The reasons are clearly explained and the scene descriptions are good. But in my reading process, there are still some gaps or things that don't feel smooth. I left this chapter in the article and said that you can check it out. You can pay attention to the following paragraphs. Chapter 2 Although the character of the bangs brings out some points, it is not enough to make people remember. Gu Yanqing is much better, at least she knows she is a ghostly girl. If a policeman dares to show off to the county magistrate, this should be a trap. It is also the first point of conflict in the first two chapters. I suggest Big D read through the article again. The words "" and "" in many places can be deleted, and the punctuation in several places is also a bit messy. Chapter 3 If Big D wants to write a complete story about the changes in bangs, I think he can write a separate chapter about dreams. The image of grandma can be reshaped, and the environment of feasting and feasting can also be filled with more ink. In the third chapter, it can be regarded as waiting for the protagonist to take action.

Introduction: At the age of sixteen, Yu Shijie experienced two major catastrophes in his life. His father and brother were killed in battle. He also lost his hereditary title of second-class marquis after being framed by a conspiracy. He was reduced to a fifth-class baron and was exiled to a place where there was no shit - Hongye collar. But precisely because of this, the protagonist awakened the lord system, first created a flame potion, and then developed a fire-attribute spiritual vein, becoming a rare owner of dual spiritual veins in the world. The matter did not end there. Because of the 100% success rate of the drug in the Lord's Space, the protagonist generously gave the flame potion to his subordinates and their horses. It can be predicted that when the protagonist has a complete set of perfect armaments, he will surely reach the pinnacle of his life, defeating the rich and handsome man and marrying Bai Fumei. A shocking battle will surely be staged with passion. Book review: Generally speaking, the author's writing is good, and the plot in the first twenty-five chapters is also smooth. Although there is not much plot conflict to attract passers-by, the smooth plot means that you can read on. Those who are patient can even accompany the protagonist in the book to reach the peak of life. Although there are a few modern jokes in the book that may make people laugh a little, but considering the time-travel character of the protagonist, it is still barely acceptable. In terms of characterization, I personally think this is the author's weakness. After reading 50,000 words, I didn't even remember the name of the protagonist. It's not that there aren't many scenes where the protagonist appears. It's just that there's nothing memorable about the protagonist. On the contrary, it was the horse named Ling Ling Yi that made me remember it. Finally, there are two points that I found while reading the book that seemed unreasonable: The first is the description of the protagonist's opening of a second spiritual vein in Chapter 7. This is obviously a creative act that can change the protagonist's life. The author has gone through everything in this process, leaving only a mouthful of old blood spurted out after success. The second is the reason why Yu Shanhe did not send troops to support when Sha Langqi led the werewolf army to invade Helan County in Chapter 10. The author clearly said the words that he knew about this, but did not follow it.

This is the first two-dimensional novel I have read. It's quite interesting to see the familiar anime characters appear. With a number of well-established characters such as "bird watching under the moon" Zhang Chulan and "stupid face" Feng Baobao, this book is guaranteed to be humorous. But while it is humorous, there is still room for improvement in this book. For example, the word "le" is used too much in the first half of the first chapter. In Chapter 2, the punctuation used when the system first appeared should be wrong. In addition to these two places, there are many places for modification in the text. (I have read Chapter 23) In other words, if the author can calm down and read it again from the beginning, and correct the unclear parts of the text, he can further improve the reading fluency of the work. I don't know much about the rhythm and other aspects of the work, so I can only give my opinions based on what I am good at.

