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The title of the book is seriously inconsistent with the content of the article. Comment later -------------------- orz Sure enough, just write your comments casually ;-) The Crown Prince starts at the beginning, and the quasi-sage Old Master comes with him. After the old master became a saint, he sacrificed himself to supplement the qualifications of the protagonist, and then the protagonist prepared to return to Beijing to regain the throne from his aunt. On the way back to Beijing, he killed the quasi-sage old lady - the one who had robbed the protagonist's grandmother of his grandfather. The aunt and the protagonist had a good relationship when they were young. When the main protagonist's father died young, the grandmother could only let the aunt go - the Zhao family was too small. My aunt doesn't want to come down now. After returning to the capital, there was the Spring Hunt Crowning Ceremony. During the Crowning Ceremony, my aunt climbed the nine-step ladder to try to become a saint. Tianji Pavilion went crazy and caused trouble. The old and immortal emperor of the Bird Kingdom made a surprise attack on the imperial capital. The protagonist finally kills the two emperors and becomes emperor. I didn't watch it after that. (Orz written based on impression may be wrong) Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing style is good. The writing style of the books included in this book shelf must be at least good, average or above. Secondly, the old routine is written with new ideas, which is more flavorful. Besides the shortcomings, the image portrayal (°_°) can be strengthened. The group portrait scenes were obviously a bit behind the times. The rhythm of the writing is a bit off. It seems that there are some problems mainly in the setting of combat power. Let's get food and grass up and down. I am a new author and my writing skills are really good. Come on!

Non-strict dnd class (I don't know if my judgment is wrong) copy flow text. Personal favorite: The bald man! Fist of the North Star déjà vu! Damn it! The author's personal items are also pretty good. Personally, I think areas that can be improved: details, such as before and after data, hard-core background settings, etc., Can feel fuller. There is also the character of the supporting characters. Ig: That's it! A reckless man's ambition is to move forward inexorably.

Similar to the genius on the left and the madman on the right, the author's imagination or personal experience is really amazing. Comments will be added later -------------------- Go to the search engine to find another version with a finale called Game World. That version is more interesting. The chapter names are different orz

The game system is a Western fantasy novel about another world. Needless to say, pneumonia. What I like personally: The magnificent description of plot scenes, and the sweet interactions between the male and female protagonists. What I personally think needs improvement: Do you still remember the previous Heart of Amber and the Ancient Heart of Canaan (orz is really afraid of suddenly entering the palace) Whether you like this type of writing or not depends entirely on whether you can accept this kind of Western fantasy book with a game system. In this regard, as the originator of the amber stream, Pneumonia's writing is still not something to say. -------------------- The point of showing off in a shameful way is a matter of opinion.

Martial Arts. The routine is relatively old, the grandfather is always with you, and the neighbor is an expert hermit. But the author writes very well. What I like personally: The protagonist is a non-waste character who is facing growth. The interactions between the main characters are described very comfortably. Zhang Chi controls the plot rhythm well. What I personally think can be improved: Because the routines are relatively old, the character templates can still be felt. The group scenes still need to be strengthened. There are flaws, but overall it feels great. In addition, the author has read less than half of the previous book, Patrolling the Worlds, and feels that this book is a lot better than the previous one! -------------------- Follow-up evaluation: I personally feel that the subsequent plot development is a bit inexplicable and the continuity is a bit poor (probably due to the author Wenqing's illness) It can be considered a food-level book. I repeat, the author has made great progress. I believe he can write better and better in the future.