Someone is Killing People in the World

It has both traditional martial arts and Jin Yong Gu Long style. This book tells the story of the young talent Ling Yufeng. Because of his great fame, he was involved in a conspiracy. In order to clear away the suspicion, he went to Yanyu Tower alone to defend himself. However, all the heroes in the world wanted to get rid of him, including Jin Yiwei, who were hostile to him. At this time, there are also some people who believe in him and are willing to follow him to uncover the truth, so the story begins here... Highlights of this book 1. After consulting a lot of information, I chose the Wei Zhongxian period, and at the same time chose a familiar city, which makes sense; 2. The overall character creation is pretty good, including Sheng Xue Ling Yufeng in white, Chu Jiangyu, the owner of Misty Rain, Yang Nianru who speaks uprightly, Yan Peiwei, the protector in black, Chu Jiangyan, a tricky girl, and Liu Wanqing, a talented woman in the world. Each has its own characteristics and is well matched; 3. The plot of the first act is generally smooth. Although there are some flaws, the flaws are generally not concealed. What should be explained is also explained; (Xiaobai may not accept such a complicated appearance method) 4. The visuals are quite strong and the fighting scenes are quite complete; 5. It starts with a weird conspiracy and has a certain degree of suspense (it would be better if the introduction could be slightly more refined, it is too short) 6. The original flavor of martial arts is not perfect, but it has a strong Jianghu flavor, at least the direction is correct. A few flaws 1. In the dialogue in the first chapter, names such as "Li Ping" are not familiar to everyone. Without proper explanation, people's faces will be blurred. Even if they are passing characters, they must be described rather than just a joke; 2. In the story in Chapter 3, the word "he" is used in several places without knowing what it refers to. The story is a story, so use names as much as possible. Is the whole story too perfunctory to protect business and eliminate theft? If the story is told like this, it would be better to call the whole book "Slaughtering the Rivers and Lakes" and complete it; 3. The falcon is staring at the chickens, but the young man in black is facing only Ling Yufeng. This problem is universal: the wording is not precise; Nangong Jie uses the female idiom of "sharp teeth and sharp mouth"? Isn't it better to talk with each other? 4. "The Laughing Knife, the undefeated murderer twenty years ago?" This sentence seems to have no problem, but in context, the Laughing Knife is clearly a sword technique. This is probably the biggest problem with the book, it is specious, ambiguous, and incomplete; 5. There is no special description for important objects, such as a certain letter or some kind of physical evidence, which is a bit left and right, resulting in scattered scenes. Although it is not easily noticeable, you will feel that everything is the key point; 6. The martial arts moves still seem a bit thin, and you can't feel where Ling Yufeng's unique skills are, and they are not prominent enough.

Rating; eight points. Story Category; Martial Arts, Jianghu. The story takes place on a hero who has been famous for a long time. Because he carries something that makes people's eyes bright, there are always unscrupulous people who want to harm the protagonist. And our story begins. Because of the murder of the protagonist, the four sects were tit for tat, but he! Definitely not ordinary... "My legs are moving forward like the spring breeze, leisurely and comfortable. No one can disturb me. The youth of my life is still there, waiting for the beautiful woman to fall into my arms." Evaluation: The author's writing is good, and the plot is interesting. To be honest, I really want to see what happens next, but I personally don't like martial arts novels. If there are other flaws, the writing style needs to be improved.

First impression, well written. Someone is being slaughtered, so is it the human being or this seemingly peaceful world? The good reviews in the comment area attracted me, and I happily clicked in to read it.

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