Book title: "Conquering the Nine Heavens" Author: Lian Hu Type: Xianxia Word count: 110,000 [Books] Introduction: The sword wipes out the world's bandits, and the lotus purifies the innocent heart. Success or failure is not enough, blood is spilled in the sky. Gods, Buddhas and immortal ways are all Dharma doors. Laughing and cursing are all literary talents. Wherever the heart leads, there is no limit to reaching it. The starry sky is vast, where can the soul return? This is the story of a group of students who were accidentally transported to a foreign land, rose up in the stars, and returned to their homeland... Book review: Wu Laodong is said to be the burial place of Laozi, the founder of Taoism. In order to find out the secret, several young people came together. The cave is hundreds of miles deep and has complicated twists and turns. Inadvertently, several young people fell into the lower level of the cave. When they went out again, they found themselves on a small island surrounded by sea. There is no one on the island, but there are goats as big as calves. Everyone has been living on the island for several months. There is some hypocrisy and some exposure of human nature. Finally, it rained heavily and the sea water rose. Just when there was nothing to do, a magical rainbow appeared in the sky. Everyone stepped on the rainbow, and a passionate story about the rise of a foreign land to feed the earth began to unfold... [Image] As you can see from the title, "Conquering the Dao for Nine Heavens" is a grand story that takes place in a foreign land. In the foreign world, there are immortals and mortals, long swords to defeat bandits, and gods and Buddhas to slay demons. The author's writing style is delicate and brilliant. In Exploring the Secret of Wu Lao Cave, the author successfully depicts a mysterious and unpredictable place, and can adjust the atmosphere. The flow of the pen can lead the readers to make them feel immersed in the scene. In the section about island survival, the author first writes about the beauty of the island, and then writes about the evil of people's hearts. Although the two are extreme, they are transitional and natural, without any sense of abruptness. The author obviously also put a lot of thought into the character description. Whether it is Fang Tang, who is suitable to be a commander, Gao Guangyao, who is suitable to be a general, or the "hero" Jiang Xing, who has been talking about secrets since he entered the old cave, the author is trying hard to portray his inherent characteristics and make them vivid and three-dimensional. In the first few chapters, none of these characters are established. But as the story continues to develop, under various specific situations, these characters all show their inherent personalities to the fullest. There are wise and brave people, and there are also reckless and belligerent people. As far as the overall impression is concerned, the author is very ambitious and intends to write a story that spans the starry sky. This story may be a bit lengthy in the early stages, but in the slowly flowing text, the lengthy words can be transformed into clear pictures, allowing you to see each scene clearly as if in a painting. And it can be seen from the words of the old Taoist priests in the Taoist temple that the divine rainbow has reappeared, and the entire starry sky is aware of their arrival, and everyone who comes from the earth is very human... Every prophecy predicts that the story in the future will become more and more exciting.

Book title: "Abducting a Male Protagonist to Cultivation as an Immortal" Author: Xiao Yao Genre: Fantasy Romance Word count: 530,000 Introduction: This is the story of an ordinary girl from Kyushu, who stepped into the world of immortality alone, rose up all the way, was proud of herself for nine days, and also found a male protagonist... Plot summary: Not long ago, Ling tide was a little girl who was favored by her master, but her heart was unpredictable. When her master was in seclusion, she was not only framed by her senior sister and became lame, but also sold by her unscrupulous father to an evil person to make a cauldron. After a desperate battle, she not only lost her mother, but also lost the possibility of practicing cultivation again. At this time, the water spirit pendant given to her by her mother before she died began to shine, and the journey of a missing girl's rise began... Book review: The author's writing style is brisk and smooth, and the storyline is compact and impressive. The novel begins with a battle. The monks who are besieging him describe him as insignificant, but the person being besieged is a girl who is only eleven or twelve years old. When the little girl was isolated and struggling, she only had her father's vicious words to deal with her. At the end of the battle, although the little girl was temporarily freed from the clutches of the devil, she also lost her mother and stopped practicing. I have to say that the author's ability to create characters is first-rate. In the opening chapter, the little girl Ling tide, who is isolated and has been hit hard, makes people feel sympathetic. She was originally a lively and lovely girl, but due to worldly interests, she had to draw her sword to protect herself. When I saw the chapter where she cut off her father's hand with a sword and covered her mother's grave with fallen leaves, I couldn't help but want to hide her behind me. The author is also good at capturing human nature. After a disaster, there must be a stroke of good luck to wash away the sadness. Otherwise, if the novel only describes the suffering of the protagonist, it will be counterproductive. The author knew this well and gave the little girl the blessing of a water god and a sacred beast. In addition to the protagonist Ling tide, the characters of Wu Yifan, Xiao Ling, Han Kuang and others are also vivid. Whether it is the cute Wu Yifan who is inexperienced in the world, the cold and handsome son of a wealthy family Xiao Ling, or the seemingly rough but thoughtful Han Kuang, they all feel that they can be the male protagonists, but they are not male protagonists. If you ask me who the male protagonist is and what he looks like. Sorry, maybe the author wants to give him a stunning appearance, so he has been preparing for it. Therefore, in the twenty-three chapters I have read, I did not find any textual information related to the male protagonist. Maybe it's because the protagonist is still too young. He's only eleven or twelve years old, so he can't be so precocious. Therefore, although I really want to see the story of abduction and being abducted between the two, considering the reality, I am still willing to wait. When the girl next door has grown up, it's time for the abducted male protagonist Shi Shiran to appear. By then, with the author's writing style, there will definitely be a lot of lightness and sweetness.

