My Girlfriend Is the Moon Goddess Chang'e

Traditional urban writing is a bit toxic, with a lot of common urban writing routines, and the handling of emotional issues. It is too accommodating, breaks off when it is necessary, does not take the initiative when liking it, and always thinks about the woman taking the initiative. The most important thing is that every heroine feels that the protagonist is just greedy for beauty, but does not actively pursue it... But other problems are not big. If the author can write more emotionally, this will be a good book.

After reading the resume, I don't want to read it anymore. The author is purely a kindergarten class. Tell me why Sun Wukong is still in his infancy?

I really wanted to read it patiently, but it's a pity that the author didn't let me

Others are acceptable, just meet Liu Bei. But he pretended to be a strong villain and fucked his own woman as a surprise, and after the foreplay, he revealed his real body only after the ship entered the harbor... Even if it is an old book, it is really too poisonous.

The protagonist is a 155mm self-propelled gun, which can hit wherever it goes.

If you have the ability, let Qidian block my account, MD

Stallion novel Will the mother-in-law be shy when seeing her son-in-law? Even if you want to see the harem, don't write everything, okay? Some are good, but some are just disgusting.

To be honest, the Tang Monk in this book is too cowardly. Although the same is true in the original book, I still like the one on TV. At least he is really kind to monkeys. Don't tell me about the times he called the Great Sage away. Tang Seng is just a mortal, and it's normal not to see monsters. You, Black Buddha Lord, can speak, but please say goodbye to the four Black Masters and Disciples. I grew up watching the 1986 version and the CCTV animated version of Journey to the West, and I really like the relationship between the master and the apprentice.

The plot is very exciting. I was originally worried that the mobile phone system would not be able to support the traditional fairy structure, but overall the author has a good grasp. But there are really too many female protagonists, and they should be purified. I always feel that 7 of Sir Wei's heroines are the perfect number. I still feel a little sad when I see that police belles and military belles have been written out by the author.

It took me about a week to read the entire book, and now I will share my thoughts. The author used Journey to the West as the main reference material to write this book. I have to admit that the author is very courageous. After all, the mainstream uses the list of gods as the main reference. Therefore, once it comes to this aspect, it is very uncomfortable to watch. Typical, for example: Tathagata and Sanqing are in the same realm, but Zhunti and Yin have no role. Nezha's rebirth is the work of the Tathagata of the West. These are just two obvious questions, and other big and small questions cannot be raised in a short while. I hope the author will do detailed homework when writing such articles in the future. I have no objection to you using Journey to the West as your core reference, but please pay more attention to some common sense things. Finally, I hope you write better and better.