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Comment later -------------------- It's been a long time since I've seen the author's new book, and there's already a lot to update. As soon as the protagonist traveled to the ninja world, he was read by Madara Infinite Moon 233 But after all, he is a decent man. In the Tsukuyomi world, by correcting the character's deviant personality (which can change the memory of people in reality), he can obtain points to upgrade his skills (by stealing eye power). There are lots of laughs in the early stage, which is very interesting. The unfolding of the plot later fully demonstrates the author's imagination, but the plot doesn't matter. My focus is on how to correct the personality deviations of the characters in the Tsukuyomi world. For example, the Toad Immortal is fluttering in white clothes, as gentle as jade, and has not grown old. He is a best-selling author of children's stories. This needs to be corrected hahahahahaha. My regret is that the author's writing power is still a little lacking, and the development of the plot is a bit vague.

Comment later, I'm tired. -------------------- The super slow-burning article about farming and hegemony is the struggle for hegemony in Europe and Asia, and it is not just a place like the Han Dynasty. Because it's super slow to get started, I'm too lazy to talk about it. Friends who are interested in fictional historical novels about magic modification with explosive force value are worth reading. It's a very interesting setting. God's stone. Military generals can cultivate internal energy, and counselors can cultivate spiritual power. The legion has cloud energy and military soul, and the counselor has spiritual talent. The second master cuts through the city wall with one sword, and Lu Bu, the best in the world, is still the best Lu Bu in the world. Very nice. Because the author is a woman, the characters are quite cute.

It's good, it's really good. Said by the few among the great masters who are serious about writing articles. There's not much else to say, just talk about some of the things I don't adapt to. The rhythm is very tight, so tight that you will feel depressed and out of breath if you read it continuously. There are many foreshadowings for a big plot, and it is quite difficult to guess the plot before and after analysis.

I refused to read the live broadcast text at first, but when I saw it was an elf text, I clicked in (now the unified translation is Pokémon, but I'm really not used to being called Pokemon and elves too many times). The writing is good, and it smells really good. As the name suggests, he won the championship at the beginning. He accepted the entrustment of Alpaca and other big bosses and launched a live broadcast to promote Pokémon in all the worlds in order to obtain fresh meat and spread the Pokémon species. Currently appearing are Naruto Pirate Slime and others. Naruto Pirates is also divided into different worlds. For example, in the world where Luffy has not yet gone to sea, Garp learned through the live broadcast that Luffy would become a pirate, and directly asked Akainu to go to the East China Sea. As a result, Akainu replaced the red-haired character and broke his hand and gave him a hat. Luffy decided to become the King of the Navy. This idea is really interesting. Of course, the main plot is an adventure in the world of Pokémon. The most recent plot is the Manaphy theatrical version. The protagonist uses the help of the mythical beast boss to recruit Madara, Uncle Long and other bosses to explore together.

It's been a while since I updated my book list. Says the new book by the author of The Crown of Silence. From the background of the book and the arrangement of the fate of the characters, it is a magnificent (secondary two) ancient Greek-style classical tragedy with gorgeous ancient Roman-style decorations. Well, to put it simply, it is quite high-definition, the characters are all tragic, and they are destined to have a not-so-good ending, in order to show the great spirit of man. But in terms of narrative style, emmm, it's the kind of gag type that, although it's really serious when it's serious, it can't help but make you laugh a few times. The conflict between this kind of happy and funny character and the depressive background is quite serious. If you are not careful, the writing will collapse, and even veteran authors are prone to overturning. But so far, it is still very good. This book also covers a lot of Japanese games, dnd, coc, dnd, and JOJO type memes, so to sum up, this book is aimed at a very niche audience (the most recent copy has so many elements of running groups that even the author's follow-up readers can't understand it, so it has been basically deleted. It's quite hardcore.) There was a place inside that made me laugh for a long time, The missionary singing in rural areas is really interesting, so I won't write it down here. Go watch it yourself, hahaha. The sad part is that that part of the chapter was really interesting, but at some point a while ago I swallowed all the chapters, :-(

Although the descriptions in some places are still relatively green, the atmosphere has been created. The male protagonist is the initial elf Bobo, and Golden Finger has a relatively low sense of presence. -------------------- The growth is slow and the pace is slow. It will be very boring to catch up with the novel. It will be more comfortable to read continuously after gaining weight. In fact, there are quite a lot of flaws, but after all, Pokemon fan fiction comes with its own favorability, so it's still bearable.

