Messy Food and Grass 2.0 [All Completed]

8.1/10 Meow It is an improvement compared to the previous books. Whether it's character description or story rhythm Of course, the rhythm of the story may also be caused by Sic Niang rarely having convulsions. In general, it is a small infinite flow architecture based on a Shinto setting view. It's more of a man-eating radio wave, so it's good if you match it up. I prefer to see this kind of biased setting Nothing is too much trouble

6.3/10 I haven't finished it yet. I really can't stand the last two hundred chapters. This is a book with obvious advantages and disadvantages Advantages: The design and writing of the rules-based ghost stories are good. The atmosphere in the early and middle stages is very well created. The overall framework improves the worldview and has certain expansion potential. Disadvantages: The text is terrible, especially the plot related to the love line. The interaction between the female characters is terrible. The above problems plus the increasingly watery chapter plot in the middle period are simply terrible. It requires quantum speed reading to find fun in the huge invalid text. However, this is another novel that pursues details. You have to jump and stare at the paragraphs to find keywords. It is really called an intermediate quantum speed reading exam. There are many books in the book review section that I couldn't stand at the beginning but say the later ones are good. My opinion is exactly the opposite. In the early stage, it was mostly because the author failed to explain the protagonist's action logic and writing problems that the intermittent posts were too violent. Turning off intermittent posts, the reading experience was still very good. There are constantly new rules and worldviews combined with a little supernatural atmosphere. I think it is okay to give a 7/10 rating for the first 100 chapters. The middle section 100-300 is the most worth reading, and it is also the essence of the book. Moreover, the middle section has been screened by readers and feels much more comfortable. I can even give it an 8-point rating. You don't need to watch it after you go back to the teacher's office after participating in the battle in the art building. It's really torture after that. In fact, the interesting parts of the world view have been laid out, and the protagonist has also seen and experienced high-level battlefields. The more you look at it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. If you want to decipher the deep world view game, increase the information density and shorten the next four hundred chapters to two hundred chapters. If you want a more enjoyable story, give it to the protagonist and use the discipline skills. Either way will work. In the end, the second half was so exciting that I couldn't find it, and there were no rules to abide by. A little bit was enough for two or three chapters, and I felt sorry for the money when I clicked the next page. To sum it up, the first part is good, but the writing is terrible. I suggest you watch Art Building Battlefield and Run Away. Giving this book to AI and condensing and deleting the second half will probably increase my rating a lot.

9.0/10 I added 0.1 Points to the false high. In fact, it should not reach 9, but this book does write some of the things I ideally want to write. The Zongwang system is not explained. The main part of the book is the Mantra Master system. This part is written quite perfectly. The climax of the plot is slightly lacking, but the details of life and farming are remarkable. Well worth seeing

Rating 7.0/10 Very standard astronomy The protagonist's personality is okay, and the main world is concentrated in a few high-level martial arts worlds. There are two major shortcomings. One is that the first three chapters were not written well. The first world slowly started to look better. Another problem is that the second half is a bit repetitive. But the good news is that the plot has been pushed forward, so this problem is not a big problem. After all, this book does not force the plot to drag out the word count. Generally speaking, normal, standard food and grass In fact, you can consider rewriting the first few chapters.

7.5/10 40K fan, I recommend reading the author's previous book and then this one The overall evaluation is that there is no big problem The protagonist, as a master in the psychic field, changed the fate of Angron and the empire. A small problem is that the whole book is peaceful in the later stages, lacking a sense of surprise, and feels a bit like writing about daily life in a straightforward way. The Great Rebellion is like a hanging knife. When the knife falls, everything becomes dull. Overall, no issues and worth a look

Lu Mingfei returns from 40k One of the more eye-catching books in the universe by Lu Mingfei The first half of the book is 8/10, the middle and late chapters are 6/10, and the ending is well received. The overall score is 7.2/10, Which is a good book with obvious flaws. The author's writing talent is good, the details are appropriate, the narrative rhythm and description are remarkable. But the problem with this book is also very obvious. The original plot line in the middle period has serious plot control problems-how many times are you going to use this Tzeentch (throw) It wouldn't be so bad if someone else did it. This problem was not solved until the end. Then there is the issue that the entire book frequently requires the Emperor to personally micro-manage to rescue the situation, which inevitably makes people feel that this is a trance. Well, there's not much to say, it's just going back and forth to trance. However, 40k fans may be more resistant to this problem. Everything else is a minor problem, not a big one Now I'm curious which Dragon Clan fanfic can give Dad Lu a good ending?