Title: "War of the Evil King" Author: Zhetian Type: Martial Arts Fantasy Word count: 230,000 Introduction: After Lu Xiaoxie woke up laughing from his dream, he found that the whole world had changed. Not to mention the advanced technology, there were still warriors everywhere. And he himself also has a strange master, and she is a woman. As a result, all kinds of ridiculous stories happened. Xiao Xie looked at the people in the audience and said loudly: "Our goal is..." A group of teenagers responded in unison: "Make trouble! Make trouble! Make trouble!" This is the story of a man with evil intentions but a monster wandering around the world. Plot summary: After a sweet dream, Lu Xiaoxie traveled through time and occupied the body of a young man with the same name. In the dream, he laughed endlessly because he became the god of gambling. After waking up from the dream, he became the young boy who was beaten every day by the beautiful landlady in Shuang Zai Lai Hotel. On this day, the beautiful landlady changed her temper and secretly entered the room to treat him tenderly. When he was frightened, the landlady handed him an envelope and told him to deliver it to Master Xiaoyue, the head of the Emei Sect as soon as possible. The sea is wide enough for fish to leap, and the sky is high enough for birds to fly. Once he was free, Lu Xiaoxie felt relaxed both physically and mentally. Along the way, he first beat up a bad driver, and then became a hero to save a beautiful woman. After finally traveling to Emei, it was at the critical moment of Emei's life and death. Driven by a passionate little heart, he rushed to Emei. While rescuing the innocent and beautiful little nun, he also exposed Emei Xiaolan's conspiracy in one fell swoop. After the crisis in Emei was over, Lu Xiaoxie also came down the mountain. Just when he was worried about the money in his hand, he met the little nun who followed him all the way down the mountain. Since then, with the beauty in hand, Lu Xiaoxie's journey of making trouble has gradually begun... Book Review: This is a funny martial arts novel that will get you 404 if you are not careful. The author truly deserves to be a veteran. Whether it is the title or the content, the author can drive the car to the end. But this kind of dirty work is not vulgar. The author has reached a certain level of dirty work. Even when the words are finished, the readers are still filling their minds with various images. (For the sake of image, should I make a statement here?) While it is dirty, this is also a martial arts novel that will make you laugh like a pig from time to time. The author's writing is strong, and while he successfully depicts the world, the dialogue is also humorous and amusing. Not only that, the plot of the novel is compact, and the story progresses without any sloppiness. In terms of character creation, whether it is Lu Xiaoxie who is evil-hearted and likes to pretend to be a pig and eat tigers, Ye Feifei who is so simple-minded that he can deceive anyone, or Yan Xiaoyu, a sex devil who has his life goal of sleeping with a hundred women, people can easily remember their appearance. Like taking powdered medicine, this is also an addictive novel. After reading the previous chapter, you can't help but read the next chapter. Because you know there's something in the next chapter that will make you laugh or rave about it. Because of its magical power, I read dozens of chapters and put it down until I had to type. Of course, there are also shortcomings in the article. For example, the appearance of the ultra-modern vocabulary "Douyin" will make people instantly confused. But thinking that the protagonist is a young man who has traveled from the earth in the 21st century,

I seem to have read Gu Long's novel again. The writing style is refined and sophisticated, the words are flying, free and happy, and like the swift knife, each knife hits an amazing position exactly. In other people's words, this book is also the beginning of the world. The sound of horses' hooves is loud, and a drunken man is lying on a flat cart. The charming girl was furious and entered the world. The unusual encounter between Yang Rufeng and Yan Dan has destined them to have unusual experiences. After all, how can they, who are guilty of possessing a jade and possessing unique skills but not knowing how to hide their clumsiness, survive alone in this hustle and bustle? So there was Yehe Changshou, and then there was the white jade unicorn. Except that there are too many characters in the beginning, which makes it a bit difficult to read, the plot of this book is so compact and impressive that I couldn't help but write down so many words of praise. One last thing, martial arts should be like this.

