Devil's Cage

There are reasons why this book was unsuccessful. The protagonist's personality is the same for a hundred chapters. The copy is still accurate. (Too small to medium). Main character. Written messily in the city. There are too many copy pits. Still in elementary school. The main line is chaotic. . Read 600 chapters. I don't want to read it. This book will make people read a bit...

Tell me your thoughts I can't remember how long I chased the Devil's Cage. At first, I just thought it was fun to watch the protagonist pretending to be cool and smart. Later, I watched the protagonist walk through dungeons one after another. Each dungeon is a story. Fei Long's writing style can really make people think of those things. The scene is as beautiful as a picture scroll, the huge city and the characters in the dungeon are each so vivid and vivid that you can't let go of them. Colleen and Maggie, these two people who have gone through life and death with Qin Ran in the novice dungeon, I still hope to appear again until the end, the strong and heart-wrenching queen Mary, the hidden queen. The last Knight of the Dawn who hides in the darkness, Ann Rutledge Oken, a smart and cute strong woman who likes to flirt with Kieran, Nicolette, the "god on earth" who is infinitely powerful in the dungeon world, and her cat, Meyer who likes to fight to help Kieran, the righteous Sheriff Shi Qi and the righteous policeman who protects the city. The Heroic Iron Fist Barrel even includes the cute Snow Wolf, Little Fire Crow, the hard-working Bloody Mary, the indomitable Lionheart Badge, the rhino's wild soul that keeps moving forward, and the big sword "Arrogant Words" that dares to kill everyone and can turn the tide every time. Little Spider, I can't bear to part with them all. There are too many regrets in the book. I have been reading online articles for a long time and have completed countless books, but few have made me so sad. The ending of this book should not be like this. He could be better and capable of better. No matter what the reason is that the later plot is so tight that the story that could have been told turned into a regret, but this is a good book that left a deep impression on me. It made me laugh out loud and made me cry. I hope the author can work hard and pay attention to your health.

I fell into this trap because the book list said that IQ online male protagonist has a high IQ and is cool... After hundreds of chapters, I already have a headache. 1. The dialogue is often very abrupt, and it likes to divide what a person says into three paragraphs into a dialogue format that makes people confused. There are even places where the person who said these three sentences is not indicated - Feelings, are you asking me to do reading comprehension? 2. The only ones with online IQ are friendly NPCs and friendly players. Hostile players and NPCs are like mentally retarded ones. The weaker ones try their best to send equipment, while the stronger ones are given unlimited opportunities to be counter-killed 3. Too many bugs, such as tracking a tire mark on the road and the protagonist's perception skills. The enemy is always SSS, enemies of the same level and friendly forces, only friendly forces can detect the protagonist's stealth And the most important bug: the protagonist has no plug-ins, his IQ can only be said to be average, and he started the game as an ordinary person with no one to guide him. Why is he so much better than others? Is it just luck? Although the protagonist's luck is really good, he feels good when he bets his life for a while, and feels good all the time. Also, the habit of showing off internally after the plan (by chance?) Is successful is really not what a smart person should do, and it can easily cause discomfort.

Turns out to be a eunuch! So many holes left unfilled! I wasted 3 days! See 70%! ! If I had known, I would have drawn the ending earlier😆😆

It was originally a very good story, but by the 300th or 400th chapter, it felt like the author had changed. Isn't the main line of treatment the disease? Why become stronger. In order to become stronger, the author also wants to abandon the main plot, and forcibly trample the main plot from one to two by using the method of death if the mission is not completed. That terminal illness was written two hundred chapters ago, as if it was as if he would die tomorrow if he didn't raise enough money to treat it today. Now let's bring up a less urgent matter. It's okay to forcefully change the main plot, but the main thing is the plot. The plot of (Queen's Shield) simply ruins all the good impressions you had in the past. The plot feels like it's being forced out of your mind, and it's so confusing that you don't know what you want to do. Could it be that the entire plot world is actually a foreshadowing of the same world? It's a good idea, but you're too hasty. I ignored the main line pit ahead and wanted to dig another main line pit without taking two steps. What do you want to do?