8.5/10 The story of land warfare across the Soviet-German line in World War II Very small It's a book with obvious shortcomings and advantages. The advantage is that it should be written well, and everything is written very well. There are many small shortcomings, including but not limited to the problem of haircutting, the problem of inappropriate jokes often written, some detail problems caused by writing too fast, and the problem of too much respect for the original history and lack of plot surprises. However, all the flaws are not hidden! The advantages of this book are sufficient to cover these issues All in all, it's worth seeing

8.6/10 A simple story about penetrating the world and feeding back reality in Meat Pigeon Pretty good Whether it is the laying out of the world view or the construction of fantasy, it is very good, and the initial life experience of the protagonist is very well designed. Maintaining the same style and characteristics Of course, the shortcomings are as obvious as the advantages The main plot is too thin, and the real-life protagonist who has been affected by the protagonist many times in the online meat pigeon himself does not intervene or know about it. A lot of fun points were wasted Too many meat pigeon mechanisms increase the difficulty of reading Ah, don't worry about these details, Sic Niang has already presented a perfect script By the way, I enjoyed watching the extra episode, it's very good

8.5/10 I don't know when Tam will be able to come back and continue writing books. His departure is a great loss to the fandom Pirate Galen, as one of his representative works, is very traditional and classic ps: This book was written earlier and is written in French in the tradition of multiple female protagonists. If you don't like it, don't read it.

8.7/10 An MC player comes to Middle-earth, and a god leaves this world Very good Middle-earth and MC fanfic In terms of enjoyment, it has both the epic feel of Middle-earth and the joy of farming in MC. From an architectural point of view, the combat power of MC without redstone automation does not appear to be exaggerated and powerful in Middle-earth, but it is just right. The writing was slightly lacking in the early stages, but it gradually got better after a hundred chapters, and many of the descriptions were very interesting. This is a book that can be enjoyed by fans of light novels, farming MC, or Middle-earth lovers (but you must have at least watched the Lord of the Rings movie). It is highly recommended.

6.2/10 Rating The front part is pretty good. Although the characters are written too fast and the lunch boxes given to some supporting characters are a little sloppy, it is still a very good framework and story overall. The biggest problem is that I like to use the concept of time too much. The concept of time is something that needs to be used with caution. If you play with it too much, it will become the author's trance. Anyway, everything can be solved with time. The entire book begins to completely collapse when the concept of the Mist Realm is introduced. The most attractive plot of this book (watching the protagonist crack the rules of a dead end) is gone, leaving only a bunch of identity dolls of Riddlers lining up to guess riddles. The plot is boring, the script has no meaning, and the story line is a mess. Let's just say that the final script of Wuji really didn't feel interesting. What's even more frightening is that the author was immersed in his own writing and was so excited. I really don't know how many people besides the author could really understand the ending of this last paragraph. The forced ending of the last 50 chapters is even more of a disaster. It might as well be an open ending. Overall, the Wuji script is the essence of this work and worth reading. The last paragraph and the ending riddle are not recommended to be read.

8.6/10 Book title fraud Total fraud (>﹏<) In fact, the style is a little bit worse than Ke Qiyuan's version of "Walking to Immortality" The summary of the plot of the whole book is to eliminate demons and filth To be honest, the plot line was well arranged, and the ending also met expectations. What the author does very well is knowing how much pen and ink to use where, so the whole book is very comfortable to read. It's not considered an invincible style. It's not an invincible style if you fight your old enemy and don't crush him.

7.5/10 Better than expected The outline is perfect and the ideas are clear Explores the impact of some narrative layers on the multiverse The shortcoming is that the writing style is slightly lacking There's nothing particularly great about it, and there's nothing particularly bad about it either. It's a decent book, and the overall reading experience is pretty good.

6.3/10 I didn't finish it, so I abandoned it around 350. Considering that there shouldn't be any big poisonous spots later, I put it up. It's tasteless. It looks good at first glance, but the more you look at it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. There are too many problems. Advantages: The Tibetan Buddhism copy is well written, both the rhythm and character are very good, the taste is also very positive, and the plot is also good. Overall, the book's description of supernatural aspects is quite good. It is worth reading for the supernatural and Tibetan copies. Then there are shortcomings 1. The design of the plug-in cannot be scrutinized. The simulator is very powerful and awesome. It has low limits and low consumption. It can bring out the real thing and can refresh points infinitely. It can stop when using ultra-high magnification. The protagonist can't use such an awesome thing well. 2. Supernaturals are classified, but the description is confusing. Confusion is right. Blurring the levels of supernatural beings is a common technique in supernatural literature, but the confusion in this book is also to suppress the protagonist's level. Don't look at the protagonist adding a bunch of buffs, skills, equipment and techniques every time, haha, I've given you a level boost, anyway, the description is vague, and you won't be allowed to use it when you really fight monsters. 3. The plot design is very average and the rhythm is seriously out of control. 4. A large paragraph of hydrology, which can be read ten lines at a time without missing the plot. 5. Personality and strength do not match. The Tibetan dungeon has already lifted the protagonist's personality to the sky. Based on that description, I felt that the protagonist was close to the limit of mortals. Then I turned around and hit a ghost in reality and started struggling again. The battle was all based on the author's nonsense. After eating so many buffs and learning so many rituals, I had to wait for the NPC to push the key points. I could only watch the animation. Too passive This is the vagueness of the supernatural classification that I mentioned before 2, so the author can reduce the classification at will. It is recommended to read until the end of Tibetan Esotericism