More than two hundred years ago, Zheng Banqiao wrote a poem after being inspired by the picture of a knight-errant: The sky is covered with snow, why is Hu Wei traveling with a sword? If you want to talk about things on your mind, go to the restaurant together. In the poem, the poet asked the knight in the painting: Why is he still swimming with his sword in this heavy snowy sky? In the poem, the knight did not give an answer, but the uneducated dog D transformed into a knight and wrote his own answer with his own pen. If you ask me why I swim with my sword, well, I will answer you with Xiao Sijun: This world is vast and boundless, and the scenes are infinite. Although I am sixteen years old, I can't see anything. As the saying goes, if you don't know everything, you won't understand everything; if you don't know thousands of miles, you won't know how far it is. Moreover, if I don't visit these great rivers and mountains, wouldn't I be wasting my youth? Then, one man, one horse and one long sword went out of the mountain gate and entered the rivers and lakes. But this time when he entered the Jianghu, he was surrounded by everything, and all kinds of chaos in the Jianghu kept coming one after another. Although the author claims to be uneducated, whether it is the five-character poem or the author's meticulous writing style, it can be seen that the author is a truly educated person. The author wants to write about a world of his own. Since it is his own, he will try his best to decorate his own house and make every detail perfect. Therefore, the author's writing style is extremely detailed. Regardless of the characters or action scenes, the author uses his own pen to help them create a text portrait, making the people come to life before their eyes, and the swords and swords colliding before their eyes. The story of this book also progresses smoothly. The author walks step by step, gradually leading to the battle between good and evil. Since then, a world of young people has been completely established.

Book title: "Shenzhou Demon Suppression Record" Author: Bingyan Red Dragon Type: Martial Arts Word count: 310,000 Introduction: The Jingyu Demon Sect has been destroyed, and the four demons are on the run. The hero Yue Xiaochuan and Kunlun's first disciple Xuanyangzi are ordered to hunt down each other, together with their close friends and fellow practitioners, in order to atone for their past mistakes. There is an endless journey in the world, and the road to suppress the demon is full of hardships and dangers. Good and evil characters such as the centenary witch, the Miaojiang girl, the Xingyue couple, the mysterious medicine man, etc. Have appeared one by one, implicating hidden forces such as Sanxiangtian, the Seven Heroes of Dingshi, and the Wanying Xinjiao. Under the surface of the calm world, there is actually an undercurrent surging. The knights on the top of Beimang Mountain died heroically, and the three sides of the Luoshui River were revealed. A new round of martial arts turmoil was about to break out. Book review: In 1988, the first Pili puppet show "Thunderbolt Golden Light" was broadcast, and it attracted countless audiences with its plot that was both real and imaginary, interlocking but independent. By the time "Perak Kaitian Ji: The God of Creation" was launched in 2014, more than a thousand episodes of Perak Puppet Show had been aired. Why I want to introduce the development experience of Pili Puppet Opera here is not for advertising (it seems that there is no need for advertising). In fact, when I read this novel, I unconsciously brought into my mind the narration of Pili Puppet Opera with a weird accent. For example, the following paragraph: The heart-wrenching pain caused the originally handsome face to become ferocious and distorted in an instant. In the sudden strange atmosphere, when the Demon King trembled and put his blood-stained fingers into his mouth, an extremely strong color of life suddenly returned to his face. In addition, there are many fighting scenes that bring me into the puppet show I have seen before. It was like watching the flash of swords and shadows on the screen again, and the energy shook the mountains and rivers. The prosperity of the author's writing style can be seen from this. The content of the book is as stated in the introduction. It begins with the World Justice League rounding up the remnants of the Jingyu Demon Sect. The rounders include young heroes with superb martial arts skills, and there are also masters who are more scheming than Zhuge. No matter what, it should be an end in one fell swoop. But at this time, the author changed his writing style and successfully created the image of the great devil Ye Xingge as a scheming and sinister character, while also leaving enough suspense. From this we can see what kind of turmoil will be caused when the heroes in the later chapters go down the mountain to slay the demons. The plot of this book is closely linked and full of foreshadowings. The characters are also vivid. Among the decent characters are Yan Xingtian, who is extremely intelligent and compassionate for the common people, and Fan Fei, a young hero who is calm and composed when facing a battle but frequently makes mischief in front of his sweetheart. Among the villains, in addition to the above-mentioned vicious evil king Ye Xingge, there is also Pu Piaopiao who is loyal and unswerving in love. Of course, here are just a few of the many living characters. This should be a group portrait martial arts novel. Everyone can be the protagonist, so everyone has their own distinctive characteristics. Overall, this article has few shortcomings, except that too many characters at the beginning can make people confused and the long chapter of 10,000 words can dissuade first-time readers. It can bring you a grand river and lake, and at the same time, it can also allow you to personally experience the love and chivalrous spirit of children in the river and lake.