Comment later, I have read it before, and later ordered dozens of chapters. Then I forgot about this book. The protagonist's profession is Gwent Master (Dense Fog), and he serves as the political commissar in this game. Added a lot of Warhammer settings... It took so long that I forgot about it. I'll make a long comment after reading it. -------------------- It borrows the setting of Warhammer, has a strong DND style, and also contains many conspiracy theory game articles. Chaos's eyes gradually focused on the planet where the protagonist was located. At the same time, many low-end versions of listeners appeared in the world, and technology advanced rapidly. (The standard version is Full Metal Panic. After ten years of delays, the TV series finally released its fourth season... Production team: I know you guys can't just wait for the Flame Demon Sword. How about we save all the previous budget until the last episode? Audience: Bah, even if I starve to death and am blind, I won't watch you collapse into shit! Episode 12 is airing~~~~ Audience: The moving flaming magic sword! ! So delicious! The ship company should spit out the fifth season! ) In order to prevent the invasion of Chaos, Daga used black technology to create a game (you will really die if you die too much) for everyone to play to improve their combat effectiveness and at the same time identify those infected by Chaos or those who tend to worship Chaos. In this context, the protagonist comes to the game, as a demon hunter, and wahhhhg the story of the battle between order and chaos in the past. The male protagonist's IQ tends to be reckless online, because the effect of the initial talent Chaos Enemy, blood, is particularly effective against chaotic creatures. Picking up Brother Drag's beacon and activating it gained Brother Drag's attention - of course, I think it is because of the special ability of the beacon that the protagonist gained the favor of the four vendors 2333. The writing style is surprisingly sophisticated, not as watery as a certain cultivator group. Of course, the author's portrayal of the characters is still lacking. Sometimes, the images of minor characters and even characters with more plots are a bit stereotyped. The depiction of the scene could be improved, and the name is really useless... As mentioned before, this article borrows a lot of Warhammer settings, DND style, and many interesting jokes. You will know it after reading it (the green skin is really fun and funny). Audiences who like this type of article may wish to pay attention!

Comments to follow -------------------- A new work by the ancient great god Yanyu Jiangnan. Emmm Dao Yuan Fu Tu has gone cold, and King of Evernight is unfinished. It's really sad... Maybe the great writers don't bother writing anymore when their incomes are high after they become famous. That's too far. In interstellar literature, the routines are relatively old. If you look carefully, Yan Nan's articles allude to many things in reality. I was a little worried about the writing failure, and the early atmosphere was a bit entertainment and game-like, but out of my fondness for interstellar literature and my belief in the author, I still received it on the bookshelf. -------------------- After following more than 100 chapters of updates, the winter hunting is getting better. The tension of the plot is astonishing. The structure of the setting is gradually unfolded, and the shaping of the atmosphere and worldview is gradually becoming more vivid and real. Very strong. -------------------- Make a short review so far. Three major routes are set, biochemical genes, mechanical weapons, and chip enhancement. The protagonist (who is an experimental subject) is the route of chip enhancement. It has a prey feeling - it accepts data programs through the data interface, and assists gun pressing and fighting like a plug-in. It's simple. I personally like this kind of future technology (game style). The plot in the academy was a bit unbearable to be honest, it was quite cliche. But as mentioned in the previous review, it was obviously much better after Winter Hunting, and the tension and climax of the plot were both enjoyable. Looking forward to the follow-up performance.