Let's talk about the advantages first 1. The IQ of the protagonist, supporting characters and the villain boss is online. The villain's IQ is offline without meeting the protagonist. There are scenes of pretending to be slapped in the face but they don't make people feel uncomfortable 2. The plot in the copy is well controlled, the contradictions are not obtrusive, the description of the intellectual battles is delicate, and there are traces to follow, making it suitable for careful reading 3. The character's dealing style is clean and neat, and the copy is not procrastinating. He has an outstanding personality and is decisive in killing. He can't move his legs without seeing a woman. The description of the school bus is quite good. One of the four spies will pass the test if he is found. If I am not a spy, I will knock down all the other three Of course, the shortcomings are also obvious 1. The power system collapses, from the delicate data flow in the early stage to the crushing flow, and the settings of life and physical strength are basically hidden. This is especially obvious in the prisoner dungeon that resembles a delicacy. The evaluation of the dungeon becomes more and more weird as the power system collapses 2. The main plot line is pushed too slowly, which is also the main reason for the collapse of the power system. The witch and the broker are still in a fog when they are written. In less than 10 copies, the divine fire has been ignited, and the boss's wife fainted in the toilet from crying 3. Pai's lines are repeated a bit too often 4. There are obvious changes in the character setting. Let me say a few more words about this. There is nothing wrong with adding a foodie setting to the protagonist, and it also deepens the reader's impression of the protagonist. But, in the middle period, you added a setting to the protagonist, and changed the gender of the supporting character. Next, it seems that you will change the lawless character. Feilong, didn't you write an outline? In general: The beginning of the chapter on Immortals provides food for the middle and late stages. Please ignore the weird background setting at the beginning. It is suitable for relieving boredom during the book shortage. ps: At the current pace, I feel that Feilong may have to write for several years before he reaches the dungeon difficulty level 30.

Author... Please fix the typos quickly. . . It has affected reading.

I forgot that there are only 28 days in February, and all 11 monthly votes were lost before I voted 😭😭😭

I just read a few chapters, it was pretty good, but when will the mimosa appear?

Wuwuwu, the book I have been chasing for a long time is finished Wuwuwu, I am so touched QAQ Long Da needs to take good care of his health.

As a doctor, I have to give the author some advice. Since reading this book, the author has almost always taken leave because of physical discomfort caused by excessive eating. This is a very bad habit, especially when you are also heavier. You may not notice it when you are young, but repeated exposure can easily lead to erosive gastritis, gastric ulcer, HP infection, cholecystitis, pancreatitis, enteritis, etc. These diseases themselves are relatively troublesome to treat, have a greater impact on your health, and are more likely to lead to cancer. And long-term overeating can easily lead to three highs. In addition, the author's profession itself is sedentary and less active, and cardiovascular and cerebrovascular diseases caused by three highs will also follow. So you really need to eat properly, avoid overeating, and keep exercising. The most suitable exercise for you now should be swimming, and running and playing ball should be avoided. I also hope that everyone can stand up and let the author see it. I am really worried that the author will collapse like this.

In fact, I am on the side of the little queen in so many CPs. Although it is a copy, this is what a real couple should look like. . . . . . What do you think? Do it first as a courtesy, woof!

There are already 1,700 chapters. Ha, there are so many chapters.

This is a fake ending, hurry up and write a fake ending to pretend it's over, wait for the limelight to pass, and then continue serialization, or just make a Cage 2 and finish it. It must be like this, hahahaha, I'm so smart, hahahahahaha, the Devil's Cage is not finished yet, hahaha, this is a fake ending, hahahahahaha, let me go, I'm not crazy, hahaha, I still have to wait for the serialization! !

I really don't understand why the protagonists in today's novels always smile bitterly and are embarrassed? You smile bitterly when you eat, smile bitterly when you walk, and smile bitterly when you kill. Are you all from the Qidian bitter smile training class?

I can't even cure my disease. I'm addicted to games and can't extricate myself.