7.0/10 The title of the book is fraudulent, it should be called the Convent of the New Saint The writing is very good. If this book were to be filled in with some details on bz, I would call it a god among gods and it would be sung for generations. But no, this is a starting point novel The main plot is a little bit substandard. You can't see the myth or Cthulhu. There were too many female protagonists later on, which resulted in a large number of early female protagonists having no role to play. Several female supporting characters in the middle and later stages also had some problems with their arcs, and there was no room to make up for them. The finale... Let's land smoothly Of course, the core of this book is the emotional drama of the small male protagonist, which is really well done. As a warning, the male protagonist wearing a doppelganger and getting on the bus counts as one, and nothing else (is this the author's obsession? I always feel that this plot design is completely unnecessary) Overall, I still enjoyed watching it, and it felt a bit like a strange dislocation of eating the best takoyaki in a steak restaurant.

6.0/10 Warning: The protagonist's stance is Neutral Evil (Absolute Evil). If you cannot accept this rare stance, please open this book with caution. Tasteless I just finished reading the first copy of the Conan volume, and my reaction is amazing. The simple and neat copy processing, clear ideas and unique writing style. Although there are some problems with scene switching, it is not harmful. Then the second copy started to realize the problems with this book. There were really a lot of problems. First, the high-level games are all stereotyped, and they are all Riddlers under absolute sanity. The positive characters have a certain affection for the protagonist for almost no reason and then are betrayed. In other words, according to the author's underlying logic, the good old man in this book should be betrayed. Secondly, the main character's purpose is nihilistic, and he only becomes stronger for the sake of becoming stronger. Compared with the main line of Siyang's book that clearly runs through the early and middle stages of being a human being, this book does not have a main line at all, which is a very fatal problem. Thirdly, the copy has no charm in the description of the characters in the original world, but the description of the power system is more delicate and brilliant. In particular, the protagonist's research and hobby of alchemy is the part of this article that is really worth reading. Fourth, the writing style is too dry and hard, making reading a bit tiring, and the writing style needs to be further improved. This problem is particularly serious when combined with the second point. All in all, this book is a provocative book. If you accept the position of the neutral and evil protagonist and accept this style of writing, you can eat it as hay.

8.0/10 To be honest, it's okay, a story about saving the world in an endless world. It can be seen that the author put his heart into it The main problem is actually the first book. Because it is too close to the realistic background, it requires extremely high writing skills to control. The author is obviously far from that level of writing. So the first version is the one that shows the least ideal performance, which is a pity. This subject matter is really difficult to write about, and I don't have a particularly good plan. I can only say that my writing skills need to be improved.

The first 2 million words 8.2/10 The last 1.8 Million words failed It's a more traditional feeling of gradually getting stronger through different world systems. The settlement copy will slightly raise the level, which feels good. I really like the author's own evaluation. The first 1 million words are full of inspiration. From 1 million to 2 million words, it's a natural progression. I don't know what to write after that. The good news is that you can choose which scripts to read. Since each script is re-developed using a new system, skipping scripts will basically not affect your reading (just don't skip Naruto) Again, this author is really suitable for writing unlimited variety comics. Even though this is his first variety comic, he chose some unpopular copies and stepped on a few minor mistakes, but overall it is still on the level. (Then if you think your grades are good, write an original book and reward yourself with a sudden death) It is recommended to read until the end of the main volume of Naruto If you like Magic Forbidden City, you can read the next article I hope it has a beginning and an end or if you like Bleach very much, you can read the main volume of Bleach (it is no longer recommended) Okay, don't continue reading and skip to the ending.

8.9/10 Legend of the Five Emperors: Emperor Yan If you haven't read the previous books, I don't recommend reading them. I watched the previous ending of Legend of the Five Emperors and it was quite enjoyable. The overall level is still up to standard. The final ending is a bit disappointing, but it doesn't matter if you think about the yellow chicken

8.1/10 Double penetration, prehistoric The author has many ideas and has successfully implemented them. Some of the ideas are very interesting, and the whole book is indeed worth reading. However, the entire second half of the book is too depressing! It is an extremely depressing atmosphere from the middle stage to the ending. On top of the depressiveness, the rhythm is out of control and the Conferred God line is almost not enjoyable. This makes the whole second half of the book very uncomfortable. After all, the novel needs to be rhythmic and refreshing before you can read it. Some people in this chapter think that this book has a lot of female supporting characters. I can only say that it is lucky that there are a lot of them, otherwise the atmosphere would be even more depressing. I hope that when writing the next book, the author can write his own ideas while considering the readers' needs for reading pleasure. If you need to write about this feeling of being in control, it is okay to use it as the tone of a large chapter, but it is really inappropriate as the tone of the whole book. For general readers, I personally recommend reading until the end of the first death disaster.