It sat on the bookshelf gathering dust for a long time. Comment later. -------------------- Watched it again from the beginning. ٩(๑´0`๑)۶ I'll write a review tomorrow. ٩(๑´0`๑)۶ -------------------- To protect the peaceful life of the flower growers, one of the five founders of an unknown organization made a mistake in his nth reincarnation and lost all his previous memories. However, under the arrangement of a thousand-year-old gay master, he still muddleheadedly embarked on his originally planned cultivation path. I write by myself on a daily basis, and rely on book reviews for my imagination, so the truth-telling pattern of combat training and other things is up and down, with some abruptness between before and after, and some small foreshadowings have turned into pitfalls. Perhaps this is what is called crowdfunding to write an outline (the dog author must have been peeking at the book reviews!), But the daily plot is written very well. There are a lot of sensational parts later on, ranging from the love of a man and a woman to the feelings of family and country. Naturally, there is no forced sensationalism to make it embarrassing. ٩(*´◒`*)۶ As expected, urban writers with a few skills are very good at depicting characters and describing interactions between characters. KFC, Xiao Yao, Zhu Er, Chen Dinggen, Sword King... The image creation of these supporting characters can be said to be vivid. What impressed me the most was Ji Deken, who lived for who knows how long. Although he was gay (crossed out), he had that kind of gentleness that penetrated into his bones. He struggled to follow the trend and tried hard to blend in among young people, but he couldn't. The kind of tiredness that has silently guarded the flower grower for thousands of years, the kind of tiredness that has taken away almost everyone he knows but cannot take away himself. It's really touching. He is as immortal as Liu Changan, the protagonist of the new book "The Liar Girl Next Door", but his mentality is different. The behavior is in line with the character setting (don't write about this kind of old monster with high IQ or high experience if you don't have the writing skills, it's just funny to watch.). Updates are extremely unstable, and I almost forgot about this book after it was put on the shelves. -------------------- QAQ hasn't been updated in almost a month -------------------- It's so bad. Hey, damn it.

灵气复苏改 评论后补٩(๑´0`๑)۶ ————————————————————— (づ●─●)づ剑典 此乃我毕生所学传授与你，只想托你给我老相识带几句话：灵气复苏是谎言！不要飞升！╰_╯ 飞升大佬神识碎片这么跟主角说道。 幼苗一枚，各方面都不错。嗯。 老作者笔力，不是小白文（严肃脸） 因为是幼苗真没有啥好写的啦，就这样啦！ ————————————————————— 最近男频文走帅气路线的越来越多了（呸！）看作者如何侧面夸主角帅气以及本章说的呸挺欢乐的哈哈哈。不过讲真高颜值更适合展开情感线。 感觉最近这些剧情也总结不出个短评，就这样吧……

There are books that have been lying on the bookshelf for a long time. I kept them and forgot about them. Learn about the new book by the author of The Age of Countercurrent Innocence. -------------------- Han Qingyu was born in an era when epics were created, and he lived peacefully for nineteen years. He never thought that one day he would become a star in the epic. Then, an accident happened. A knife was forced into the boy's hand, and he began to have to face everything he knew nothing about: (Zenith Invasion, Azure Alliance, Source Energy Three-Dimensional Mobile Device, The Only Witness Legion; Exile Blade, Stream Sharpness... He has a small mind. He is "The Young Major" printed on cars and high-rise buildings during the era of comprehensive conscription. He will make that knife in the Zenith War. The author's introduction is well written (the introduction content is actually more practical than pasting and copying the introduction. (•̀Ω•́)✧ -------------------- Articles about spiritual energy resuscitation, about how the spiritual energy is turned into source energy. Start by absorbing 100% of source energy - a talent visible to the naked eye (thumbs-up toothy smile. Jpg) I have to say that the author's writing style is really good, and he has profound skills in shaping the background, environment and atmosphere (the background of the early reform period), and in portraying the characters' personalities. What satisfies me the most is the image of the protagonist, a smart and cunning farmer: usually honest and kind, but when it comes to interests, he will go to extreme lengths for a little profit, and even shows a cruel and extreme character - of course, as a young man, he has not lost his youthfulness and still retains some spirituality. The most traditional figure of a flower grower, from ancient times to the present, is a farmer influenced by Confucianism. Kindness, simplicity, simplicity, compassion, and stubbornness. Cultivate one-third of an acre of land, marry a wife, raise a family, and work hard to live a good life. But when it comes to conflicts of interest, they are the most cunning and stubborn people, and may even become extremely cruel and cold-blooded. In fact, the protagonists in many novels also have this kind of shadow. In the middle and late stages, the image of wanton behavior and double standards is not the image of the peasants who successfully revolted and became the landlord class? However, most of the peasants in feudal society were ignorant, so when they ruled the society, they would be more brutal. And in these novels, the protagonist is very smart, and has received a long education, and behaves like this, which is very conflicting - if you travel to a different world, a society where the people are not smart, and become the same people, it will also be very conflicting if you think about it carefully. After all, to be able to become a top strong man and become a ruler, the measures taken must have the deep influence of education.