Does anyone know? I don't even know what fan title I got 🤭

I've even seen "Volume 11". . . The protagonist's illness has not been cured yet, and not even a year has passed. . . I forgot about the treatment table. . . Also, this level is weird. . . . A Z or V comes out from behind SSS. . . . Weird. . . . 😳😳😳😳. The above is pure nonsense ///////////////////// I think this book is quite good 🤠🤠🤠🤠

It's okay to watch it without thinking

I've tried hundreds of cards but I can't get one. Legendary equipment adds 1 to each attribute. Isn't it smart to write a book? Pure white text

Counting the copies so far

In fact, there could be more supporting characters in the book. People who came into contact with the protagonist when he was weak later found out that those supporting characters did not become stronger when the protagonist became stronger, and they were already so strong. You think it is ridiculous or not.

I want to know if the protagonist's final illness is explained?

The first chapters are really well written, but I don't know what to say in the following chapters. They are all about eating, eating, eating. 😅😅

The power system is too confusing, the witch dies too quickly, people can be resurrected after death, has the protagonist's terminal illness been cured, and is Steinbeck a boy or a girl?

This book has changed since the middle period. On the one hand, the writing has become very poor, the plot progress is dragging, and the writing style is getting better and better; on the other hand, the plot has become full of a lot of "you are given a pillow when you want to sleep" style plot. In the early stage, the protagonist is using the limited resources in his hand to survive. From the middle stage, it is "the plot serves the resources that the protagonist already has in his hand". There is no battle of wits and courage, and groups of transportation captains send the protagonist various resources needed for his upgrade.

The novel that Brother Jiu recommends to you today is called "The Devil's Cage". It is a hodgepodge, including infinity, systems, games, and data. Brother Jiu thinks that this book can satisfy the requirements of many readers. Regarding this book, it is the last work that Brother Jiu mentioned just now that builds a copy background world by itself. Brother Jiu has to say that the construction is very good. Moreover, Brother Jiu admires his world-building technique most, which is not just a simple long paragraph description. He uses the story characters, that is, the NPC's behavior style, dialogue and other aspects to fill in the world. This technique brings readers a reading experience that is full of realism and texture. · · Another one is that the author's setting of the climax is very high. The climax of a novel is a very broad definition. Usually in infinite novels, the reader's climax is usually when the protagonist defeats the big boss and gains huge profits. But in fact, the expectation for the completion of the novel's copy world can also be regarded as a manifestation of climax. In this novel, the author's use of this writing technique is very appropriate, because the background of the dungeon world is constructed by the author himself, so the author can conduct in-depth exploration again after completing the experience of the dungeon world. The advantage is that on the one hand, it can further improve the dungeon world, and on the other hand, it can leave big story buttons that attract readers according to its own ideas, and enhance readers' interest in reading. Based on the reader's interest, when the reader enters the world again, it meets the reader's expectations, and to a certain extent, it is also a climax. The last point is Brother Jiu's personal guess. It is very convenient for the author to build a duplicate world that appears many times. It may be related to the ending of the novel. · · Also, the author has created the characters of the novel very well. The protagonist has a normal IQ and is neither a genius nor an idiot, which is in line with the common sense of book lovers. The character of the protagonist will be a little extreme and adventurous because of his identity. This is also deliberately shaped by the author in order to conform to our common sense of life, which is very reasonable. The author also pays great attention to the creation of supporting characters. Even a small character in the dungeon world has its own characteristics. The benefit of the reading experience it brings to readers is that it is highly recognizable and easy to distinguish. · · The last thing I want to say is the flaw of this book. Jiu Ge's spoken language is that there is no perfect work in the world. Don't you see that even the four famous works have been criticized by our experts and scholars. Although this book is very good, it also has flaws, that is, the author's grasp of the game data is not accurate enough. I don't need to say more about this. Anyway, for readers who are sensitive to data and have high requirements, it will definitely affect the reading experience, but for the vast majority of book lovers, this problem should be regarded as whether or not

The author wrote this book when the rules of reality still bound the author! The essence of the world is power! Only those with equal strength can have equal respect. Obviously the author ignored this point in the book. In the book, a police station is not qualified to be taken seriously by the protagonist.

It's that novel that makes me so addicted to games that I can't even cure my illness.

The original copy is good, but the writing style needs to be improved.