First of all, this idea is eye-catching One sentence is enough for the introduction On the daily life of people with extraordinary looks. The imagination is quite big, and the writing rhythm is more sophisticated. But it will be more painful when the novelty wears off. I hope the author can write the daily plot development well. -------------------- Sure enough, how can I write this daily routine... At least I don't see what the next goal is. The protagonist of urban novels must grow and change, and have goals to have the desire to continue reading. An idea alone cannot last long.

The writing is very good, and I picked it up by scanning the book list. Comment later -------------------- What did someone say? What did someone say? What did someone say? These are all practices (I'm too lazy to copy and paste the author's introduction. This is roughly what it means. -------------------- Fairy tales. After reading more than ten chapters, the narration is very sophisticated, the plot is good, the logic is correct, and the dialogue is reasonable and reasonable. It is very comfortable to watch (not that I despise those clichés, but I just cannot accept it based on simple logical analysis. The dialogue between the characters is really embarrassing, they are the same best friend, and their speech is exaggerated). I feel that the author is better at writing dialogues, and I don't think I can see a little more graphic descriptions. I look forward to seeing more in the future. Some of the little details are really interesting. For example, the cat named Chen Pi hahaha. The author said that he has an outline and hopes that there will be no eunuchs. If he keeps this pace, he will hopefully become famous in one book! Come on! -------------------- The connection in the Youzhou chapter is a bit stiff, and the level has dropped a bit. -------------------- It's on the shelves, and I'm so excited to order it for the first time... It's really well written. There are a lot more characters appearing in the Youzhou chapter and they are quite important, but the author's writing skills are a bit weak...

The writing is very good. Comment later. -------------------- It's a super seedling, so it's hard to comment, but the author's writing skills are very strong - Uemoto Hengdao also proves this - but sometimes it's easy to suffer from literary youth (￣^￣)ゞ. When it comes to horizontal swords, I have a lot of resentment... I opened high and fell low... Choosing examples familiar to readers for comparison, the author's writing style has the flavor of the Grand Duke of Fenghuo, and the two works he wrote are reminiscent of fairy tales such as Jiang Ye. I'm a novice at writing, and even though I'm a big fan of formulaic writing, I can still dig out a few books from the pile of books that tell stories seriously, and I'm touched. I hope the rhythm of this book won't break down, come on!

First of all, this book has a lot of flaws, but I personally can tolerate it. Text below. -------------------- First is the introduction of the work, emmm I don't want to write orz So let's just copy and paste hehehe. After the catastrophe, mankind faced the greatest dilemma, energy scarcity! A brand new profession was born. They can extract iron, copper, phosphorus, gold, silicon, carbon... Do you want to have the most powerful ability in the world? If so, please prove your strength and ignite your youth with fire and blood! When a "high-profile" boy hears this voice in his mind, he is destined to go further and further down the path of the devil... Hey, please pay attention, high energy is coming! -------------------- It's very imaginative and very innovative. The author is an experienced author and his rhythm control is quite good. But there are quite a few flaws. The cancer system, the tasks issued are extremely poisonous, and the dissuasion +1 The protagonist's IQ is not directly proportional to his behavior, and he will be persuaded to quit +1 The description of the battle is beyond words. There are other things I won't talk about... Although, although, although there are many shortcomings. But! ! ! The article itself is very enjoyable, and the ideas are relatively novel, so I thought it was quite good to have fun reading it. -------------------- Instead, he posted the mission himself, and then the protagonist stupidly set a trap for himself (ノдヽ)